Manveer OS - FORBIDDEN LOVE -VIEWBIE'S MESSAGE-p31

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey everyone😊. Well , since you'll all know - today is Saira's engagement; and as an engagement gift , she asked me to update my SS. I knew that I won't be able to fulfil her wish ... so I'm writing an OS instead😆. To Krishna , Sanya & Andy ... this is NOT the OS , that I chatted to you'll about. That 1 is almost complete ... I will post it on Monday😉.
Enough talking now ... let's get down to the matter at hand😈.
FORBIDDEN LOVE 😳😳😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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manyata's lovelettr was soo sweet!! uday and manyata ka lovemaking wass veryy muchh romnticcc and passionatee!!!!! wen uday asked "will u.." i thought wo dono bhag ke shaadi karne ki baat kar rahe hai,par ye dono to marne ka baat kar rahe tha navina must say u always gve a twist!! agn a gr88 workk!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Navi darling this was again a very beautiful OS👏...Loved it..But I have only 1 complain..Next time story should have a happy ending.😭...your last story where UV was a soldier was also a sad one and I could not have my mind out of it😭..plz don't do that again
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Posted: 12 years ago
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another amazing OS navina 👏👏, it was sweet with cute young manveer college memories😉, it was hot with the sizzling romance and love making of Yuvraj Udayveer and Sister Manyata 😳, and it was gritty with their final act of dying for each other with each other 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Superb OS navi
OMG...manyata's loveletter was soo..sweet...
OMG...manveer toh mar gaye...
Thanx for PM.
Sweta
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow...awesum&amazing...OS... 👏 ..manveer scene hayeee super hot... 😳 ...loved it...great concept darling... 👍🏼 ...but ending... 😭 thanks for the PM... 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
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omg! That was so touchy...abi k liye res ronay k bad comment kru gi... 😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome os navina dear.loved it.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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As always Navi, beautiful and very well written.
The emotions both uday and manyata went through
From early love, the letter, udays forced marriage
And their sensuous union and ever so tragic ending.
Next Os should be a happy ending please... all the sadness making me sad.
Muuaahh but loved it. well done navi...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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AMAZING os Navi
loved it very very nice
the ending was fitting i suppose it cudnt have UV-M 2gthr
married or sumthing as a prince married to a nun vud 1ly tarnish
their love
but still d ending was sad
Very well written Navi dear 👏
looking forward to more os from u in de future 😊

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