DREAMS OR REALITY - Updated Chap 9 - Pg 69 - Page 48

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Posted: 12 years ago
awww the chappy was hell awsum shahi... i m sooo much happy that u have updated, i was missing it alot... jay is right...manyata hav to live her life happily , i wish she will understand it... OMG she drinks alcohol and then the bad guys entry... thank GOD uday was there hehehehehehe. u really defined the feelings greatly and wrote them perfectly i just enjoyed the whole chapter fully.

Do continue sooon, i m eagerly waiting for the next part...thank u for the p.m...love u and hugs.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: anushruthi

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First of all sorry shah didi for taking so long to edit
i didnt get a chance to come online for long in the weekend YAARA HOW MANY TIMES MUST I SAY... PLEASE DONT APOLOGISE EVER... SINCE WHEN DO SISTERS APOLOGISE?šŸ˜‰

Here comes the comment šŸ˜‰ LOL OK I WAS WAITING FOR THIS ONE

Impressionnant update chre s'ur
J'ai ador cet endroit trs
Les sentiments d'Uday ont t dpeints belle
La squence d'action tait magnifique
Les dialogues de Jai taient superbes
ils ont beaucoup de profondeur et de sens
Tout le monde a des problmes
mais nous ne pouvons pas continuer la rflexion sur les problmes et oublier
vivre
Ma philosophie de la vie est La vie est ce que nous faisons alors venez permet de faire basculer"
Je suis heureux Manyata dcid de lcher atleast un peu et avoir du plaisir
Har ceux bande de salauds
La colre de Uday est totalement justifie
la squence de combat tait trop belle
Je ne pouvais imaginer la Dishoom Dishoom assez facilement de courtoisie votre langage clair
Vous gardez prouver que vous tes capable d'crire une srie de scnes
partir de romantique l'action
et je que votre lecteur sera toujours envie de faire crotre
Dans l'attente de pices plus tonnantes de l'criture par vous ...
prendre soeur de soins
bye
šŸ˜•šŸ˜•šŸ˜•šŸ˜†šŸ˜†šŸ˜†šŸ˜†šŸ¤£ LOL ANU SUCH MEIN YOU COMMENTED IN FRENCH.. šŸ˜• YOU HAVE TO TRANSLATE IT FOR ME. I AM NOT TALENTED LIKE YOU WITH THE MULTI LINGUIL FACETS..


P.S. I may have mentioned in my comment on the previous chapter that i have to comment in french
it is only because your writing surpasses the adjectives the english language has to offer and i had to resort to some other language

AWW THATS SO SWEET YAARA.. I AM TRULY TOUCHED FOR YOUR KIND WORDS EVEN THOUGH I AM NOT QUITE SURE WHAT THEY MEAN, šŸ˜† THE FACT THAT IT COMES FROM YOU AND WITH SO MUCH LOVE.. MUUAAHH
HUGS AND LUV YA šŸ¤—
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update...it was so beautifully written...manyata in disc that was good...jai was quite right about living life...i loved her talk...omg manyata was druged...thank god uday saved her...i loved when uday does fight for manyata...manveer are on the way of their love...and thanks for pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG...it was awesome...now i just cant wait to read next chapter
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Posted: 12 years ago
HEYA!!
HOWZ YA??
SORRY 4 THE LATE COMMENT
BDW FINALLY U UPDATE AFTER LONG TIME YR.
DII AWSOME LOVED IT AMAZING MUAH
WAT AND UPDATE SUPERB MIND BLOWING
KEEP WRITTING I REALLY WANT TO READ MORE
PLS PM ME ALWAYS UR STORIES CAUSE WENEVER ME CAME I READ PM'S OKIES MUAH
BYE
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
ahhh awesome loving the update
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Update asap. Love it. ā¤ļø 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
oh my god that was amazing update so mna karte karte bh pyaar ho hi gaya na ... i loved this story wow ... n that jerk's so irritating but how much uday care about her ... now we will see wats new in this story

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