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panchaali

@panchaali

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Posted: 12 years ago

#91

Originally posted by: edward123
Just read the ss 4 first time

Jaynandini calls Udayveer illiterate😡

I hate her...

and hope manveer meets in the next update.

Hope ur eye prob recovers and do pm me

Thankz Mr. Cullen 😉

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andy.a

@andy.a

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#92

res

unres

i am really sorry i reserved and went away. so am back to unres it

the update was just awsome

manyata married to a library😲, just could not believe it

ok your sad that the person you love is going out with someoneelse and so to escape depression, you marry a library

this is just so creative, i really loved it. no one will even think in this way

this is really really very creative

uday's convo with his father was really nice

all of them where treating manyata as some incarnation of sarawathi devi

it would be really interesting when uday and manyata meet

looking forward for the next part

thanks so much for the pm😃

Edited by andy.a - 12 years ago

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panchaali

@panchaali

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Posted: 12 years ago

#93

Originally posted by: adventure_gurl
loved it

Thankz dear...😊

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LittleDhampir.

@LittleDhampir.

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#94

comment on pg 16

Edited by edward123 - 12 years ago

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panchaali

@panchaali

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Posted: 12 years ago

#95

Aj toh vai sunday hain firvi sablog itni reserved hain ke comment dene ki time vhi nahi mil raha!!! 😭

Kya meri update itni buri hain!!! 😭😭😭😭😭😭

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LittleDhampir.

@LittleDhampir.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#96

wow wonderful update
just loved it
Loved unnati's concern 4 her best friend
and waitin 4 manveer's meting in the next update

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LittleDhampir.

@LittleDhampir.

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#97

Originally posted by: panchaali
Aj toh vai sunday hain firvi sablog itni reserved hain ke comment dene ki time vhi nahi mil raha!!! 😭
padhne ke liye thoda time to le sakte hain na
Kya meri update itni buri hain!!! 😭

Who says???
I say that it was excellent

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Dae_drmer

@Dae_drmer

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#98

Originally posted by: panchaali

As I have learned my eyes need a huge time to recover 😔

i am managing to write somehow

I have suddenly realized if I stop writing Manveer...

My heart will stop beating!!! 😭

aww so swt dea...😳😳