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@HunsraJ

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: swetsurati
awsomee...OS navi👍🏼👏

Thanks Sweta 🤗 .

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patakaguddi

@patakaguddi

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

it is surely a beautiful os on manveer navina, really very touching .

as soos as i read tht sentence in which uday introduced himself to manyta as "major uday bhaatacharya",,,,

i knew something like tht is coming ahead.

even my mind had alerted me to stop reading it further, as i wont be able to take it ... but still couldnt restrain myself frm reading it nd thn in the end of the chap i was left with misty eyes...

ur this chap reminded me of some painful memories...

good job...😊

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Sarah

@MsLuscious

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Awww navina for the first time iam out of words...seriously loved the os... It was beautifully written...the story was epic... It was intense pure emotional tragic... In short full entertainment...for the first time i wished i could like a update 100 times i swear i would have liked it if i could ...don't know why but your this os touched my heart... this was definitely the best os i have read so far😃 hatts off to you for this MIND BLOWING OS

Edited by MsLuscious - 12 years ago

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DaddyzPwincess

@DaddyzPwincess

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Awesome update
Loved manyata and uday scene
Hate udays last name
Aww it was sad when he died
Yay junior udayveer
Thx for a great hope
Please make more OS