A Hate- Love Story: Ch-15 pg- 56 (Updated 27/11/16)

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Originally posted by: Aaish8
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A big thank you to these 17 people who liked the previous chapter.

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CHAPTER 13

Uday gets up, takes his guitar and starts to sing.

Chaand Sifarish Jo Karta Hamari Deta Woh Tumko Bata
Sharm-O-Haya Pe Parde Gira Ke Karni Hain Hamko Khata
Zidd Hain Ab Toh Hain Khud Ko Mitana Hona Hain Tujhmein Fanaa
Chaand Sifarish Jo Karta Hamari Deta Woh Tumko Bata
Sharm-O-Haya Pe Parde Gira Ke Karni Hain Hamko Khata
(Uday looks at Manyata and she is trying to act normal but is uncomfortable with Uday's constant gaze on her.)

(Uday forwards his hand to ask Manyata for dance. She looks at others and with approval nods from everyone puts her hand in his.)
Teri Adaa Bhi Hain Jhonke Wali Chhu Ke Gujar Jaane De
(Uday puts Manyata's hair behind the back of her ear. She moves her face.)
Teri Lachak Hain Ke Jaise Daali Dil Mein Utar Jaane De
(Manyata moves away from Uday. Uday gives Karan his guitar and he starts to play now)
Aaja Baahon Mein Karke Bahana Hona Hain Tujhmein Fanaa
(Uday holds Manyata's hand and turns her towards him in such a way that now her back is touching his chest and his hand is holding her hand and is resting on her stomach.)
Chaand Sifarish Jo Karta Hamari Deta Woh Tumko Bata
Sharm-O-Haya Pe Parde Gira Ke Karni Hain Hamko Khata
Subhaan Allaah Subhaan Allaah Subhaan Allah Subhaan Allah... (2)
(Manyata moves away from Uday and goes to a secluded corner. Uday goes behind her.)

Guys the song ends here. Nobody goes after Uday and manyata for obvious reasons 😉 *wink* *wink*. The other pasrt of the song is between Uday and Manyata only.

Hain Jo Iraaden Bata Doon Tumko Sharma Hi Jaaogi Tum
(Uday gets hold of Manyata's waist and pulls her closer to himself.)
Dhadakanen Jo Suna Doon Tumko Ghabraa Hi Jaaogi Tum
(Uday keeps Manyata's hand on his chest. She immediately pulls it and pushes him away.)
Hamko Aata Nahi Hain Chhupana Hona Hain Tujhmein Fanaa
(Uday stops Manyata by holding her hand.)

Suddenly the phone bell rings and Manyata is awaken from the trance and goes and picks up the phone.
She goes in the hall and tells everyone that it was from Raj to inform them that they had landed on the airport.

They took two 8 seater cars. One had the girls and the other had the boys.

IN THE CAR

J: Jiji waise aapke aur Uday ke beech mein kya hua?
Manyata: Matlab
J: Oh c'mon jiji ab itna innocent mat bano. Jab Uday aapke peeche bhaga bhaga gaya tab kya hua.
Manyata: Kya hona hai J. Kuch nahi hua
J: Toh aapko itni der aise lag gayi?
Manyata: Woh toh bas woh sorry bol raha tha.
J: Sorry kyu?
Manyata: Kyunki usne jo kiya mujhe nahi pasand aaya isliye.
Unnati (says to J in her ear): Aisa ho hi nahi sakta. Dada is baat ke liye sorry bol hi nahi sakte.

The rest of the time in the car, Manyata kept thinking that why did she let Uday do what he was doing. Why did she not say anything. Does that mean that she wanted this too.
On the other hand Uday was thinking the same too. Did Manyata not say anything because she was in a situation like his?
But neither of the two had answers to this.

When they reached the airport they had to wait for some time for the family members to come out.
When everybody came out, they hugged each other and headed home.

Precap: Everybody goes to picnic. The question that will Raj marry Aditi will be answered.

That's all people.
Hope you liked it.
Next update after 16 likes.

Edited by nityatandon - 9 years ago

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ekra rahnuma zaman.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#324

Yippe! Me First . 😃.Awsum,mindblowing,interesting update Nitya di. U & M were so cute & romantically involved with each other. Didn't they realise yet their luv 4 each other? J is very naughty. How she put M into trouble!😆.Song choice was also v.nyc. Promo quite interesting

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cuteariya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#325

finally after long time got update 😃
wow uday sang song for manyata 😃
awe manveer lost in each other 😉
wow raj coming back 🥳
loll jay teaser manyata 😉
manveer was lost in each other thought
continue soon

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sanghita0000

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Posted: 9 years ago

#326

WOW!! fantastic update dear...loved it

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Alisha Khan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#327

Heyy Nitya Sis Im Really Sry 4 Posting My Comment Late..

And Here Now I'm With My Comment..

I Really Loved The Way Uday Do His Work Of Singing Song And PLaying With Guitar..

And Chand Se Faarish Is My Favourite Song Of Film Fanaa... And Love The Way Jay Teased Manyata...

And Sry Sis Mein Bhul Gayi Yeh Raj Kon Hai..

And Precap Looks Good... Interesting...

And Plzz Next Chapter Jaldi Se Post Kardo..

Highly Waiting 4 It...

Aur Haan Yeh Chap Bhi Chotu Tha... Ab Barha Nae Kiya Toh Itne PMs Send Karongi Keh Aap Tang Ajahoge..

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Nibir Chowdhury

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Posted: 9 years ago

#328

One of my fav songs, great choice!! Great chappy also

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Nitya Tandon

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: ekra101
Yippe! Me First . 😃. Congratulations 😊
Awsum,mindblowing,interesting update Nitya di. Thank You 😃
U & M were so cute & romantically involved with each other. Didn't they realise yet their luv 4 each other? No not yet 😕
J is very naughty. How she put M into trouble!😆. Yes that was funny 😆
Song choice was also v.nyc. Promo quite interesting Thank You. 😊

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Nitya Tandon

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: cuteariya
finally after long time got update 😃
wow uday sang song for manyata 😃
awe manveer lost in each other 😉
wow raj coming back 🥳
loll jay teaser manyata 😉
manveer was lost in each other thought
continue soon

Thank You so much for the comment. Yes I'll do continue soon 😊.

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