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Originally posted by: chitra_rao

Payel/panchali 🤗, in recent times this is the best p[ice of work I have read 👏👏, everything right from the first word of the prologue till the end of the two chapters, everything was so well articulated, so meticulously written. Such a flawless work👏👏 Haven't read such a unique story in ages, everything is so unexpected, so unpredictable. With every word I look forward to what more and interesting you have to offer. A commendable work 👏

I so wish to read more of it. I know of ur eye problem too panchali , so would demand regular updates, but yes do consider to continue this ff, and give us updates once a while. You can also write ur updates in paper and ask ur friend to type it out and post it for you 😊.

Originally posted by: panchaali

Thank you for giving me one of the best comment 😊

But sadly there was none who will type it for me!!! 😔

And I intend to continue this story 😊

My updates could be late but i'll write it

And My manveer FF Abinashwer needs some research which I cannot do with my eyes now so not writing it now but I intend to write it too once my eyes get well 😊 coz its my favorite story, kinda piece of my heart 😊

Originally posted by: -Zina-

Hello ji ji😃
remember me?😊 bhulne wali cheez to main waise bhi nahi hu, firstly a big apology for delaying my comment😭 bus mera ye jo kamina computer hai na kaharab hogya tha!! and your update was out of the world😳 it deserves the best comments!! hena?😳 okay now enough of my bakwas!😆



what an update😲 !! i mean you write so good! expression was so beautifully described just an out standing update till now the best one!!👏 this giri he is sucha a dumbo only after riasat😡 but thank God he realized it in the end!! and found out the right soulmate for his son😳


lovely roses for a very lovely friend of mine! thanks for such a beautiful update, really loved it to the core of my heart!!😳 it was perfect! i laughed a lot on poor jay😆



A big hug for you payal ji ji love you 😃loads of love and tons of good wishes and not to forget lots of kisses for you from me!😉


thanks a lot for baring me ji ji😆i know this comment its still not worth the update, but still i tried!!
thanks a lot for the pm, and update soon!😉

Originally posted by: Dae_drmer

so swt of yuh payel...tumhare eyes mein prob hai..

still u r updating ss..dat too a long one...

nyc update dea..get well soon😛