KYN DARD HEI TEREY PYAR MEI chap 1 pg 8

pia

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Posted: 12 years ago

#71

itss veryy nicee,waitng too read mree!!!!!!!!!

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anushruthi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#72

Beautiful

i love it very much

J sudargai finally !!

M as razveena cool

do cont soon

and PM me if possible

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_Grey_

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Posted: 12 years ago

#73

Gr8 job dear 👍🏼
Update ASAP and do pm me 😊

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Gargi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#74

Hey its long time u haven't updated😕...when r u updating next chapter?...

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mahilove

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Posted: 12 years ago

#75

CHAPTER 2

Razveena ordered the servants to pack her bag becoz her show was in mumbai.she was feeling weird just then sunny came and told thats its time for the flight.razveena was siiting in aeroplane and was immerge in her thoughts that why is she feeling so nervous suddenly sunny who was sitting next to her told her that her dress is super duper ready and this show will be hit and the zing magzine will be having the front photo of hers.the flight landed and she was waiting for her friend simrun just then someone taped her shoulder she turned around and saw that simrun was standing with a wide smile on her face ,they hugged each other kissed eachother everywhere (means on cheeks not on lips :X)they were screaming like they are mad evryone were looking at them and were murmuring that are they lesbo or what but they don give a damn attention they just end up when sunny shook them .

sunny;guyzz stop it aesa lag rha hei koi bechre hue bheney mil rhe hei sub dekh rhaey hei

simrun;so what should i do (facing towrds the people who were watching them)kya hua yahan drama horaha hei kya popcorn lau kya .. agara itney achey lag rhey hei to photo kech lo stupid (everyone got scared and moved away from them )

raz;easy take it easy yr tum nhe badle or na badlo ge hamesha ke hamesha dosron sey larte raheu ge

simrun:or nhe toh kya or na mei badlan chate hun ab chal sare baatein kya yahe karne hei madam chale

raz; ya lets go babesthey went to simrun house simrun parents welcomed raz and sunny and then sim showed raz room and told her to rest for a while becoz she would be tired and after 2 hours she will be busy with her show

raz took shower and took a nap

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Gargi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#76

it was great till where you updated😛..I liked the girls convo...was funny😆...update soon plz

Edited by sweet_gargi - 12 years ago

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mahilove

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Posted: 12 years ago

#77

Originally posted by: sweet_gargi
it was great till where you updated😛..I liked the girls convo...was funny😆...update soon plz

i will.actually i am very lazy for writing long long updates so cant update long updates 😃

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LadySosostris

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Posted: 12 years ago

#78

Ahhh finally u updated girl.But after waiting 4 so long itna chotu update!Its unfair Mahi.Anyways pliz cont soon n make it a bit long.Btw its a nice update.Really like it huh:D

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mahilove

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Posted: 12 years ago

#79

Originally posted by: Choco.Swiss
Ahhh finally u updated girl.But after waiting 4 so long itna chotu update!Its unfair Mahi.Anyways pliz cont soon n make it a bit long.Btw its a nice update.Really like it huh:D

yes i updated pheww lol...well thankxx swini ab kya karey mujhey jaan jate hei long updates likhney mei once again thank u😳

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