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pari vania

@pari_vania

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Posted: 12 years ago

#131

very nice awsome i really like it chapter 20 soon i read 19 chapter ok n i comment it ur 19 chapter ok but very nice story awsome plz update soon n pm please

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serat

@serat

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Posted: 12 years ago

#132

plzzz

update saba update next chappp

plzzz

updateee

plzzz

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Saba khan

@sabakhan16

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Posted: 12 years ago

#133

CHAPTER17
Manyata reachs devgardh palace
everyone is waiting for her...
ds:ayea beta
darte darte m:dadisabh bho hum..
u:princess hum nai dadisaabh ko bata di hain ki apko itne der kue lagi
ds:haan beta,uday ne humaiye bata di hain.agar apko unnati k saath kuch der rahna chahti thi to aj raat uday newash main raih ati.
U:ds humai laag raha hain ki princess bohaat tired hain.or raat bhi bohaat hochoki hain
ds:haan uday..tum thik kaah rahai ho
m:ds..
ds:bataiya beta
M:humai uday se kuch baath karni thi
ds looks at uday and with a smile she says:thik hain and she leaves
without any emotions uday says:kya baath karni hai aapko?
m:tum haam se aise kue baath kar rahi ho?
u:aapko yahi baath karni thi
m:nahi
U:toh kya baath karni thi?
m:mai soch rahi thi ki kue na tum mujhai date pe lai chalo??
u:kue karan nahi lejaye ga??
m:hum kue karan k saath date pe jaye..i love you too apne kaha tha toh date pe bhi aap hi laijang ge na..
u:humye kaal bohaat kaam hain
m:arai,kaat taak to koye kamm nahi tha,hamesha merai age pesai ghoom tai thain.ajj acha naak se bohat kaam karne lage.
u:humai bohaar neend araha hain,bye
m:uday plz hum se thik tarah sai baath karo
Without saying anything uday leaves
manyata:ghamandi kahi ka..agar usse humse baath nahi karni,toh humbhi koye marai nahi jarahai hain unse baath karne k liye
manyata goes to sleep
IN THE MORNING
In manyata's room
manyata open's her eyes and sees her room is filled with flowers
with a smile she says to herself:toh akaal a gaye gadhai ko
then she dails uday's number...
u:hello
m:hello,uday
U:haan bolo
m:thnk u
U:for what??
m:for sending this flowers..you know what they are excetly like u
u:bho kaise??
m:bho aise jaab tum aise payer se baath kartai ho tho bilkul in khille khille phool o kai je sai laag tai ho or jaabh gussa kartai ho toh yehi phool jaabh murjha jata hain taabh jaisa laagh ta hain vaise laage ho
u:ha..ha..ha[:-D]
m:haas kue rahai ho sach bool rahi ho..pata hain kaal to humari jaan hi nikal gaye thi[:-(]
U:sorry[:-(]
M:it's okay
u:jao lunch karlo..taiar bhi toh hona hain nah
m:lunch??
U:dopahaar k 2 baaj rahian hain
m:kya
she sees her clock
m:oh shit..koye humai bolaya kue nahi
u:hum nai mana kiya tha
m:kue?
u:raat ko apne bohaat late soya tha isseliye.jaye yeah lunch ki lijiya
M:okay,bye
U:bye,love you..kissy
m:bye
precape:manveer date

Edited by sabakhan16 - 12 years ago

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angleroops

@angleroops

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Posted: 12 years ago

#134

[FONT=Verdana]hey i thought u left the ff
but u r updating t
hanks a lot waiting for ur upadat[/FONT

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Kritika

@Karkit

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#135

Wow awesum update dear,
pahle manyata par uday gussa hona or fir us manana ws so cute n nice
love it
do pm me nxt time n this time update soon

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angleroops

@angleroops

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#136

HEY DEAR THE UPDATE WAS FAB

FIRST I WAS SAD THAT Y UDAY WAS BEHAVING RUDE

BUT AT MORNING HE DID FOR MANYATA WAS SO CUTE

PRECAP IS DHAMAKA

PLEASE UPDATE FAST THANKX FOR PM

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Sonia

@princessSonia

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#137

hey dear..🤗

hws u..??

i thought u discntd it..😳

anyways awesum update...👏

loved Manveer's convo...👍🏼

do cont soon...

precap seems interesting...😉

waitng to read furthr...

thnks 4 d pm..

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Saba khan

@sabakhan16

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#138

I'm f9.what's about u?
felt very happy that you liked it.and thnx for liking it.i'll update it very soon,sonia😊

Edited by sabakhan16 - 12 years ago

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Saba khan

@sabakhan16

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#139

Originally posted by: huma12.
awsssmmm update saba

thnx saba😃😃

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Saba khan

@sabakhan16

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#140

Originally posted by: roopali15
HEY DEAR THE UPDATE WAS FAB
FIRST I WAS SAD THAT Y UDAY WAS BEHAVING RUDE
BUT AT MORNING HE DID FOR MANYATA WAS SO CUTE
PRECAP IS DHAMAKA
PLEASE UPDATE FAST THANKX FOR PM

thnk you very much.i'll update the next chapter very soon😃

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