'THE SECOND SHADOW' chap 30 pg 146 new - Page 57

Originally posted by: huma12.

awsssmmm andy👏👏👏

Originally posted by: -Zina-

Hello Andy😛hi zina

A huge sorry for delaying my comment,😭 as per i thought that i have commented but today going through my posts i found out that i did not comment till now...😭SORRY! that never a problem atleast you came to comment now.😆 am happy

the chapter was just amazing!!👏 what!!😲 uday is Mr. Shark? what!!😲 what!!😲 what!!😲 okay enough of my star plus drama😆yes mr shark is indeed our uday actually i knew that uday is Mr. Shark, but was not that sure...!! why doesn't this manyata understands him😡 stupid was saying bad to his family, only he knows the truth😭 i hope she gets to know about his past, but somewhere i think🤔 even manyata has feelings for uday😃...does she?😕 yes manyata insulted uday's family without knowing the truth. but she too have something for udayshe must be having because his coming near her makes her lose her senses!!yes very correct😳 she is so clever she was keeping an eye😲 on him and already knew that uday is Mr. Shark!! i think i am mixing the two latest chapters...am i?no she did doubt uday well andy you are a superb writer more than i can say👏now make up the love which exists between the two☺️!!am ready to do it, but manyata will remain stubborn i am eagerly waiting for the next cahpter, please update soon!!😉will try for sure
thanks for the pm!😃
🤗
Love u

Originally posted by: milhan

woo andy... now we can clearly see his intentions...

he's a wicked guy...a simple and nice update

thnx for pm

Originally posted by: sweet_gargi

That was a great update Andy!!.👏👏thanks so much gargi.I loved it to the full...Ohh so UV wanted to feel Manyata before the killingyes he really want to enjoy before killing her😳😳...Ur UV is a real psychois he?😡..bt still i love him😲..now am shocked .😆😆...naughty UV...as always he is naughty

lookin forward to the next part now...really want to know how he disguised the murder which was faked...updated it

Originally posted by: catty2000

Great update Andy 👏

Loved it 😃

Looking forward to read more ...

... Continue soon

Originally posted by: edward123

A GREAT UPDATE
Udayveer wants Manyata to fall 4 him
But in the way himself falls 4 her...correct dear
Just loved it 2 the core

Originally posted by: Ashish.Holic

GR8 update andy👏
love it plzz..update soon than for PM.

Originally posted by: san.gar

It can be defined

Love the

update next part soon.

Originally posted by: ...navina...

res😊

edited:

Chapter 19 ... Wow!!! So many questions of mine were answered here.i always answer all questions asked to me😃 I had many queries about what happened that day Uday took Manyata out on a date. Then when they were leaving , Manyata almost got run over by a speeding car ... I was sure that you had made a mistake there ... but u didn't . All has been PERFECTLY explained in this part👏.believe me navi. you know when i was writing that part, many people was guessing it could be uday who is mr shark, i had to work extra hard to make then believe it was not, had to write those parts very carefully as one mistake will ruin the suspense I had commented after that update ... that "IF I DIDN"t LOVE UDAY SO MUCH - I'D SAY THAT HE WAS THE 1 THAT TRIED TO KILL MANYATA ... Saving her was just an act so that he would look like a HERO" (COMMENT ON PAGE 8) i do remember your comments navi, you did say the driver s end was nearing and you are perfectly right about it. he was killed by mr shark ... NOW all my doubts have been cleared.do you want me to add some? ( Although I wasn't completely wrong there😉) Briliant work Andy 👍🏼!!!thanks so much navi😳

Chapter 19.1 ... Rohan was a pest😡. and a dangerous one too I didn't like him from the start.neither did i He deserved what he got 😈. do you really feel so😃 I know I sound harshno you said the right thing navi ... BUT I'm ON UDAY'S SIDE HEREso am i too or i would not have killed rohan 😆😉. Rohan hired some under-world goon to take out Uday ... and destroyed his PRIZED POSSESSION (his car) in the process, obviously Uday was going to take revenge for that!!! Mr Shark getting cosy with his victim was going to be his downfall.dont ever underestimate mr shark. he will bounce back All that time he was spending getting close to her ... indirectly - he was developing feelings for her😳. Very interesting chapter ... very informative!!! Well done to u👏.thanks so much navi😃😳

navi i loved this comment so much

happy to know you too felt rohan deserved the death he got

i have you to support me if others say rohan's killing cannot be justified

Originally posted by: harika04angel

😉suberblyyy awsm updates!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😊