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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: livvy

It's UDAY it's definitely uday


is it uday?
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: princessSonia

<font color="#ff0000">thnk god uday isnt d one who got killed😃😃</font>

<font color="#ff0000">aawww manyata is such a sweetheart</font>
<font color="#ff0000">inspite of wat rohan did wid her she is crying 4 him🤗😊</font>

<font color="#ff0000">Loved hw uday tried 2 pacify his princess😃</font>
<font color="#ff0000">tht Bloody MR. SHARK wat does he think of himself😲</font>
<font color="#ff0000">hw dare he touch manyata😡😡</font>
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<font color="#ff0000">do cont soon dear</font>
<font color="#ff0000">n do pm me</font>
<font color="#ff0000">bdw thnks 4 d PM...</font>


thanks dear
uday did not die
mr shark wont stop his work soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

Hi Andy ... extremely interesting update. It was superb👏.

M: udaaayyy, (sobbing continuously ) ss.. ssee th... this whho ...whho cou.. could d.. do sa... such thi... Things , it... it ...is ..is too bru brutal

I was right , I was right , I was right (jumping up and down😆) . Manyata called out Uday's name because he was with her at that time!!!
I felt so sad for Manyata 😔 ... poor girl was so distraught about her friends murder😭.

WHY DID MR SHARK NOT KILL UDAY? ... simple!!! Because I WOULD'VE KILLED U THEN😡!!!

Hmmm ... new entry ... Jaggat. Seems like a nice guy. Very concerned about Manyata's companion , whether he is worthy of her or not!!! Looks like he approves of Uday though👍🏼. I'm very interested to read about his investigation. I'm happy that Manyata confided some some her findings to Jaggat ... perhaps he will come to her rescue when she confronts Mr Shark😉.

M: rajat is near to fully crack that killer's identity. As soon as we get sufficient evidence we will approach the police.

But why didn't she inform the police😒 ... why did she take it upon herself to confront a demon!!! Does she think , she's SUPER-WOMAN!!!

Hmmm 🤔 ... so I'm not the only 1 that suspects Ajay to be Mr Shark ... Manyata ALSO thinks it's him!!! Uday is awfully CONVINCED that it's not possible ... so , could Uday be him??? After all that has happened , Uday is still going to London ... leaving Manyata behind. Fishy ... VERY FISHY!!!

Rajjat is very smart ( & very stupid too) . He followed Mr Shark and discovered his identity ... all that was great , but following a shrewd , cold-blooded killer like Mr Shark - WAS FOOLISH ... he could've also ended up DEAD🤢. Mr Shark knew that someone was following him ... BUT HE DID NOTHING ABOUT IT😕. Either he's getting careless ... OR IT'S HIS PLAN (to get Manyata to come to him).

M:I knew it was him, I doubted him for sometime now ... which means - IT IS AJAY 😃!!! Because he was the 1 , she was doubting!!!

I liked your idea ... "M"coming after "N" ... & that opened the passage to the secret room👏. INGENIUS ; I tell you!!!
"hallo, darling, so how do you like my work place" Now ... I'm confused here again😕. In normal English ... another word for "office" is "work-place". Uday had told Manyata that he had to go back to his office first , and then he would head off to London. So ... COULD HE BE THE KILLER??? ( I HOPE NOT!!!)

Andy Dear ... u love torturing us , DON'T YOU😡??? First , we all must guess ... WHO DIED!!! Now we must guess who's Mr Shark. Well , my money is on Ajay ... but Uday is a close second.

It was a fantastic update, please continue soon, thanks for the PM😊. In the next chapter ... LET ME BE RIGHT😈 about Ajay😆!!! Sorry ... about the EXTRA-LONG comment!!!
Edited by ...navina... - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ...navina...

<font color="#3300ff"><font face="Calibri"><font size="2"><font color="#ff00ff" size="3">Hi Andy ... extremelyinteresting update. It was superb👏.</font></font></font></font>


<font color="#3300ff"></font><font face="Calibri"><font size="2"><font color="#0000ff">M: udaaayyy, (sobbing continuously ) ss.. ssee th... this whho ...whho cou.. could d.. do sa... such thi... Things , it... it ...is ..is too bru brutal


</font></font></font><font face="Calibri"><font color="#ff00ff">I was right , I was right , I was right (jumping up and down😆) . Manyata called out Uday's name because he was with her at that time!!!</font></font>

<font color="#ff00ff" size="2" face="Calibri">I felt so sad for Manyata😔 ... poor girl was so distraught about her friends murder😭.</font>

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<font face="Calibri"><font size="2"><font color="#cc0000">WHY DID MR SHARK NOT KILL UDAY? </font><font color="#ff00ff">... simple!!! Because I WOULD'VE KILLED U THEN😡!!!


</font></font></font><font face="Calibri"></font>

<font face="Calibri"><font color="#ff00ff">Hmmm ... new entry ... Jaggat. Seems like a nice guy. Very concerned about Manyata's companion , whether he is worthy of her or not!!! Looks like he approves of Uday though👍🏼. I'm very interested to read about his investigation. I'm happy that Manyata confided some some her findings to Jaggat ... perhaps he will come to her rescue when she confronts Mr Shark😉.</font></font>

<font face="Calibri"><font size="2"><font color="#0000ff">M: rajat is near to fully crack that killer's identity. As soon as we get sufficient evidence we will approach the police.


</font></font></font><font face="Calibri"><font color="#ff00ff">But why didn't she inform the police😒 ... why did she take it upon herself to confront a demon!!! Does she think , she's SUPER-WOMAN!!!</font></font>

<font face="Calibri"><font color="#ff00ff" size="2">Hmmm 🤔 ... so I'm not the only 1 that suspects Ajay to be Mr Shark ... Manyata ALSO thinks it's him!!! Uday is awfully CONVINCED that it's not possible ... so , could Uday be him??? After all that has happened , Uday is still going to London ... leaving Manyata behind. Fishy ... VERY FISHY!!!</font></font>


<font face="Calibri"><font color="#ff00ff" size="2">Rajjat is very smart ( & very stupid too) . He followed Mr Shark and discovered his identity ... all that was great , but following a shrewd , cold-blooded killer like Mr Shark - WAS FOOLISH ... he could've also ended up DEAD🤢. Mr Shark knew that someone was following him ... BUT HE DID NOTHING ABOUT IT😕. Either he's getting careless ... OR IT'S HIS PLAN (to get Manyata to come to him).</font></font>


<font face="Calibri"><font size="2"><font color="#0000ff">M:I knew it was him, I doubted him for sometime now </font></font></font><font face="Calibri"><font color="#ff00ff">... which means - IT IS AJAY 😃!!! Because he was the 1, she was doubting!!!


</font></font><font face="Calibri"><font color="#ff00ff">I liked your idea ... "M"coming after "N" ... & that opened the passage to the secret room👏. INGENIUS ;I tell you!!!</font></font>

<font face="Calibri"></font>

<font face="Calibri"><strong><font size="2"><font color="#0000ff">"hallo, darling, so how do you like my work place" </font><font color="#ff00ff">Now ... I'm confused here again😕. In normal English ... another word for "office" is "work-place". Uday had told Manyata that he had to go back to his<font color="#ff00ff">office </font>first , and then he would head off to London. So ... COULD HE BE THE KILLER??? ( I HOPE NOT!!!)</font></font></font>

<font face="Calibri"><font color="#000000" size="2">Andy Dear ... u love torturing us , DON'T YOU😡??? First , we all must guess ... WHO DIED!!! Now we must guess who's Mr Shark. Well , my money is on Ajay ... but Uday is a close second.


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It was a fantastic update,
please continue soon,
thanks for the PM😊.



In the next chapter ... LET ME BE RIGHT😈about Ajay😆!!!
Sorry ... about the EXTRA-LONG comment!!!
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navi what a huge comment
loved it to the core
i read it about 10 times and am continueing to read
now uday did not die because he was not meant to die
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Posted: 12 years ago
@ navi
man couldnot reply fully as i am using my phone so the word limit got over
uday will cancel his trip to find manyatas killers
so you say ajay is mr shark
how much do you bet on it ?
Uday is presently tandatanda soon he will be garam garam
manyata went to mr shark alone
it is the biggest mistake in her life
encyclopedia was needed to show mr sharks workplace
now my grammer is poor so i used work place so they r same eh
uday did go to his office to finish some troubles.should i reveal
mr sharks identity or not is my doubt now

navi you did not like the chap
when r u updating now
once i loved your comment it was so beautiful
ps- next chap will be a bit late as iam a bit confused regarding manyatas kid nap and killing
Edited by andy.a - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
update soon andy!!!!!😭😭
waiting 4 ur update
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: princessSonia

<font color="#ff0000">update soon andy!!!!!😭😭</font>

<font color="#ff0000">waiting 4 ur update</font>


dear wanted to update today wrote about 2 pages
some confusions regarding the plot
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: andy.a


dear wanted to update today wrote about 2 pages
some confusions regarding the plot


need any help?????😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
edited my comment on page 26
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: princessSonia



need any help?????😊😊


thanks dear for ur concern
have to do this alone

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