( MANVEER OS ) - 1 month of bliss!!! - Page 3

Originally posted by: andy.a

navi!!! wow!!! i just loved this os

beautifully written😃

Thanks Andy 🤗 .

you should seriously write one each till the 28 th pls😉

Beside u , ANDY - everyone else will get tired of me 😔 ... if i write everyday.

it was just awsome😛

now iam dissapointed, why?

because you did not punish akash for what he did to manyata😡

he should have been beaten black and blue or why not give him the punishment you suggested to me?😉. he would make a good concrete statue

I wanted to focus MORE on Manyata's part rather than Akash.

loved the way manveer met and loved the love at first sight😳

they had one month of joy'and poor uday was killed😭

but like always you give manyata a child to look after😉 and thus she has a reason to live

the concept was real nice

U know , I didn't even realise about the similarities in both stories.

will wait for the next one tomorrow😉

Dream on Dear 😆

dont forget to write

and thanks for the pm

Welcome😃.

Originally posted by: ...navina...

Thanx Andy for this amazing comment 🤗 .

I will not be writing an OS everyday till the 28th. My brain is not so sharp - that I will have a new idea each day😒. And besides ... everyone will get tired of me😆!!!

Originally posted by: coolsaloni.nira

it is surely a beautiful os on manveer navina, really very touching .

as soos as i read tht sentence in which uday introduced himself to manyta as "major uday bhaatacharya",,,,

i knew something like tht is coming ahead.

even my mind had alerted me to stop reading it further, as i wont be able to take it ... but still couldnt restrain myself frm reading it nd thn in the end of the chap i was left with misty eyes...

ur this chap reminded me of some painful memories...

good job...😊

Originally posted by: andy.a

@navi
you should write i believe in you

Awww😳.
no one will get tired of manveer and ur os
Liar !!!!

you better scratch ur brain and write one os

I scratched ... but nothing came😭.
i will be waiting
@saira
do make a poll saira

No - don't make a poll😡.
show navi how people love navis writing

Originally posted by: MsLuscious

Awww navina for the first time iam out of words... seriously loved the os... It was beautifully written... the story was epic... It was intense pure emotional tragic... In short full entertainment... for the first time i wished i could like a update 100 times i swear i would have liked it if i could ... don't know why but your this os touched my heart... this was definitely the best os i have read so far😃 hatts off to you for this MIND BLOWING OS

Originally posted by: adventure_gurl

how amazing!

Originally posted by: vampire12345678

no no navi i know ur brain works so super fats so all want a new os everyday

and no one will get tired

u want me to make a poll on that😛

Originally posted by: ...navina...

<font color="#0000ff" size="3">Andy - right at this moment ... I have many ideas for OS's in my head - but there is 1 problem. All have a HOT SCENE in it☺️. After Saira's warning yesterday - I am also quitting writing those scenes. Which means - NO OS for now😔!</font>