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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: chitra_rao

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#cc00ff">Hey andy sorry for the super late coment😕, actually im on a vacation and three time-zones away from my regular time🥱, so I got delayed.</font>


<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#cc00ff">Part 1: Rohan is DEAD: lol I</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#cc00ff">m so so happy that Uday dint die😊, u built the suspense thing very well in the previous chapter👏. Poor soul Manyata how much ever bad rohan was to her, she never wanted him dead , she has to see all this😕</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#cc00ff">Part 2: Jaggat introduced: OK now he is Jainandini's bf, and a police officer too, nice, hopefully he will help Manyata later on or even Uday later on to track this MR Shark . I'm glad that M atleast told Jaggat about her life threat, coz if incase anything happens to her like, she goes missing, or she is critically hurt, Jaggat can step in and start investigating .</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#cc00ff">Part 3: M's voices her doubt on Ajay: I liked this part, but again Uday's reaction is beyond me, he is so so casuall about everything😕. I mean Rohan got so brutally killed, he was so near to Manyata working in the same office, so he should be more worried about M, and he is still going to London, what if somethinghappensto her.</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#cc00ff">Part 4: Rajat's finding and M's foolishness: Now I seriously Mr Shark knew of Rajat following him , then why dint he take care of him. Rajat is still alive (which is a good thing btw😆), and he has given his evidence to M too. He has accomplished his promised work👏.Now why on earth did M herself go to confront Mr Shark. Comeon, after being so witty so far, she all of a sudden does this foolish act. There is no use of bravery if you cannot act smart😕.</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#cc00ff">Part 5: The epicconfrontation: I really liked how M found out Mr Shark's workplace, and finally they confronted, but again now what? OK we were crying that dont kill Uday, so does that mean that u r killing M here😕.</font>



thanks chitra for this comment
ur on vacation wow
where r u now
rohan ir dead manyata went to confront mr shark as she was mad at him for killing her friend
so no rational thinking from her side
uday is still tanda soon he will become active as he helps to find manyatas killers
jaggat will start investigation soon as manyata will be kidnapped
rajat did find mr sharks identity but ...
Thank you chitra once more for this awsome comment
enjoy ur vacation
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: andy.a


uday will cancel his trip to find manyatas killers

Manyata's killers😲 ... Manyata gonna die ... NO - DON"T DO THAT!!!
so you say ajay is mr shark
YES
how much do you bet on it ?
I bet VEER.

navi you did not like the chap
Sorry Andy ... that button was not working for me earlier. But i have done it now👍🏼.
when r u updating now
I told u in the PM😉
once i loved your comment it was so beautiful
AWWW😳!!!
ps- next chap will be a bit late as iam a bit confused regarding manyatas kid nap and killing
Let me UN-CONFUSE YOU ... THERE WILL BE NO KILLING OF MANYATA😃.

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Posted: 12 years ago

navi, manyata may be killed by mr shark

veer is the bet eh
so shall i take him as my own
Edited by andy.a - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Anjalika13

Awesome story

Love it
Update soon


thank you dear
will update very soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

Chapter 12

M: don't you dare touch me, Mr. Shark😡

Ms: nice name na, Mr. shark. It's really good for business😆

M: ya, killing innocent lives is a very good business (sarcastically)

Ms: so what brings you here , princess manyata kumari ,yuvarani of devgarh, chairperson and MD of devgarh group of companies

M: to let you know that I know who you really are😡

Ms: yes curiosity is a good thing but over curiosity is bad darling, really bad(he holds her hand)

Manyata shakes of that hand and angrily say

M: I loathe you, don't you dare touch me again😡

Ms: why is it my love?😈

M: you killed my best friend rohan, that to, very brutally. are you a man, you bloody*********😡

Ms: yes, I am a man. A man with flesh and blood and all desires intact

Saying this he pulled her towards him, her chest collided with his. He locked his arms over her waist and tries to kiss her

Manyata tried to push him away, but could not as he was too strong

M: leave me, you ********* leave me , l say leave me or I will

Ms: or I will? What?

He leaves her amused

M: or I will make sure you will rot in hell

Ms: sure a place is already booked over there for me and I will take you too with me, my love (he smirks)

M: that smile on your face won't last for long , soon you will be behind the bars . all this luxury and power you have now will be soon a matter of the past . you will cry bitterly for all this

Ms: what can you do ms manyata kumari ?

M: I have proof. I have enough evidence to lock you forever in hell

Ms: (his face hardens) what evidence do you have?🥱

M: I have collected enough evidence, details of all your killings and all financial transactions, your different hideouts and now I know about your workplace, what more do I want?

ms: only if you leave from this place alive do I need to bother about it (he smirks)

M:(a fear is evident in her eyes) you can't save yourself mr shark. You wont be able to touch me lest kill me. My trusted lieutenant will hand all evidence over to the police in about I hours. So there is not even a micrometer available for you to escape

ms: is there no way out?(looking down)

manyata takes a chair and sits on it with enough pride and puts her one leg over the other and speaks in a purely business fashion

M: you name the person who employed you , how that deal took place and when, your advance , all that recordings in my office and maybe I will think about setting you free

Ms: please manyata please don't hurt me (getting scared)

M: you answer my questions first.

you should have thought once before accepting this deal. I am not any stupid damsel in distress who waits for people to come and save her. Iam a rajwada , a royal who was born to rule.

You would have found many easy preys to hunt so your pride inflated like a big balloon, but you have never encountered one like me, you won't know what hit you. I will burst your bubble of pride

Now I am the hunter and you are the prey Mr. Shark. You should not have messed with me. It's a dangerous mistake

Ms: please manyata

M: I don't want to hear any please

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Komal was getting worried, manyata was very attached to rohan, so his death would be a shock for her, she was trying to phone her but she was out of the coverage area. She wanted her daughter home

K: jai, did manyata tell anything about where she would be going?

J: no mom, she would either be at office or at rohans home

K: but her phone is unreachable

J: mom, don't worry, jiji is not a small child

Brigraj enters and says

B: right jai, she is not a small girl, don't worry about her unnecessarily

K: I want to talk to my daughter now, why can't you guys understand

B: ok

Then a call comes. Brigraj attends the call

B: hallo, devgarh royal palace

Person: sir iam manyata mam's PA she has not arrived at the office yet. Mr sasi is waiting for a meeting for the past one hour

B:Did you not try her phone?

P: I tried but i could not get connected

B: maybe she would be at rohans place, you know he was her best friend, she would come soon, just inform us when she arrives

P: ok sir

K: what! She did not arrive at the office yet? Where are you beta(feeling scared)

J: ma don't worry

B: komal don't act like a small child. manu is capable of looking after herself

K: but still

Someone was thinking 'was it time for CELEBRATION?'

**************************

It was 6 pm, yet manyata did not reach office or home. Her phone was switched off.

Her private security personnel rajat was missing. A body was discovered by the railway track. The body was sent for identification.

Komal was hysteric ,brigraj was pacing around the room, ds was sitting at a corner silently praying,jai kept trying jaggat on the phone , finally the call got connected

Jai: jaggat , did you get any details about jiji,

Jaggat: no, darling , I am trying my best . uday has also joined me to search manyata

Jai: I thought uday was going to London today

Jagat: how do you about uday?

Jai: manyata didi told me about him, so why did he not go to London

Jagat: I called him earlier to ask him if he knew anything about manyatas whereabouts. Ha told he was on his way to the airport and when we told manyata was missing he cancelled the trip and joined the search

Jai: so what about rajat

Jagat: no sign of him

Jai: is uday with you now?

Jagat: no, he went to finish an important work

Jai: so jiji did fear someone was behind her

Jagat: yes this made me start such a huge operation in such a short time. Uday has some doubts

Jagat: we are searching all exit points from the city , nobody can escape us. All suspicious people are arrested . all godowns and other places were there are no people are raided as we speak

Jai: jaggat you must surely find jiji today itself. I miss her , I cant live without her

Jagat: yes I will

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Ms: please manyata listen to what I got to say

M: ok

Ms: so you have an evidence keeper who would approach the police if you are not back after1 hours, right?

M: right

Ms: and if I name the person who employed me and give you all details I can go free, right?

M: maybe, eh ok right(after thinking for a while)

Ms:And if you evidence keeper is dead, then you won't have any evidence against me ,right?

M: what?

Ms: yes you heard it correct

M: (totally shocked)what do you mean?😲

Ms: rajat is dead, poor fellow😆

M: no , it is not possible😲

Ms: yes love unfortunately rajat committed suicide half an hour ago, may his soul rest in peace

M: you b**tard , why did you kill him, you creep

ms: simple, survival of the fittest. He tried to unmask me so I finished him. Darling now what do you think about your decision to visit me alone , with no one to help you from outside – no rajat and no police. I BET YOU WOULD BE REGRETTING THIS DECISION NOW

PRINCESS YOU HAVE MADE THE BIGGEST MISTAKE OF YOUR LIFE

He hit her head with an iron rod and all went BLACK🤢

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Posted: 12 years ago
Kya chapter tha
awesome ...
so well written
Hmm Mr. Shark identity is stil not
revealed
i have a sinking feeling tat it is Uday
wonder who in M 's family wants her dead
I suspected Rajat vud b killed
Mr. shark isnt foolish he knw
sum1 was following him
mayb de body found in de railway was R's
now wat will happen to M ?
do cont soon
thanks for the PM

Edited by anushruthi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: anushruthi

Kya chapter tha

awesome ...
so well written
Hmm Mr. Shark identity is stil not
revealed
i have a sinking feeling tat it is Uday
wonder who in M 's family wants her dead
I suspected Rajat vud b killed
Mr. shark isnt foolish he knw
sum1 was following him
mayb de body found in de railway was R's
now wat will happen to M ?
do cont soon
thanks for the PM


thanks dear
mr sharks identity will be revealed pretty soon
why do u think mr shark would be uday?
Rajat was killed and that body is his
manyata is in real grave danger
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: harika04angel

hope uday saves manyata😭


thank you dear
even i hope the same
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesum chapter. really eager to know who is mr shark. pls do reveal that in the next chapter and even the family member who want m to be killed. hope uday come and save manyata b4 its too late.

thanks for the pm. continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: arna753

<font color="#660000">awesum chapter. really eager to know who is mr shark. pls do reveal that in the next chapter and even the family member who want m to be killed. hope uday come and save manyata b4 its too late.</font>


<font color="#660000">thanks for the pm. continue soon.</font>


thank you dear
mr sharks identity will be revealed very soon
lets hope uday saves manyata

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