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Saba khan

@sabakhan16

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Posted: 12 years ago

#101

Originally posted by: roopali15
Hey pls can u updat today pls
and update shld be romantic

actully mera exam kaalse soro honai jaraha hai..so i'll try😔

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serat

@serat

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#102

Originally posted by: sabakhan16

thank you for liking it...

ur welcome😊
plzzz
updateee
nexttt
chappp
soonnn😊

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Saba khan

@sabakhan16

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#103

CHAPTER15
Manyata wakes up with a sad face...
manyata to herself
m:que manyata que???kya jaroorat thi karan k baath sunnai ki..abh sooch uday ko kaise manayega...
Humai nahi laagta uday maangaya hoga😔ek kaam karti hoon unnati ko puchn ti hoon...
Manyata calls unnati
U:hello..manyata
m:haan mai...uday ka gussa thanda howa?
u:aah..nahi
m:aabhi thak nahi
U:kaal raat ko gussa howa hai...waqt to lagai ga na
m:mai issai jaya da time nahi dai saakh ta...
u:que??
m:paata nahi humai assa nahi lagraha..
u:toh aye baath hai
M:kya baath hai?
u:you are in love...manyata
m:aisa kuch nahi hai
u:really?
m:yes really...
u:aapne dil sai pucho..hamaea dada itna boora bhi nahi hai...
m:shut up or bolo kaise ussai manaye
u:udaynewash
jao..or dada ko i love u kaah do..dekhna gussa appnai aap utar jaye ga
m:unnati..seriously koye solution do na
u:i'm serious..or waise bhi tum maano ya na maano tum hai dada sai payer ho gaya hai or dada bhi tum sai boohat payer kar tai hai
m:such kahrahai ho na ki uday bhi humsai payer kar tai hai??
u:such mai dada tum sai boohat payer kar tai hai
m:ok..you sure naah? It'll work.
u:i'm 100 percent sure..
m:ok bye
u:bye..bhabishaab
m:bye☺️
now manyata is taking her breakfast...after finishing her breakfast she goes to her room and starts getting ready...
she wears this:http://t2.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcR-BUVawL-4susYqZgG7im3r6vFNGsVwJxIwQ8RH6Z5XCRFHn0wGsRQcQ
She is ready for going to uday's place
in the night...
Manyata starts driving her car without telling anyone about this...
she reachs udaynewas
manyata goes to the Receptionist...
m:kya aap humai yuvraj uday veer ka kamra konsa hai bata sakh ti hai?
R:sorry..ma'am..aaj unka kisi saibhi milnai k mode mai nahi
m:aap baas ek baar kahiye ki manyata aye hai
r:sorry..ma'am
M:ak baar puch nai mai kya jaye ga??
akash comes...
A:what happened?
r:sir yea laki uday sir se milna chah te hai
Akash sees manyata..
A:monia..
m:akash..
a:tum yaha kya kar rahi ho
m:akash bho mai..
chikki comes..
c:monia...oh my god
and hugs her...
m:kaise hai toh
c:mai bilkul thik ho..par sorry monia bho akash..
m:it's ok year...or waise bhi mujhai pata chaal gaya hai ki mai akash se payer nahi karti thi..
c:such..
m:much..
a heavy manly tone comes:what's going on?
all turn and see it's uday
m:uday😃
U:manyata tum yaha is waqt..
m:haan..bho tumse hi milnai aye thi par tum hara receptionist ne tum harai kamrai mai nahi janai dia..
u:oh..chalo ander chalo..
manyata nods in affermation..and says bye to chikki and akash..
uday and manyata reach uday's room and uday opens it and manyata enters..uday also enters and closes the door...
u:itne raatko que aye...
manyata turns and goes to him and kiss him on his lip[normal kiss not liplock]
Uday was shocked...
m:sorry...aab toh maaf kardo...
uday with a smirk:itne jalde kya hai...saying this he starts coming close to her and she starts going back...
m:u.d..ay..
u:am hearing...and mayata stops..and
u:aab kaha jawo ge..
m:uday plz...
uday starts kissing her lip..first slowly slowly...then it grows in a passionate way...uday bites her lip..kiss her lip...slowly starts removing her dress...manyata is enjoying it fully and whispering:i love you uday..
u:i love you too,princess
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Sorry for all kind of mistakes which are done by me..😔 hope you'll like it..😊

Edited by sabakhan16 - 12 years ago

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angleroops

@angleroops

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#104

Really nice updat
thanks for updat
it was really very romantic
i hope in next updat
thoda detail me romantic updat dena plsss

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sanah12

@sanah12

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#105

an awesome update! Loved it.
It was a very romantic update.
Eagerly waiting for the next so update soon and thanks 4 the pm.

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serat

@serat

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#106

awsomeee
loved it!!!!
really good
❤️
❤️
niceee!!!!!!!

❤️

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Kritika

@Karkit

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#107

Wow gr8 update
manveer cnfesion its awesme
uday gussa n manyta cnvence very nice loved it
thanx 4 pm n cntinue soon

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Saba khan

@sabakhan16

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#108

Originally posted by: roopali15
Really nice updat
thanks for updat
it was really very romantic
i hope in next updat
thoda detail me romantic updat dena plsss

thnx for liking it😊

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Saba khan

@sabakhan16

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#109

Originally posted by: sanah12
an awesome update! Loved it.
It was a very romantic update.
Eagerly waiting for the next so update soon and thanks 4 the pm.

thnx for liking it😊