OS=**Teri Meri Kahani** ManVeer part-3(last) pg-22 - Page 16

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mah.noor

wow zainab!
That was just amazing! Beautifully written!



thanks a lot😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
thanks all for the lovely comments!!
the last part will be posted!!

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this siggie is made for this OS, i am not able to post due to over size!!😭
view it on facebook!!

here i am with the last part of this os


That was a pure miracle, manyata's family was witnessing that, all were unable to understand it. Till then uday's best friend had arrived eith his father, they to witnessed the scene.

Soon they both were back to normal, they were safe and sound and everyone was really happy to see that.

The doctors allowed their families to meet them as they were out of danger now, every one rushed in and bombarded the two with questions, but were stopped by the doctors as they needed rest.

Manyata bhai ab to hath chor do apne room mate ka said her brother 'vijay. She quickly let his hand go and lowered her eyes, in shyness. Interrupting in uday took her hand back in to his and said' ye hath hum nay chornay kay liye nahi pakra' he said with a strict tone, and seriousness visible in his eyes!

Without wasting a mere second he got up and sat down the stretcher on his knees on which manyata was seated, he took the water bottle took off its cap and carefully broke it's ring, I know this is not worthy you, but still I am going to use this as I don't want to lose you. Will you give me the honors to make you my queen, will you marry me manyata? He presented her that bottles ring, and she chuckled at this.

She looked at her parents as for asking for permission, they happily nodded their head and she replied in a very shy way, YES!! And he slipped that ring into her finger, everyone clapped and were very happy to see them, they loved each other a lot!!

After a month when both were completely fine their marriage was fixed!

Uday always chipko fied to manyata with fevicol (sorry bad joke) she used to think if he is so possessive now what will happen after marriage, but still she loved him in all ways!

Finally the awaited day had come of their marriage, both were overjoyed, they were married proper rituals, after bidding by to her family they reached her susral, girls took her to the big room which was beautifully decorated with, roses, candles. They made her sit on the bed and walked out of the room, teasing her.

Uday was so impatient to see his pari, all the time she had that freaking ghoonagat covering her face, he hurriedly walked up to his room only to be stopped by the girls.

Ohh' no not again, girls move out of my way, now what do you want from me.

Itni jaldi kaise jane den, spoke manyata's elder sister, 'app yahan, hum to apko peechay chor ae thay. Ji bilkul, akhir apki wja say to hamrai shadi delay hogai, apko to bus meri behen ko apne sath lejana tha! She said teasing him.

Ab kia krien, hume apki behen say bay had pyaar hai, or wait word, yuvraaj udayveer singh ki dictionary main nai hai. He smirked.

Jaiye, meri behen ab apki hai, she left out his way!! Wo hamesha say meri hi thi, he winked and got in the room and locked it, without any more disturbance.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JGGIkkMOboM

(please listen this song in the background!! Its specially for this last part!!)

He walked to her, offered her his hand she gladly took it, took her near the window, slowly put her veil up' her heart beats were racing that it was easy to hear them.

She looked up at him, to meet his eyes, her face was shone more in the moon light, coming in the room from the window.

Ek din app yun humko mil jaen gay,

Phool hi phool rahoon main khel jaen gay,

Main nay socha na tha,

Ek din zindagi itni hogi haseen,

Jhume ga asmaan gaee gi ye zameen,

Main nay socha na tha,

He got hold from her waist, and brought her close to him, looking into each others eyes they started to dance gradually.

Dil ki dali pay kaliyaan si khilnay lagi,

Jab nigaheen nigahoon say milne lagi,

Slowly moving closer, her hands on his shoulders and his on her waist.

Ek din iss tarha hosh kho jaen gay,

Pas ae to madhoosh ho jaen gay,

Main nay socha na tha.

He moved down to kiss her throat, giving her high electric shocks, moving up kissing her forehead and removing the bindi, which had covered her forehead, then her beautiful big eyes one by one, she had shut her eyes tightly, looking at her beautiful face he opened her hair, making them fall down her shoulders, with the moving wind the moved, minimizing the distance between their lips he moved forward, just a centimeter apart, she quickly hugged him in shyness.

He hugged her back, as tight as he could, never to let go.

After hugging for maximum time, uday lifted her up in his arms and made their way to the beautifully decorated bed, strings of beautiful jasmine falling down with roses attached. It looked beautiful, just a romantic night awaiting for the two.

Laying her down and lying beside her, with his one arm under her neck and the other into hers.

Jagmagati hui jagti raat hai,

Raat hai ya sitaroon ki barat hai,

Ek din rahoon main apne liye,

Jal juthien gay mohabat kay itne diye

Main nay soocha na tha.

Moving down he claimed her lips and that night was the best night of their life, after a lot of hardships, their love was their as it was before.

Ek din zindagi itni hogi haseen,

Jhume ga asmaan gaee gi ye zameen,

Ek din app yun humko mil jaen gay,

Phool hi phool rahoon main khel jaen gay,

Main nay socha na tha.

Main nay socha na tha.

One year later they were blessed by a cute baby girl twins.

A complete family!!

Meet the two angles of UdayVeer and Manyata!!

One name Urvashi and the other Madhuri.

A U and M.

The End!!

Thanks a lot guys for reading!!

I hope you liked this love story, please ignore my mistakes.

Love you all a lot!!



Edited by -Zina- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Beautiful update Zainab.
Very interesting and well-written.
Loved Uday's proposal😳.
Using the ring of the bottle cap was very innovative👏.
The wedding scene and the suhaag raat was very sweet.
The picture of the twins was adorable.
Also ... good choice of names for them👍🏼.
It was the perfect ending to a wonderful OS😃.
Thanks for the PM😊.
Sorry about the late edit!
Edited by ...navina... - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow Awesome Update
Beautiful one
Uv proposing scene was very good
The song in de background was very good

The baby girls were too cute
Urvashi and Madhuri 😃

Such a beautiful OS
It was great to read it
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow this update was just awsome
a perfect ending to a perfect os
loved the way uday proposed her with the bottles ring
the shadi night was awsome
and finally their kids
how cute
really loved this os
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Posted: 12 years ago
so sweet
the kids are so awesome
and this is my fav song
loved the way uday proposed
so bichara he got irritated
i wish you continued it in a ss
but this is also ok
thx for the pm
u r awesome
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Posted: 12 years ago
yaay finally happy ending zinu baby 👏👏
i knw hvent commented it ages on ur updates
but like i tld u yesterday
hve so many pms
m confused frm wer 2 start...😕😕

so started wid urs...

Manveer scenes wer HOT...😳
loved them...❤️
nice os must say...☺️
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Posted: 12 years ago
bdw loved UV's unique way of proposal...😎

Edited by princessSonia - 12 years ago

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