DREAMS OR REALITY - Updated Chap 9 - Pg 69 - Page 17

Originally posted by: livvy

Great start

Originally posted by: udaymanyata07

thanks...loved it

Originally posted by: andy.a

sorry for this late comment

just read the update now

it was just awsome

loved jais prayer

make udays entry fast

do update soon and thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: princess_farh

shahi di its awsm! U r a genius!

Originally posted by: angelina6

omg shah u rock the stage once again ohhh i m once again in love with your writing love
just awesome blossom fantastic mind blowing beautiful speechless
i m in love with this ff
u describe amnytas and jeh's bonding soo well
manyta kinda mature and jeh a perfect teenager like me diffrence is that she like demon and i like enrique lol
but indeed a fantastic and full on entertaining update
i love the friendship between manyta and kimm
karan i like him a lot
this update is just starting now i m excited about what coming in next update
if starting is so good what will be at last mind blowing update
and update asap

THANKS IQROO, MUUAAHH.

As always such kind sweet words.

thank you for all the love and support.

Yes this ff is different as the is no riyasat

and no prince and princess. Just reality or dreams... lol😆

in the here and now.🤗

Originally posted by: milhan

OMG...

that was so beautifully written/////////

i totally luvd it shahi

big hugs to u...🤗

Originally posted by: edward123

Damon...jay
loved her fantasizing of Damon
Manyata doesn't talk and instead Kimmy should ask her to speak her heart out.lol

Dear bhagwan ji' I know we don't really have a very good relationship. I mean when mom does her prayers I am always asleep but I will change all that.
Well it just shows the pure heart of Jai and her love for her jiji which we never saw in the show

Good job...loved the update