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Posted: 12 years ago
Both de chapters were gr8 PaRi
dey were hillarious
had me laughing
the 57th part end was gud
loved it
precap
oh no
curious 2 knw wat led 2 dis
BR-GR toh hamesha ladte rehte hain
i hope nthng serious
thanks 4 de PM
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Posted: 12 years ago
Manveer ss. Two HEART:that BEAT as One.:-)
Part-58

Ds'ha jao dono mujhe,or mujhe bhu k rup me manyata jay ko hi dekhna h..

Uday'ha dadi,ab to maa bi 7th h,gr maan hi jayega.
Jagat'arey chal us jay se jyada bhabhi ki chinta ho ri h..
Ro ro k pta ni kya kiya hoga..
Uday'ha chal jaldi..

Komal'main aati hu tumhare papa ko mnana mera kam h..

Wo chali jati h bol k.
Or idhar manyata phr rone lgti h...
'wo abi tk ni aaya.
Tara'manyata tab leke beitha kr rone..
Vijay'srf
Manyata ko ni ni sb ldkiyo ko tab leke beithna chahiye.
Ha ni to

Jay'arey wo maan jayega..
Kuch ni hoga di.
'chup ho ja na..

Jagat aata h window se'ha bs jay use hi chup krati rh h,khud mt roya kr.

Manyata dekhti h.
Jagat'arey baap re jay ka hise ka bi manyata ne ro liya kya?
Bhai to ni aaya.

Manyata rote huye'wo jyada gusa h kya?
Jagat'ha uske to hath me chot bi lg gai..
Manyata'kya?
Gundagardi kr rha hoga.

Jagat'arey jay tumlogo ne khana kha liya..
Jay'ha,maa ne kasam deke khila diya..

Uday bi aata h'meri jan shi khti h'kasam na hogai candy ho gai,
Sb shockd..,
Jay'uday
Uday mirror me apni sakal dekhta h'ha hu to uday hi..
Jagat'ha bhai hi h...

Uday'weise bda unique h khana khake nergy aati h,rone me easy hota h..

Uday window k pas khada h,or manyata ko dekh k bol rha h...

Jagat'jay,weise teri jwan chalti ni,party bda pat pat bol ri thi..
Jay'ha to tum dono ulta sidha keise sun skte the hmare baare me..

Tara'or tu uday,manyata k baare me keise sun skta tha.
Bda pyar karta h na tu to...

Uday jagat chup..

Manyata cryng alot..
Uday'yar glti ho gai na,sry na.
Uske hath me se khun nikal rha h.

Jagat'glti tumhari bi to thi,tum apne papa k bare me ni sun skti hm apne papa k baare me ni sun skte the na..

Uday bi emotional ho jata h or abi bolne wala hota hi h tbi manyata fastly run krke uday ko hug krleti h..
Or rone lgti h.
Both tightly hug kr rkha h,both cryng.
Uday'main tere bina keise rh skta hu.
Imposible h na ye to...
Manyata'tu gunda h,pr jo bi h mujhe chod k kbi mt jaiyo..
Main ni rh skti tere bina...
Uday'tu mere bina rh ni skti,main to tere bina mar jauga..

Jagat jay k pas jata h'yar love u alot.
Jay hugd hm'kamine aise gya tha mujhe to lga ayega ni..

Uday wipes hr tears nd manyata wipes hm tears
Both said'sry
Love u alot alot alot...

Uday kised hr 4head..
Manyata sudden faint hojati h..

All woried.
Uday'manyata,kya hua?
Arey yar khana khake k bi behosh hote ho..
Akash ko bulao.
Vijay'uska phone bi ni hmare pas keise bulau.
Tara'weise uska kya kam?
Jay'dr.ki pdhai pdhi h usne isliye na..

Vijay jagat jate h akash ko bulane..


Gr'maya g shayed meri glti bi thi.
Ds'abi shayd pe atka h.
Maya'un bachiyo k jagah unanti ko rkh k socho.
Gr'glti krdi,kbi or mile to maafi unse jrur maguga.
Ds maya smile'jaldi hi mauqa milega.

Gr'keise?
Ds'wo dono to punjab me hi h...


Uday'isko kya ho gya?
Manyata uthna..

Jagat vijay phuchte h akash k ghr.
Manindar'kaun h?
Jagat tum ye kaun h?
Jagat'akash kha h?
Sona blush'beta apne rum me h.
Vijay'aunty blush mt kro,use bahar nikalo...
Sona'kyn beta?
Uski SR h.

Jagat'uska phone kha h ?
Sona'phone to bahar rkh k kr gya h.
Vijay'idhar do na.
Jagat'unanti k phone pe cal kr..

Akas unanti k 7th abi sone wala hota h tbi unanti k cel ki ring bjti h...

Dono dar k uth jate h..
Akash iritate hoke'maine kha tha phne ko switchof krdo...

Unanti'hto phle,phle cal dekho kiski h?
Akash'khud dekh lo.
Unanti'ye to tumhare nu.se cal h.

Akash shockd'kya?
Mera bl.
Unanti'hy bhagwan pic to kro.
Akash'hello..

Vijay'ha hello,jaldi bahar nikal,wrna tera saara bl.
Uda dunga.
Akash'kamine,wo bhaag k bahar jata h..

Unanti'jagat vijay itni rat ko kya hua?
Jagat'sry meri bhan,akash jaldi chal yar.
Akash'kya yar SR k din bi chain ni.

Jagat akash ko pkad k ek corner me lejata h.
Sun kal sb delhi chale jayenge,or pta h delhi me jo SR mnata h na,wo to bdi..
Akash'kya bdi?
Jagat'mst hoti h.
Akash'yar.
Vijay'arey akash main tere cel me bl.
Dlwa dunga.
Akash'pkka..
Jagat'ha.
Akash'chalo...

Unanti'main bi chalugi.
Sona'ni beta tu ni
Jagat'aunty jane do na..
Plz na.
Aapko akash ki kasam h.
Manindar'kasam
Vijay'hmare lye kasam ni candy hoti h.
Chalo jaldi ab.
Sb chale jate h..

Uday'tara ye uth ni ri h,kya ho gya?
Paani ka tab tk paani dal diya phr bi ni uthi...
Dhadkane bi chal ri h.
Tara'ha iska mtlb jinda h.,
Jay'chup hoja...manhus.

Unanti'kya hua?
Bhai.
Uday'unanti rukja,akash idhar aa,meri manyata ko pta ni kya hogya.
Dekhna.

Akash manyata ko dekhata h.
Unanti'ullu ki trh mt dekho,manyata ko kuch hua to phr SR cancel..
Jagat'ise bhayanak dhamki ni ho skti.
Uday'abe dekhna...
Jay'dekhna,teri dr.giri kb kam Ayegi..
Akash check krta h manyata ko
Or sb use bde gor se dekh rhe h..
Uday'dhadkne chal ri h.

Akash phr sbko dekhta h pather ki trh.
Jagat'kya hua?
Jay'aise kyn dekh rha h?
Tara'akash bol na
Unanti'bolo na
Uday'bol na.

Akash'yar manyata to wo h.
All said'wo h means kya h?
Akash'manyata me ab 2 jan h.
Jay'ha wo to pta h,ek bhai ki jan or ek iski,
Vijay'clr bat kr na.
Akash'uday tu bina shadi ka papa bnne wala h.
Uday'main bina shadi k papa...
wo window k pas khada ho jata h,he s emotional..

Manyata slowly'papa kaun bnne wala h?
Tara kised hr 4head'tu mumy bnne wali h..

Manyata suddn uthati h'kya?
O.
Uday kha h?
Jagat'oh,main chacha.
Wo uday ko hug krta h.
Cngrats.

Sb manyata k pait pe kan lga k dekhte h.
Manyata uday ko dekhti h.
Both happily cryng..

Uday manyata ko flyng kis krta h.
Manyata doing hm wink..

Akash'arey uske pait k samne se hat jao,wo abi ni niklega.
9mhine lgege..

Ye ab nanha nanhi ayenge..
Mja ayega..

Jagat'jay kha tha pura krle,tubi pregnant hoti..
Ha ni to.

All laugh..

Precap-both couples(manveer,j-j)mariage preparation..

Pari
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Fantastic, fantastic, fantastic update Pari. 👏 👏 Superb yaar Muaah.😆
Whole update was jus awesome no words to praise this update. I loved it.😉
This was one of the best update of this SS.👍🏼
Manyata is pregnant itni jaldi.😆 Great Pari.😉
Poor Poor Akash, I liked him in this SS. This is my ghisi piti line of my all comments of this SS.😆
Uski wedding night bhi nahi mana paya n VB bill uda dunga Mobile ka bahar nikal n after hearing this He was running towards him.😆
Akash- the Doctor.😆
UV-Manyata n J-Jagat scene was so cute n sweet.😳
Than Manyata fainted.😳 Everyone was so happy after hearing that Manyata is Pregnant.😉
JAGAT'S DIALOGUE WAS EPIC," KAHA THA NA PURA KAR LETE HAIN TOH AAJ TU BHI PREGNANT HOTI."🤣 🤣 He was hillarious yaar.🤣
Great, great update Pari.👏 👍🏼
Thanks for the regular updates.😊
Keep it up.😉
LOVE YOU. 🤗 🤗 🤗
Edited by Vasishtha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wooww this update caught be offguard I mean Manyata pregnant n ur precap was soo awesum they r getting married hope their parents donno that she is pregnant plzz dnt let that happen...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome Job pari Mindblowing YOu rocked it totally love you pari baby 😉😉

Ds'ha jao dono mujhe,or mujhe bhu k rup me manyata jay ko hi dekhna h..

Uday'ha dadi,ab to maa bi 7th h,gr maan hi jayega.
Jagat'arey chal us jay se jyada bhabhi ki chinta ho ri h..
Ro ro k pta ni kya kiya hoga..
Uday'ha chal jaldi..

LOL jagat kitne acchi tarah se apni bhabhi to janta hai 😆😆

Komal'main aati hu tumhare papa ko mnana mera kam h..

Wo chali jati h bol k.
Or idhar manyata phr rone lgti h...
'wo abi tk ni aaya.
Tara'manyata tab leke beitha kr rone..
Vijay'srf
Manyata ko ni ni sb ldkiyo ko tab leke beithna chahiye.
Ha ni to

LOL this part was so hilarious good going VB ladkiyon mein bada interest hai aapko tara
apne pati par nazar rakho 🤣


Jagat'arey baap re jay ka hise ka bi manyata ne ro liya kya?
Bhai to ni aaya.

lol jagat apni honewaali bhabhi to rula kar shram nahi aati tumko 😆

Sb shockd..,
Jay'uday
Uday mirror me apni sakal dekhta h'ha hu to uday hi..

lol i was literally laughing my ass off this was too hilarious pari

Both tightly hug kr rkha h,both cryng.
Uday'main tere bina keise rh skta hu.
Imposible h na ye to...
Manyata'tu gunda h,pr jo bi h mujhe chod k kbi mt jaiyo..
Main ni rh skti tere bina...
Uday'tu mere bina rh ni skti,main to tere bina mar jauga..

haaye rula dala pari so romantic😭😭😭

Uday kised hr 4head..
Manyata sudden faint hojati h..

lol when i read this i was like "aww manveer baby on its way"

Akash ko bulao.
Vijay'uska phone bi ni hmare pas keise bulau.

haaye aakah aur uska balance uff uff 🤣🤣

Jagat vijay phuchte h akash k ghr.
Manindar'kaun h?
Jagat tum ye kaun h?
Jagat'akash kha h?
Sona blush'beta apne rum me h.
Vijay'aunty blush mt kro,use bahar nikalo...
Sona'kyn beta?
Uski SR h.

arre bichare ko uski suhaag rat to manane do yaar varna vo bhi apni blance ke saath kahi suhaagrat na manale balance increase karne ke liye🤣🤣


pari aabhi ke liye itna hi read kar paayi and it was too hilarious baaki ki feeling baad mein zakhir karoogi mein okk aur plzz sorry if my comment is too long 😊😊😊love ya pari muahh baby aur ha plzz isse end mat kaaro itni jaaldi kuch dhmakedar kardo but end mat karo plzz

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Posted: 12 years ago
Comment edited on Page-44.😊
Thank u.🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
@sonam
muuuhh.
Love u r cmnt.
Love u alot..

@sumi thanx 4 cmnt dear
@sri muuuhhh

@andy i love lng cmnt shrt cmnt pasnd h pr 2lng bhot pasnd h.
Nd i loved ur cmnts.
Thanku darlng...

Pari
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Posted: 12 years ago
Fantastic update...Uday ki entry badi mast thi Manyata ke khar...
''kasam na rehkar candy ho gai hai''haha its really funny...
Akash ko SR se jyada to usse apne Balace ki padi hai...
Aww ManVeer mummy daddy ban gaye...Hurray
Edited by Pooja_0910 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
AWESOME PART PaRi

the rulana-manana scene was 2 good
loved it
And whn M faints i was lyk
yippee... manveer baby on de way

whn VJ asked for Akash's mobile
haaa ... bechara Akash dekhte hain balance
or kitne din hota hai 😉

OMG ye kya kiya PaRi
Akash DOCTOR !!!!!?????


Akash getting disturbed on his Suhagrat
was Epic . loved it Yaar

Akash checks M and sidhe sidhe answer karne
ke vajai ... loved his replies and how u wrote it

MANVEER emotional moment Awww...

Jagat dialogue 'jay kha tha pura krle,tubi pregnant hoti..
Ha ni to.'
It was hillarious had me cracking 😆

Precap - yaay Manveer, j-j marriage
Congo ⭐️

Bechara Akash ab toh uska honeymoon
hi hoga aur vo bhi shayad pure group ke sath
hehe 😃

MARVELOUS update
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome pari...iam loving the character akash for the first time...😊

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