'THE SECOND SHADOW' chap 30 pg 146 new - Page 23

Hi Andy 😊. This update was a nice surprise😳.

I said this after your last chapter ... & I'll say it again ; MANYATA WAS DAMN STUPID TO GO TO HIM ALL ALONE😡. I can understand why he was so amused by her threats. It was as if a sardine was threatening a shark😆!!!

PRINCESS YOU HAVE MADE THE BIGGEST MISTAKE OF YOUR LIFE ... he called her "PRINCESS" ... don't tell me it's UDAY😒???

Originally posted by: ...navina...

Hi Andy 😊. This update was a nice surprise😳.

Firstly ... A very Merry Christmas to you. Hope you have a great day!!!

Mr Shark is very proud of his job and his name. But I was hoping that u would reveal his identity (his real name) in this chapter.

Oh God ... this guy is so sickening. I don't like how he's touching her and he even called her : "my love" . Eewww ... bloody pig🐷.

I said this after your last chapter ... & I'll say it again ; MANYATA WAS DAMN STUPID TO GO TO HIM ALL ALONE😡. I can understand why he was so amused by her threats. It was as if a sardine was threatening a shark😆!!!

I really liked the mind-game he played with Manyata ... making her think that she had the upper hand , and he ( mr Shark) had no way out.

The family scene was nice. All are concerned about the where-abouts of Manyata. I still think Brijraj is the person that hired Mr Shark in the first place to kill his step-daughter.

Someone was thinking 'was it time for CELEBRATION?' ... this line has confused me though😕. It was as if another member who was watching Brij / Komal & Jai ... said this!!!

Uday cancelled his trip when he learned of Manyata's dissappearance ... SO SWEET 😳 ... that means the guy does have a heart😉.

Awww ... Rajat is dead🤢 ... poor Rajjat😭 ... BUT I'm NOT SURPRISED. There was no chance that Mr Shark would spare him. Manyata is SO SCREWED NOW!!!

PRINCESS YOU HAVE MADE THE BIGGEST MISTAKE OF YOUR LIFE ... he called her "PRINCESS" ... don't tell me it's UDAY😒???

Yet another awesome update Andy👏 . Enjoyed it immensely. Do continue soon and thanks for the PM😊.

Originally posted by: -Zina-

<font size="2" color="#ff0000">Sorry i am late!!😭 actually i am out of city!! so couldn't comment on the previous update!!😃 well it was great!! i am very much revealed to know that the one who was brutally killed was rohan not uday!!🤢</font>

<font size="2" color="#ff0000">it was a great update andy!!😳 this story is a big mystery i have so many people in my list about whom i think that something is fishy with them!! unfold the big mystery!! very nice update👏thanks for the pm!!🤗</font>

<font size="2" color="#ff0000">i will give comment for chapter 12 after reading!!😊</font>

Originally posted by: princessSonia

awesum chapter dear

but mr. shark's identity still nt unfold...

loved manyata's boldness

❤️❤️

she proved tht she's nt a common girl

who will cry n beg...👏👏

a true RAJWADA!!!!!!!!!!

do cont soon

n thnks 4 d pm.

Originally posted by: -Zina-

awesome chapter andy!!
This mr. Shark is such a kutta kamina!
Poor manyata shee is badly stuck now...i hope uday comes to rescue her!
Update soon!

Originally posted by: andy.a

thanks dear
mr sharks identity will be revealed pretty soon
why do u think mr shark would be uday?
Rajat was killed and that body is his
manyata is in real grave danger