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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: PrincessZaneb

Aww that was a sad upate
I feel srry for manyata nd uday
Uday is the best he took all the burden on his head so manyata dosent face anything it made me cry
Please update as soon as possible
Hope everything is fine and the real culprit is caught hate that karan nd why dosent akash remember anything




thanx 4 cmnt..
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: iluvmanveer

pari pari pari... that was a gr8 update... haye rabba ab kya hoga? manyata's condition is 2 bad... uday kitna accha hain... jo kaam nai kiya uska bhi blame khud pe leliya... uske life main kitne probs hain. even i am feeling sad for m. bechari... plz... uski awaaz lautado, and yes, usko pehle jaisa banado. koi bhi chamatkar karo, bt plz... use thik karo





chamtkar krdungi,bs wait kro..
thanx 4 cmnt,
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Pooja_0910

OMG!!!What a chapter...so emotional...Uday is so helpless and for sake of Manyata he is ready to take all blame on him and other hand poor Manyata lost her voice... Ughh this Karan shame on you you evil...waiting for next




thanx 4 cmnt darlng...
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Posted: 12 years ago
comment edited on pg 31

bt do cont soon dear
waiting 4 next update!!!!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Maanveer ss:ajnaabi ehsaass
part-18...
Vijay'mom,mujhe kuch jruri bat khni h aapse..
Gr'sbke saamne bolo..
Sb uday ko dekhte h.
uday'oh,relax,main bahar hu..
Wo bahar chala jata h...
Vijay'main karan ko cal krke bta deta hu...
Komal'ni,agar usne mna krdiya to,
gr'komal,kya pagal jeisi baatein kr ri ho?to kya use
hm aise jhuth bolke manyata k sath shaadi
krwayege..
Komal manyata k pas jati h'meri bachi se kaun
shadi krega ab,agar usne bi..
manyata internal voice nikalti h'hmu,hmu..
Sb manyata ko dekhte h.
manyata apna sir na ka ishaara krti h..
jay'aunty,manyata ye kbi ni chahegi ki kisi ko
andhere me rkh k wo apni khusiya dhundhe..
manyata smile krti h...
vijay cal krta h kran ko..
karan'hello,vijay how r u dude?
Vijay'karan,mujhe kuch jruri..
karan'vijay main bhoot bg hu,mere bhaiyo ki sgai
h aaj...teri bhan se main kal pka milne aaunga...or
sgai ki date bi..
Vijay rone lgta h.
karan'vijay,wht happend sb thik to h...
Vijay'karan wo,phr btata h manyata ki halat...
Karan chup ho jata h,'main vijay bad me bat krta
hu..apna faisla btauga..khayal rkhna apna..
wo cal cut krdeta h..
maya'kiski cal thi karan..
karan'bua,meri hlp kijiye jra.
wo phr saari bat btata h...
maya'to isme itna sochna kya?wo ldki ab kisi kam
ki ni,kya uske apne jeevan me lana shi h..
karan'bua,aap kh to shi rh rhe ho,bt mera dost..
Maya'tod do,bde buisness world me aagye h,rich
frnds bnao pichde logo ko piche chod do...
Or sb tumhari marzi..
wo bolke chali jati h...
karan phr vijay ko cal krta h'helo vijay.
vijay'ha karan kya faisla h tumhara.?
karan'wo vijay main main..
maya usse phone chin leti h'hm karan ki bua bol
rhe h,bhul jaiye karan ko,aapni bhan k liye koi uske
jaisa hi dhundh lijiye..
Ya apni bhan ko aisi kisi organigetion me dal dijiye..
don't cal again..
cal cut...
vijay rone lgta h,sb sad ho jate h..
manyata also cried she thout'bhagwan itni bi kya
mjburi thi teri jo tune aisa krdiya...
Maya calng uday'uday kha ho tum?kal rat se
tumhara pta ni,ab to aa jao.
Uday sadnes se'ya mom,i m cumig..
cal cut
maya'hel..ye ldka bi na...
Uday aata h manyata's ward me'wo main chalta
hu,wo me.
jagat cum'uday..
hi manyata.
Manyata smile..
Jagat'uday hm chale wo aaj hmari.
jay'ha engagment h,idhar aapke bhai ki wjh se
manyata ki halat h,iska rishta tuit gya .
jagat'what?
uday'rishta tuit gya kyn?
komal'kyn?ye keisa swal h,kya tum aisi
mjbur,apahiz(handycap)ldki se shadi krloge..
uday apni njre jhuka leta h.
gr'aisi halt krke tumhein kya farq pdhta h,tum log
to hr jurm krke police se bch jaoge...
jagat'wht d hel?uday ne
uday jagat ka hath pkad leta h'bhai hm chalte h
plz..
Jay'ha jaiye sir,wrna aapki khushiyo pe garhan lg
jayega...jaiye aap apni duniya bsa lijiye..
jagat guse me jay ko dekhte hue'uday main bahar
hu.
Uday sbke saamne hath jodta h,or manyata k pas
jata h..
Both painful looked each other.
Uday thout'tumhein to pta h na main aisa ni hu..
manyata thout'mujhe pta h sir,main sbko btana
chahti hu pr..
Uday thout'ek rat me sb bdal gya...tum or tumhari
aadte.
Pr ek cheez me kbi ni chahta tumhare andar bdle
or wo h tumhari muskurahat.'
manyata thout'aapne jo mere liye kiya,wo main kbi
ni bhul skti,aapki zindgi ki nar surwat hone ja ri h
sir,rote huye jana thik ni.
tbi wo ek smile krti h...
or weise hi unvoice k bolti h'THANKU'
uday smile krta h,nd wo chala jata h...
Jagat car drive krta h,nd uday sochta h.
'apni zindgi ko aacha bnaiye,iski zindgi to bnadi
aapne,iska rishta bi tuit gyd h.
'mr.uday inpe rape attempt bi hua h,ye bol ni
skti,move bi ni kr pa ri h.'
nd remember manyata's smile nd hr said
thanku...


Continuoes
pari
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Posted: 12 years ago
res πŸ˜ƒ

unres

yay me firstπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ
arghhh maya and karan together go 2 hell😑
karan ne manyata ke zindagi barbaad kardi 😭

feel really sorry 4 poor manyata
tht bas***d must surely rot in hell😑😑😑

loved uday''s concern care 4 manyataπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ

sorry 4 abusive words 4 karan bt he deserves more tht dis...

Edited by princessSonia - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awsssmmm pariii babyyy
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manveer scenesss wasss awsssmmm
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karan and maya are bas***d , fu***n bas***d
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sorry 4 abusive languge cant help it man they deserve this
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uday cares 4 manyata alot sooo sweettt
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i m sad 4 manyata
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karan should be punished idiot
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Posted: 12 years ago
OK now i am going to use a lot of abusive lang
God nw i am literally pissed off he is such a moron bas***d i am nt getting it how can a rapist survive after doing such an absurd act 😑 Ass holes lyk dem should rot in hell nhi yr hell bhi inke liye kam hai kutta ,saala There are a whole Lot of gaalis fr these rapist bt kya kroon saraa gussa karan or teri update pe nikal ke koi fayda nhiπŸ˜† It ws heart wrenching i already told u not to make it this much emotional 😭 Bt its k
uday is such a good person πŸ˜ƒ He cares fr her so very much and i luved dat scene when he asked the doc about nt telling the to manyata's so called family awe 😊 *Luv is in the air*
bt bcoz of this filthy moron manyata can't talk or move her hands God this is so not done
pari u have to do something or else u r go e or tu janti hai ki mai tujhse bdi kamini hoon🀣
Iss comment ko appericiation k liye Nhi frustration k liye kiya hai bt mai kya kroon 😭 btw awesome,superb,fantastic update πŸ‘ πŸ‘
luv uh kaminiπŸ€—

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Edited.😊
Superb, awesome, fantabulous update Champ..πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘
OMG J n other members thought Uday did something wrong with Manyata... but actually he saved her..Manyata knows everything but she's helpless now..😭
Bas***d Karan n churail Maya I jus hate both of them..🀒
They r so mean n Maya she's ughhh..😑
Manyata-UV Scene was so emotional...😭
Manyata is paralyzed now..😭
Thanks for the update n PM also..
SORRY FOR THE LATE COMMENT CHAMP..😭
Keep up the good work..πŸ‘πŸΌ
LOVE YOU.πŸ€—

Edited by Vasishtha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
pari sorry yr bhoth dino se teri story nhi padi thi !!! but its really awesome !!
now bath karte hai teri FF ki
sorry guyz i will abuse plz forgive me but seriously I TELL U he deserve it
sala kutta kamina ullu ka ptha sala bc how dare he touch her uski life brbad kar di or uske badh us kaminy ka sara ilzaam bechara uday 😭 usne apne upar le liya or bechara akash wo tho bina wajhe pit gaya are use chod komal ke do lga kan ke niche !!! 😑 are esa koi bolta hai kya tum nhi mil sakte use jisne uski jaan bachai vo hi nhi mil sakta wha kya rule hai !!! 😑 samjhti kya hai apne aap ko usko bhi chod kamini maya jaise kud ko tho ptha nhi konsi rani samjhti hai haa nhi tho aurat hokar aurat ka dard nhi samjhti esi aurte hoti hai jinhe ithna pitna chaiye ithna pitna chaiye bas hath dedo mere fir bthati hu kithna pitna chaiye haa nhi tho !!! seriously pari do min mai tune 2 hearts se ise solmate part 2 bna diya lagta hai delhi mai jo RIP hua use zyada expire hui hai tu vese rula diya bhen !! isme sabse mast awesome character brijraj sabse sahi vo or unnati !! uday manyta tho sahi hai hi jagata bhi awesome sabse kamini isme sirf ek hai or vo hai maya the ullu ki patthi haa nhi tho !!!! or ye sali priya agar tu komal ke bachegi na tho lage hath do iske bhi bcha diyo !!! bhai bhen ko alag karne chali hai !! or agar in do ke bachegi tho sath mai karan ke ek nhi pachAS mario or sath mai ek lat ull ka ptha kamina kutaa haa nhi tho !!!

SORRY
GUYZ BUT GUSSA AA RHA THA PLZ FORGIVE ME !!! πŸ˜‰

Edited by priyash.. - 12 years ago

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