KYN DARD HEI TEREY PYAR MEI chap 1 pg 8

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😉THIS FF IS WILL BE CONTINUE FROM WHEN MANYATA LEFT THE PALACE AND UDAY FIND HER EVERYWHERE BUT COULDNT FIND HER ANYWHERE .HE WENT TO CHAWL BUT HE SHE WAS NOT THERE HE WAS WONDERING WHERE SHE HAS GONE THEN HIS MOBILE PHONE RANG HE PICKED IT AND WAS SHOCK HIS PHONE FELL FROM HIS HAND AND WAS HIS EYES WAS FILLED WITH TEARS ,THE PHONE WAS FROM POLICE STATION THEY SID THAT A GIRL HAS MET WITH AN ACCIDENT AND THEY HAVE DOUBT THAT THE GIRL IS YUVRANI MANAYATA AND THEY DESCRIBED HER CLOTHES AND THEY DESCRIBED HER WELL IT WAS HER PRINCEESS BUT HE DIDNT WANT TO ACCEPT IT AFTER NOT SEEING HER BY HIMSELF HE WENT TO THE HOSPITAL TO SAW THE BODY AND WHEN HE REACHED THERE HE SAW THAT SHE WAS HER PRINCESS SHE WAS HAVING A MARK ON HER BACK BUT IT COULDNT SEE IT VERY CLEARLY HE COULDNT RECONIZE HER BECAUSE HER FACE WAS HAVING BLOOD HE COULDNT SEE HER PRINCESS IN THIS CONDITION HE REACHED THE MEHAL BEFORE HE COULD TELL EVERYONE ...EVERONE KNOWS IT ALREADY EVERYONE WAS CRYING SPECIALLY KOMAL WHO WAS SHATTERED THE DS WHO WAS NOW GETTING BETTER GET WORSE KOMAL RAN TO HIM AND ASKED THAT THE ONE WHO HAS MET WITH ACIDENT IS NOT HER CHILD BUT UDAY REPLIED HIM WITH BREAKING TONE THAT HE HAS SAW HER AND HAS INQUIRY ABOUT HER SHE IS MANYATA OUR MANYATA ..KOMAL HEART WAS BROKEN INTO BILLION PIECES SHE SAID IN WEAK🥱😳 TONE
K;SULA SAAL BAAD HAMARE BETE HAMEY MILE THE AJ WO HUM SEY PHIR BICHAR GAE...FIRST TIME JAY WAS CRYING FOR HER JIJI SHE CAME TO KOMAL AND WAS SUUPORTING HER BUT KOMAL REFUSED AND SAID THAT BECAUSE OF U TWO MNAYAT IS DEAD (UDAY AND j)BRIJRAJ WAS CRYING AND WAS ANGRY AND HE WAS SHOUTING AT UADY GRIJRAJ WAS MAKINH HIM CALM AND WAS ASKING FOR FORGIVNESS FROM HIS SON SIDE UNNATI WAS VERY ANGRY ON HIS DADA SAID ...
IF U LIKED IT SHOULD I CONTINUE IT OR NOT😳😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome work👏sounds interesting continue soon👍🏼
Edited by mrs_kapoor - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome I loved it
Please manyata should not be dead
Forward it a few years then manyata should be back but a sophisticated and mordern and rich version
Then manveer fall in love all over again please
Please update soon I loved the beginning
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Edited by swetsurati - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: vampire12345678

Awesome I loved it
Please manyata should not be dead
Forward it a few years then manyata should be back but a sophisticated and mordern and rich version
Then manveer fall in love all over again please

Please update soon I loved the beginning

Waah puri srory line hi bana di hai Saira...kaya baat hai😆

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Really interesting and nice concept...👍🏼

but seems like a sad love story...continue soon...would like to read more🤗

and pm me...and sorry I havn't commented on your previous comment...I will dear just didn't get time to read it...😳

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: adorable_rana

Waah puri srory line hi bana di hai Saira...kaya baat hai😆



Hum tho sirf suggestion derahe the
I think this will be the story what do u think ruba
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Sounds good but plzz don't use capital letters... it makes it seem like you're shouting and plz divide your sentences in Paragraphs.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: mrs_kapoor

awesome work👏sounds interesting continue soon👍🏼

thank u sure i will continue it tomorrow
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: mahi0809

Sounds good but plzz don't use capital letters... it makes it seem like you're shouting and plz divide your sentences in Paragraphs.

okay dear i will do it

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