OS=**Teri Meri Kahani** ManVeer part-3(last) pg-22

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There lived a young handsome guy who was a born prince he had all in his life. What not he had, riches, comfort, big kingdom, girls around him, all branded stuff and not to mention power of royalty. He used all, he was proud and mis-used his power of being a royal, though he was a intelligent Young business man, a very successful and smart guy. He was a hard core playboy who only once slept with one girl never to see her again, just for his physical needs. This was his sketch for the world, but none knew the rite side of him. People said he has everything in his life, he needs nothing. In true sense he had nothing!!

He did not had Love in his life. 'Is a Life, a Life without love? When he was small he lost his mother, his father was a cold person who only taught him to be a prince or what his duties are to his people. He used to be sad at times but never became weak. He never had a belief in Love. It's fake, It's of no use 'he said!

But could he ever fell in love? Yeah! He did. It was love at first sight!

When will this signal open, said a frustrated udayveer. Come on Uday you can break this signal, after all you are a royal, he said and rushed breaking the signal and banging into a girl. Screeeccchhh!!! Came a loud sound, he pushed the bread hard to stop his car but had already banged, the girl collided with the car and fall down resulting her arms and knees hurt, it was not a major accident but the girl got minor wounds on her arms & knees. Uday quickly got out of the car and tried helping the girl. It looked like that she was a college girl because her books were fallen on the ground. He came near her and when he touched her he felt an unknown bond, a very ticklish feeling inside him. She was sitting on the ground facing her back to uday, very carefully caressing her wounds and crying in pain. Ahhh, aooo, ahh! Mummaa it's hurting. Uday instead of helping her was sitting beside her holding her one arm and listening to her murmuring, her voice was so sweet and melodious. Suddenly the girl realized that she was sitting in the middle of the road and most important who was that jerk who banged into her.

She then faced him and jerked off his hand from her arm. What the hell do you think of your self!! She yelled on him, while uday was just looking at her with a smile. He was admiring each and every inch of her beauty. Her dark brown hair till her chest, her hazel eyes shimmering in the sunlight, her slender body and glowing skin. Pari! These words escaped out of his mouth. While the girl was shed some tears she got nervous to see a man so close to her and the crowd scared her even more. Uday felt an urge to suck those escaping tears from those drowning eyes, he leaned closer to suck those pearls'she got more scared by his coming close to her in such a way, she was a very innocent girl, who instead of scolding or fighting with him for hurting her just cried in anxiousness and hurriedly neatened her clothes , picked up her books and left without saying anything to him! While uday was still standing in the same position, he was disturbed by the horns and people yelling at him, then he realized that he was standing in the middle of the road people gathered around him, the thing which made him sad was that she left and he didn't even asked her name.

All day and all night he dreamt about her. He was rolling on his bed continuously , wasn't able to sleep, the thing which had stolen his sleep was that innocent girl, when ever he closed his eyes her face came in his mind and those tears which he gave her, he momentarily hated himself for doing that to her'!

Uday's pov,

Why am I feeling so restless, she is just a normal girl like others, then whay I am attracted towards her to this much extent, why'what's happening to me, is this love,'what love, not possible, how can I fell in love that too just looking at her.

But the feeling she gave me was beyond joy! I felt like she is mine, only mine' I felt like sucking those tears'! God am I in love? Saying this he covered himself with the blanket'!

End of pov

Do you think he was able to sleep? Na!! a whole week he was restless day and night or we can say each and every moment of that time, until he decided to find her'first he thought just to ignore his feelings but after waiting for a whole week he couldn't control himself'he needed that girl he wanted her in his life, the one who made him this restless just in 5 minutes of a meeting!

Where did not he find her, every school, every college , every university'she seemed like to be a student, but where did she vanish he almost looked for her in whole Mumbai, but no sign of her'uday felt like crying! He was so much disturbed and by every passing moment his love for her was increasing!

Uday due to his restlessness for the girl got himself ailed'he got fever in tension, and silently cried in his room'pleading God to just give one glimpse of her.

He was so deeply in love with that unknown girl, because of her he was in such a bad condition and she was no where to be scene!

Will he ever find her?


It will be in three parts😳 this is the first, tell me if you all like it? i will be waiting for the response! do hit the like button and leave your comments! only then i will intend to continue😃 sorry if i bored you😭

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Zina

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Edited by -Zina- - 12 years ago
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it was awesome and super super duper beautiully written
can u please please update soon
aww poor udayveer he just so amzing
i loved the writing
please please update soon
loved this
awesome work zina 👏👏👏
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Originally posted by: vampire12345678

it was awesome and super super duper beautiully written
Thank you saira😳

can u please please update soon
will try too😛
aww poor udayveer he just so amzing
i loved the writing
thanks jani😊
please please update soon
loved this
awesome work zina 👏👏👏



thanks for the comment saira
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wowieee..😛 fantabulous update👏 Zinu so sweet n cute..😳
But I want happy ending of this OS K.😉
I jus hope Uday ko wo mil jaye..😳
Thanks for the wonderful OS N PM..😊 m not reading SS/FFs these days.. but I read it.. Beautifully written..👏 👏 👏 Do update next part ASAP.. I can't wait to read more..😊 toh jaldi update karo k..☺️
Great work..👍🏼
Lub u..🤗


Edited by Vasishtha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow Amazing start Zainab...you written all his inner turmoils beautifuly...only one glimpas of that girl disturbed him and made him so restless...eagerly waiting for its next part...
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i always like os more because these are short and easy to read fantastic superb work zainab and a exciting love story 👍🏼🤗thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome zainab.
Loved the concept.
Itni bechaini in just one meething.
Muuaah. Can not wait 2 read more.
Continue soon, thanks 4 pm.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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AWESOME os
loved it very much
I hope Udayveer finds his "pari"
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice re sis 👍🏼

Very sweet and beautiful!!! ❤️

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