DREAMS OR REALITY - Updated Chap 9 - Pg 69

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Shahista

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Posted: 12 years ago

#141

Originally posted by: lucia
nice update. next update may be uday-manyata meeting😉

Thanks dear. ... ;)

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Shahista

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Posted: 12 years ago

#142

Originally posted by: Jarin04
Sha i just have one line 4 u'I'm in luv wid your ff and your writing as well' u rock girl

Thanks jaru... muuaahh

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nimra malik

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Posted: 12 years ago

#143

awww new story and 1st chappy... i have to tell babes that was thrilling ... loved it to the core... aww jay is mad for damon well me alsooo... and manyata and jay relation is soo sweet... 👏

girl u r really talented...i m in love with you... but my heart beat was not there in the chapter yup i m talking about uday...😭 plz let him be in 2nd chap plz plz plz... overall beautifully written... keep it up and thanks 4 the p.m...

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Shahista

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Posted: 12 years ago

#144

Originally posted by: san.gar
Again an fantastic update.
Really liked it.
Jay-Manyata : they really luv each other nd care 4 each other.
I luv the story.
A girl who forget to laugh because of responblity and the betray that his mother.
Then a boy comes in her to give her all hapiness.
Am i catching the correct storyline or it is different?

Thanks dear. glad u liked.

Let us just see what happens... uday is not ur typical hearts and flowers kinda guy.

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Shahista

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Posted: 12 years ago

#145

Originally posted by: mimi.maik
awww new story and 1st chappy... i have to tell babes that was thrilling ... loved it to the core... aww jay is mad for damon well me alsooo... and manyata and jay relation is soo sweet... 👏

girl u r really talented...i m in love with you... but my heart beat was not there in the chapter yup i m talking about uday...😭 plz let him be in 2nd chap plz plz plz... overall beautifully written... keep it up and thanks 4 the p.m...

Thanks sweety... muuaahh. Damon Salvatore... lol. love him 2 bits.

Lol haan pata hain sab ka heart beat aka uday is chapter ghayab hain.

Pata nahi kab entry ayega, lol.

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Shahista

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Posted: 12 years ago

#146

Originally posted by: manisha98
An awesome update 4r a beautiful beginning~~!!
It was 2 gud...👏
luvd manyata's nature...
even i like damon a lot😉
jai-manyata relation - beautiful!!
such a gud update...thnx 4r d pm dea!!!😃

Thanks nisha. So glad u enjoyed the update.

I am also a damon fan... lol.

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Shahista

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Posted: 12 years ago

#147

Originally posted by: A-broken-heart
WOW WOW & WOW.What a start!! the first few lines were great and awesome shahi apu..
jai's character was good here? wow!!
the prayer part was nice.the love between two sisters was amazing just like silent love but pure.i think we will find uv in ur 2nd chap..
well done dear.thanks 4 ur pm.continue soon.
with love<3<3
shifat

Thanks shifat... muuaahh.

Lol... hope uv is the next chapter 2

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Shahista

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Posted: 12 years ago

#148

Originally posted by: huma12.
awsssmmm

Thanks huma. muuaahh.

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Shahista

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Posted: 12 years ago

#149

Originally posted by: hans1998
JIJI it was full of fun 🤣 jay is crazy over damon lol ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
manyta and jay fight lyk me and my cousin... haha
kim and karan are awesome!!

love hannia

Thanks choti. muuaahh. Glad u enjoyed.