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Posted: 12 years ago
Maanveer ss:ajnaabi ehsaass
part-17...
Uday manyata ko hospital leke phuchta h.
'dr.dr.its emergency..
plz check hr..
dr'fast,jaldi inko emergency ward me lechalo...
Manyata ko jate h tbi uday ka bnd manyata k finger
me bond ho jata h..
Uday dekhta h..
Manyata k chahra pura khun se bhara h,uske
chahre pe pain clr show ho rha h...
uday uske pas jata h or apna hath use dur krta h
or uski trf dekh k khta h'main hu tumhare
sath,kuch ni hoga tumhein...
Phr manyata ko le jate h...
jay,komal,vijay nd gr aate h.
komal'kha h?manyata thik to h.
uday'wo dr.usko operetion.
vijay'opration mtlb critical h...
Uday'ha..
jay cryng'hua kya h sir?kha thi wo..
Uday preshan'pta ni,wo achanak meri car k
saamne aagai or..
komal'or uska accident hua h kya?
uday shockd'ni accident to means hua h bt use
phle...
gr'chup rho,accident tumse hua h,or police tumpe
ugli na uthaye isliye manyata ko hospital leaaye...
Uday again shockd'main uncle main aisa kyn?
vijay'khin uske sath kuch glt to ni kiya na tumne...
uday vijay pe hath utha deta h..
'aap sb pagal ho gye h,mujhe khud ni pta kya hua
h?accidnt hua h bt itna searious bi ni ki uski halat...
jay rone lgti h'manyata bs thik ho jaye,mujhe apni
bst frnd chahiye...
sb rone lgte h..
uday sad hoke bahar jata h nd he remember
manyata ofice se bahar aati h,nd uday ki car se
takra jati h...'
uday khada hota h nd wo sudden ofice jata h...
Uday'manyata itni rat ko ofice me kya?
sb to ghr pe the,phr wo akeli...
Uday caling jagat.
jagat'ha chotu bol...
Uday'bhai tune kha tha manyata ofice se nikal chuki
h.
jagat'arey tune puri bat suni hi ni,ofice me manyata
ruki thi,bt kya hua?
uday jhatke se apni car rokta h'kya?manyata ghr ni
gai..
wo whi apna sir pkad k rone lgta h'bhai,manyata
manyata.
jagat preshan'uday,kya hua?don't cry,tu kha h bta
main aata hu.
uday'bhai main ofice ja rha hu,aap jaldi aa jao
mujhe dar lg rha h manyata k liye..
jagat'ha ok..
uday phone cut krke whi aankhe bnd krke beith
jata h..
'sir,aap besharm ho..
Arey bewkuf bahar ja,bos se paise bad me lelena..
Main dulhan aap...
Sir,kapde aache to phne h,suit bi aacha h..
Sir,u r grt buisnesman.
Sir,ek crore me nuksaan bhoot hoga,halaki aap
amir ho koi frq ni pdega..
Sir,aap mujhe roj ghr chod dena,roj 40rs.bch
jayege..
In last tym
'she s sayng painful voice'sir,mujhe bcha liji...she
faint'...
achanak uday apni aanke kholta h'manyata..
Main kaash ruk jata tumhare kaash,main bhai ki
puri bat sun leta...
Jagat phuchta h'uday.
uday jagat ko hug krleta h'bhai manyata ko bchalo.
jagat'ok relax hua kya?
Uday use saari bat btata h..
'ek min.bhai us tym karan or bhaiya bi ruke the...
jagat'ha ruke the..
uday'bhai khin..
Jagat'uday,bhaiya pe.
uday'bhaiya pe ni karan pe,
uday ofice me jata h,jagat bi piche jata h...
wha sb check krte h dono chanbin krte h'bt wha
sb phle jeisa tha...
Jagat'uday hm hospital chalte h'manyata ko hosh
ayega tbi.
uday'bhai bhaiya ko cal kro abi..unse pucho wo
kha h.?
Jagat abi cal krne jata hi tbi maya ki cal aati h.
jagat'helo mom..
maya'uday jagat kha ho?
jaldi city hospital phoucho akash or karan ka
accident hua h.
jagat shockd'wht?i m cuming.
uday bhaiya karan ka accidnt hua h.
uday again shockd'ye ho kya rha h?bhai tum wha
jao main manyata k pas..
jagat'ok.
phr wo chale jate h...
Jay'dr.manyata keisi h?
Dr.hm abi kuch ni kh skte,mr.uday kha h?
vijay'unka kam tha manyata ko hospital phuchna
bs ho gya..ab wo ni ayenge...
uday'g dr.main yha hu...
..
Sb use dekh k shant ho jate h...
Dr.'mr.uday aap se mujhe akele me bat krni h,aap
mere sath aaiye...
Uday'aap chaliye main aata hu...
'dekhiye,aap sb ko mujhpe dout h,pr mera yakeen
kriye maine kuch ni kiya.'
wo bolke chala jata h...
'g dr.boliye.
dr'bhoot critical case h,manyata pe bhut cheet se
to specialy miror se bni chizo se uspe war kiya gya
h,uski puri body zakhmi h...
I don't know hosh me aane k bad uska react keisa
hoga bt ek bat or h uspe rape attempt ki koshish bi
ki gai h...
uday whi guse me lal hogya h...
'dr.aap bs use thik krdijiye.
dr.'hm apni puri koshish kr rhe h..
U don't wory..
dr.jane lgte h..
uday'dr.ek bat or.
Aap se agar koi puche ye ldki ko kya hua to
boldena meri car se accident hua h..
dr'wht?aap ye.
uday'plz dr.save hr life,mujhe uski bdnaami ni
chahiye..
dr.'ok...
Aap manyata husbnd h..
uday lookd dr.'no dr.
Main manyata ka boss hu.
Dr'oh,i m sry.itna preshan dekh k mujhe lga...
Uday'pr kuch to h jo jod rha h...
Jagat ka cal aata h'chotu,bhaiya or karan thik
h,jyada critical ni h,wo ghr ja the to raste me car
accident ho gya.'
uday'ya ok,main jaldi ghr aane ki koshish krta
hu,koi puche to dad ko ya gudiya ko bta skte ho...
Cal cut..
Jagat'chotu preshan h,ek hi rat me..
Br guse me hote h akash k ward me.
'akash,kb se tum wine pine lg gye..
Or karan aapne bi.
Akash'dad,sry i don't know keise?
karan'fufa g,sry wo mujhe late nyt disco ka shauq
h to maine akash se zid ki.
br'aapne jeene ka dhang bdliye karan,hm aisi
harquite bilkul brdaasht ni krege..
maya'ab jo hua so
br'ni maya,hr bar glt pe Pe na bolne se bache bigad jate h..
Karan apni aadat bdliye,hmare ghr k sanskar bdlne ki jrurt ni h..smjhe aap..

karan'g aage se aisa kuch ni hoga...
Br'jagat,uday kha h?
Jagat'wodad,aap se akele me kuch bat krni h...

'manyata dream dekhti h ki wo uday ki car k aage aake giri h,nd sudden wo aakhe kolti h dar k uthne ki koshish krti h,bolne ki koshish krti h..bt wo kuch ni kr pa ri h...

Dr'manyata ko hosh aagya h..
Uday bi jata h bt komal bolti h'tum mt jao uske pas..
wo bolke chali jati h...

uday ruk jata h...
Sb andar jate h.
jay manyata ko hug krti h'i m happy,tum thik ho..
Komal'ab se tu ofice ni jayegi,arey maana hm tere fav.mumy papa ni h,pr rent wale to h..
manyata smile..
vijay'hy r u ok na?
Manyata apni aankhe bnd krke ishaara krti h'ha.
Jay'nurse,manyata ko kya bolne se mna kiya gya h??

dr. Or uday andar aate h'ni,wo isliye ni bol ri kynki wo bol ni payegi...

sb shockd.uday also quitly cryng..
Manyata bi ro ri h...
Dr'mr.uday k hatho jo accident hua h,usme inki aawaz or pair hath k movement ni kr payenge...

manyata shockd ki uday sir ne accident'wo rone lgti h nd apni body ko zbrdasti move krne ki koshish krti h..

dr'nruse injection.
uday'ni,ek min.
wo manyata k pas ekdum close jata h'ni manyata plz shant ho jao,jo ho rha h whi thik h..
He wipes hr tears'apne pariwarwalo ko bdnaam mt kro,or main tumhein bdnam ni kr skta...
Manyata roti rhti h,or uday bolke bahar chala jata h..
Manyata thout'main ek hi din kitni mjbur hogai...

In nxt mrng..
br'hme ratbhar nind ni aai jagat'pta ni wo keisi hogi.
jagat'dad,uday ne kha tha wo sgai tk aajayega..
Br'sgaai,maya ne bi pta ni kya soch k priya piya ko..
kheir jagat tum taiyari kro...

Continuos

pari
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awsomeee...update pari
very emotionle
OMG OMG OMG...manyata ki awaz chali gayi aur hath per bhi move nahi kar sakti...hayoo...rabba ab ush kamine kutte karan ki pol kaise khulegi...plzzz...manyata ko thik kardo...aur ush karan kutte ki band bajado...update soon.
Edited by swetsurati - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: maneet..




@sonia weldone..
al rapiest deserve d bad gaalis..


thnk u thnk u😃😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
res😃


unres
tht karan bcz of him manyata is in dis condition 😡
hate him 2 d core
let burn in hell😡😡😡

poor manyata😭😭😭

loved uday's concern 4 manyata😃😃
hope he soon finds out the culprit and
send him 2 hell😈😈😈

do cont soon pari
Edited by princessSonia - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: swetsurati

Awsomeee...update pari
very emotionle
OMG OMG OMG...manyata ki awaz chali gayi aur hath per bhi move nahi kar sakti...hayoo...rabba ab ush kamine kutte karan ki pol kaise khulegi...plzzz...manyata ko thik kardo...aur ush karan kutte ki band bajado...update soon.




thanx 4 cmnt dear...

ofcourse bnd bjegi,bt jra tym sym lgega..
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Posted: 12 years ago
awsmmm pari yr soorry 4 short cment bt i m a bit busy exams
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: huma12.

awsmmm pari yr soorry 4 short cment bt i m a bit busy exams



its ok dear
thanx for cmnt
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Posted: 12 years ago
Aww that was a sad upate
I feel srry for manyata nd uday
Uday is the best he took all the burden on his head so manyata dosent face anything it made me cry
Please update as soon as possible
Hope everything is fine and the real culprit is caught hate that karan nd why dosent akash remember anything
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Posted: 12 years ago
pari pari pari... that was a gr8 update... haye rabba ab kya hoga? manyata's condition is 2 bad... uday kitna accha hain... jo kaam nai kiya uska bhi blame khud pe leliya... uske life main kitne probs hain. even i am feeling sad for m. bechari... plz... uski awaaz lautado, and yes, usko pehle jaisa banado. koi bhi chamatkar karo, bt plz... use thik karo
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG!!!What a chapter...so emotional...Uday is so helpless and for sake of Manyata he is ready to take all blame on him and other hand poor Manyata lost her voice... Ughh this Karan shame on you you evil...waiting for next

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