DREAMS OR REALITY - Updated Chap 9 - Pg 69 - Page 15

Originally posted by: lucia

nice update. next update may be uday-manyata meeting😉

Originally posted by: Jarin04

Sha i just have one line 4 u'I'm in luv wid your ff and your writing as well' u rock girl

Originally posted by: san.gar

Again an fantastic update.
Really liked it.
Jay-Manyata : they really luv each other nd care 4 each other.
I luv the story.
A girl who forget to laugh because of responblity and the betray that his mother.
Then a boy comes in her to give her all hapiness.
Am i catching the correct storyline or it is different?

Originally posted by: mimi.maik

awww new story and 1st chappy... i have to tell babes that was thrilling ... loved it to the core... aww jay is mad for damon well me alsooo... and manyata and jay relation is soo sweet... 👏

girl u r really talented...i m in love with you... but my heart beat was not there in the chapter yup i m talking about uday...😭 plz let him be in 2nd chap plz plz plz... overall beautifully written... keep it up and thanks 4 the p.m...

Originally posted by: manisha98

An awesome update 4r a beautiful beginning~~!!

It was 2 gud...👏

luvd manyata's nature...

even i like damon a lot😉

jai-manyata relation - beautiful!!

such a gud update...thnx 4r d pm dea!!!😃

Originally posted by: A-broken-heart

WOW WOW & WOW.What a start!! the first few lines were great and awesome shahi apu..
jai's character was good here? wow!!
the prayer part was nice.the love between two sisters was amazing just like silent love but pure.i think we will find uv in ur 2nd chap..
well done dear.thanks 4 ur pm.continue soon.
with love<3<3
shifat

Originally posted by: huma12.

awsssmmm

Originally posted by: hans1998

JIJI it was full of fun 🤣 jay is crazy over damon lol ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
manyta and jay fight lyk me and my cousin... haha
kim and karan are awesome!!

love hannia

Originally posted by: Jane523

Awesome update dear
loved it
do continue soon