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serat

@serat

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Posted: 12 years ago

#121

Originally posted by: sabakhan16

8 may ko..

8 may 😭
chalo theek 8 may tak intzaar karte hai
agar isse pehle aap free ho to next chap update kar daina

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SNOWWHITE83

@SNOWWHITE83

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#122

hi sab...

read all chapters.
amazing and beautifully
written. 👏
keep it up.
continue soon.

😃

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Saba khan

@sabakhan16

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#123

Originally posted by: anjuroopak
hi sab...

read all chapters.
amazing and beautifully
written. 👏
keep it up.
continue soon.

😃

thnx for liking it...glad that you liked it..once again thank u very much..😃😃

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Saba khan

@sabakhan16

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#124

first of all sorry for the late update😔
secondly Rsaakka , Skaliya176 , harika04angel , Karkit , serat , Marooshmalik , roopali15 , huma12. , snowdream all of you thank you very much for liking chapter15😊...
wish you all will like it...and plz ignore my mistakes..
CHAPTER16
U:i love you too,princess..i love u too..
saying this he starts kissing her neck,bitting her neck..
m:uday plz..
u:sshh..no princess..not tonight..tonight i only want to love u..feel u..make u mine forever..
m:i'm already yours and only yours..i don't understand why u think that there is something between karan and me...
u:no..princess...i can't...i can't...if there is something between you two,i'll die..i will die...
m:sshh..don't say so..if you die,i also will die..death will be better than live a life without u..i can't live without you..
U:itna payer karti ho humse..
m:isse bhi jayada
uday hugs manyata very tightly..
m:of..uday saans nehi leparaha hoon..
u:sorry...
When someone knock the door...
Uday breaks the hug...
u:i'll check..
manyata nods..
uday opens the door..
m:kon hai..
someone:hum hain..karan
m:tum..
Karan goes to manyata and says:haan hum..tum pagaal hoon kya..kissi ko na bataye hi yaha chali aye..
Uday with anger:que aapko puch k ana chahiye tha..
k:i didn't mean it??
m:offo tum dono feerse shoro maat ho jao...plz
u:haan..or abh jaah..
k:hum jane k liye nahi aye hai..
u:toh que aya hain??
k:hum manyata ko bhez ne k liye aye hain..dadisaabh unhai pagaalo ki tarha dhun rahain hain..
u:toh princess..dadisaabh ko phn kar k kah do ki tum aaj yahi raho gi..
k&m:what??pagal ho gaye hoon kya??
K:uday abhahi manyata ko jane do..warna problem hoon jayega...samajh ne ki koushish karo..
m:haan..uday abhamai chalnah chahiye..
uday nods and say:chalo hum apko palace poucha dete hain
k:manyata bachi nahi hain bho akailaihi chali jaye gi..or hum ai aapse kuch kaam hai..
m:haan uday hum chale jayenge..
u:are u sure??
manyata nods in affermation and leaves...
u:haan kya hain??
k:manyata ko maaf kardiya naah??
u:haan..koye problem hain tum hain??
k:nahi..
U:yahi kaam tha??
k:nahi..
u:toh??
k:tum hain humse kya problem hain..
u:humye neendh araha hain..i need to sleep..
k:nahi bro..aaj nahi...agar aaj humari problem solve nahi karai toh kabhi nahi karpayenge...
u:humye karna bhi nahi hain..
k:or humye janna hain que nahi karnah chah te hain??
u:que ki humye aapko pasaandh nahi hain
k:que?
u:que ki..choro
k:nahi choor saakhta??akhi toh bhai hain..usshain kaise chor chakta hoon??
u:aapna ye brotherhood ka drama kahi or jake karo??
k:i don't understand tumhain humara payer que drama lagta hain..
u:que ki drama hi toh karte hoon tum..saabh tumhain pasaandh karte hain..dad hamesha kahte hain karan k jaisa bano..yaha taak ki princess ki roka bhi tumse tai howa tha..
k:par maine bho roka hone nahi dia..que ki humye pata tha ki tum hai manyata pasandh tha..
u:wahi to..hamesha tumhain dekhana hota hain tum kitne mahaan ho..
k:aisa kabhi nahi tah..
u:aisahi tha...
k:tumse baath karna bekar hain..
u:humnai nahi kaha tha ki humse baath karo..khudh aye theh..
k:f9..am leaving..
karan leaves

Edited by sabakhan16 - 12 years ago