Manveer OS - FORBIDDEN LOVE -VIEWBIE'S MESSAGE-p31

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Posted: 12 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: ...navina...

Haan , "SOUL-MATE" jo hoon 😳.

aaawww

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Posted: 12 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: sweet_gargi

Navi baby...I have to take tutions from you for making such lovely and out of the world plots. This one is better than the earlier one👏👏 and tell me whether it has a part 3 or not?😡..I need it😳 and m very serious about it...u might be able to understand this from the smiley.

Was it really better than the first? U saying that , makes me very happy. Yes - there is a part 3 ... and if it gets too long ; there might be a part 4😆. I see that u are very serious

... but I assure u of a HAPPY ENDING .

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: chitra_rao

navina this plot is even more interesting and awesome😳.

Thanx Chitra 🤗 .

Though I abhored Giriraj 🤢, what a sick pathetic man 😡, I seriously doubt if Uday is his son . Well , if u want I could change Uday's paternity ... but then this OS will not be an OS any more - it'll become an SS😉😆.

Very nicely modified navina 👏, thanks😊

continue soon 😊 ... hopefully on Thursday😃.

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: catty2000
Awesome OS 👍🏼
Very emotional 😭

Giriraj is so cruel, evil and pathetic 😡 I suppose he is a mental case 😡

Thanks Vidhi 🤗 .

Giriraj is not a mental case 😆 ... he's a POWER HUNGRY TYRANT who didn't want his son falling for someone that was beneath their status.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: saneha85

Navi... amaging update... love u for such great update...

Thanks SMITA 🤗 .
But angery as well because u did not pm me
I didn't think that u would be interested in reading an OS😕.

piz pm me whenver u wright any thing

In future ... I WILL .

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Posted: 12 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: angelina6
navi zara me apni Thames/Nile river bahalo fir comment karti hoo 😭

Theek hain ... ja , bahalo !!! Phir wapas aana, bhool mat jana.

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: Choco.Swiss
The second part rockkks..I was so angry with u before.Anyways choro.Its a lovely update:D

I was so angry with u before. If u were angry SWINI ... why didn't u say anything to me? Why didn't u confront me , why didn't u correct me? U could've OR RATHER SHOULD'VE put a comment here stating u found it offensive ... or u could've sent me a pm. I have apologised already ... but maybe I should do it again.

Sorry Swini. Please forgive my error.

I am terribly hurt that u didn't find it fit to approach me. I thought we were friends. Friends normally CORRECT the other when 1 has done something wrong ... maybe I have the wrong definition of "friendship" !!!!

JUST A QUESTION - What do u think I would've done ... if u told me that I shouldn't have posted an OS with a subject like that? I hope u read this Swini ; because I want to know!

Anyways choro. Really??? Have u let it go ? I don't think so , otherwise u wouldn't have mentioned it in the first place.

Lastly ... thanks for the comment.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: iluvmanveer
sorry, might be tommorow...
cant stop crying and cant post while crying...

Okay SANJU ... I'll be waiting.

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: anushruthi
A change in de plot
Yep .. a big modification 😃.

great

Glad u approve .

i hope it has a happy ending

Yes - it does 😉.

love your writing

Awww .. thank u ANU 🤗 .