DREAMS OR REALITY - Updated Chap 9 - Pg 69

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#491

welcome back loved it so cute mr dreamy is here there is a saying be careful of your wishes it might come through wicked thanks for the pm

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sanah12

@sanah12

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#492

Awesome mindblowing fantastic update!! 👏
Loved it loads!!
Rohan is such a chatterbox just like me 😆
Vijay and unnati giving awkward looks to each other and unnati vomited and not feeling well from some days...is there something fishy?? 😲 I don't think so though ahahah but u may neva know what it can be..
I really love the way rohan and uday care for unnati its like the best sister bro bond..
That part was the best when the doc called manyata uday's girlfriend
🤣
Mr singh was the highlight of the whole update him battling with his feelings was so amazing.. He really loves her but he doesn't still detect the feeling the he has lost his heart to ms innocent personified 😆
Love the part as well when uday comes back to the hospital and sneaks in so no one can see him, him caressing manyata's cheek was so sweet..
Ahahah rohan was trying to flirt with kimmy and jai and karan wrapping his around both was kinda funny..
Ahah rohan and unnati smell something fishy about uday's reaction I hope they they get to know soon what he feels..
Jai understood that uday loves manyata wow I wish uday gets to know his feelings soon.
The whole update was beautifully written
Do continue asap
Thanks for the pm 😊

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Hannia

@hans1998

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#493

Omg omg jiji... flawless update...
i mean what to say, i dont have words to explain how beautiful it was.
Your words, ur way of describing the inner turmoil of uday O:-)ahhh Fantastic...
i didn't even realise how i read it so quickly and became sad when it ended. This update seriously made my night ;-).
Magical writer you are <3.
I so Wanna hug u for this update... so Here goes the teddy bear hug
❤️

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Sonali

@adventure_gurl

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#494

awww I wish I could have someone like that in my life

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Surish

@Surish

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#495

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saneha85

@saneha85

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#496

Hey Shahi,

Thank God...

I was wating for this update from long tome... i used to check on daily basis for this.

Amazing this is the word for your update...

And please please update soon

Love

Smita

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Tammie02

@Tammie02

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#497

omg that was so awesome shahi.

you really write so well, no words to tell you how goood you are but i think you must know by now

i knew unnathi knows vijay bhai.

i love how Mr Singh is fighting his feelings, you wrote it so well.

i could picture that whole scene of him walking into the hospital. too good.

and jai watching him and talking too damon and bhagwanji, so cute.

well done. now im eager for the next update.

thanks for pm and keeping manveer alive in all your ff and on this forum.

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nimra malik

@mimi.maik

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#498

hey shahi...2nd update by u...😃 i am very happy that u updated. thank u so0o0o much 🤗

welll coming to update, it was so0o0o awsum, amazing 👏 👏 👏 and lil bit romantic also...😆 so everyone is at hospital...and uday is very worried about her... the scene i enjoyed the most was when doctor addresses manyata as his girlfriend 🤣 i just wish i woulb be present there, to see the faces of all...😆 rohan was also very funny in this chappy... he is so0o0o into girls, and i liked it. and what a suspence u have created of unnati and vijay...were they friend in past or shared any relation 😲 rohan also know him. and then suddenly unnati vomits... is there something fishy 😕 but i am very curious to know 😆

the lovelist scene was when uday came back to see manyata, awww he is head to toe in love with her but is confused...and yeah jay saw him 😈 hahahaha jay's mind planning was great. i hope manyata to get better so0o0on.

agian thanks my dear, i missed this story very much, and thanks for the p.m also... do continue it when u got time... love you and loads of hugs 🤗

take care.😉