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Posted: 13 years ago
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Manveer ss.
Two HEART:that BEAT as One.:-)
Part-12th

Uday'ha to maine kb kha mera baap sunder h,wo bi drwane h..or ghr me bi drate rhte the...
Lekin tere baap se to swt hi honge.ha ni to.
Manyata dar ri h'aacha thik h mera baap tere baap se jyada sundr h,thik h.ab ldna plz..
Uday smile'apni jan bchane k liye sb kuch me ha me ha mila ri ho'
Manyata'o tenu ldna ni aata to bol de,main inke 7th chali jaugi.us waqt se..
Uday'ruk...main apna kurta nikalta hu.
1gunde'oye ye bde kamal k h kudi-munda aisi situation me ld rhe h..
2nd:weise wo jeet kamine ki shadi ay najuk ldki k 7th.
Uday'o paa g,najuk mt smjho ise,wo hste huye bolta h,utha k patak deti h,tod bi degi tujhe'
Manyata iritate hote'kurta kyn nikalna h,romance ni krna,ldai krni h.
Uday naugtynes k 7th use dekhta h'oye bol to wo bi krlunga..or hsta h.
Manyata ki ye kya bol diya maine'main tere se glti krdi hlp maang k hat pre gadha'wo use bck pe hit krti h hat..
To uday thoda aage ki trf gir jata h.
Or manyata jaane lgti h tb ek gunda use pkd leta h..
Manyata'oye,bttmeez chod mujhe,wrna. To uday guse me gunde ka hath pkad leta h'chod uska hath wrna wo to bad me todegi main tujhe phle tod dunga.'kudi ka hath chad.
Gunda'oye ye dono kuch ni kr skte faik rhe h,maar saale ko,or kudi ko utha ke le chal..
Uday smile nd start fightng.,
Wo unhe hit krta h,kbi hath se kbi pair se,kbi danda se marta h..
Manyata khadi hoke mje le ri h...
'oye hoye,tujhe to ldna bi aata h..
Uday'tu dikhne me taqatwar h,lekin kya fayeda..ha ni to..
To uday na unhi gundo ko unhi Kapdo se tree k 7th baandh deta h..
Uday thka hua h.
Manyata'o thanku...mere baap k gundo k 7th msti krne k liye.
Uday'waah,tere ghr me msti itni dardnak hoti h..
Manyata'ek gal dhash..tu
Uday'tu ek kam kr gundo ki care kr main chlta hu.
Manyata'chii,inki care,tera dimag such me khraab ho gya h...wo chl deti h.
Uday'is duniya me difrent-2 k log h...

Uday'finaly tumne mujhe thanku bol hi diya...
Manyata'jyada uchal mt,wo tune meri hlp ki isliye.
Uday'hlp to phle bi ki h.
M'kaun si.
Uday rukta h'or manyata ka hath pkdta h'bngles dikhata h ye wali.
Manyata'ha to lele,mujhe ni chahiye.
Uday'dekh meri maa ne mujhe chudiya phni ni sikhai,tere ghr me agar ldke chudiya phnte h to dediyo ha ni to.
Manyata smile nd wo apne aap se khti h'takker ka bnda h ye...

Wo dono chalte-2 bat krte h..
Uday'tune khud kha tera baap bhayanak h,to teri maa sunder hogi isliye tu bi...
Manyata use dekhtai h,uday bi bolte-2 ruk jata h'apni maa pe gai hogi,aise kyn dekh ri h jeise kha jayegi..
Manyata'ha maa sunder h,bt papag bi sunder..aacha ek gal dhash,tera baap to sunder ni h,to teri maa sunder hogi tbi thoda chikna type h tu..
Uday'ye kya sunder-2 lga rkha h,mard h hmare papag ldki ni h,tere ghrwalo ka pta ni..
Ma:ha to sunder to u hi bolte h na...
Uday'tum sbkuch u hi bolti ho..
Manyata'weise kyn kha?maa sunder h.
Uday'sbki maa sunder hoti h..
Manyata'hmmm..wo bolke aage chali jati h.
Uday thout'qki tu sunder h...kudiye.
Uday bhaagta-2
'weise ek bat btao,tum ghr kb ja ri ho?
Manyata'ghr se hi to bhaagi hu.
Uday'o teri,simran Ko bhgaa k khud bhaag gai..weise bhaagi kyn?
Manyata'oye tujhe use kya.?tera wo haddi ki dukaan tera bhai ni dikh rha h.
Uday'ha wo pta ni keisa hoga,main ghr se bhaaga hu,uday thout-aaj rat ko ghr jaunga apne bhai bhan se milne..mera man kr rha h..
'weise tumhare 7th bi wo pink mirchi bi to ni h,pink mirchi jha ni,wha haddi kya krega..naugtynes me ha ni to..
Manyata'ek to na itne kareeb ake mt bol mere se dur rh..tere jeise munde pe mujhe bharosa ni h...
ha ni to

O wo jaane lgti h.
Uday hste huye'aacha suno to,tumhi ne to kha tha,romance krna h main kurta utar deta hu.
Manyata'besharm dur rh mujhse aa..aa..mera pair..
Uday'kya hua?
Manyata udhr hi beith jati h,mera paire me kaanta chubh gya.
Uday'ruk ek min.main dekhu..
Manyata'ni rhne de jitne deir tk tu dekhega utni deir me main nikal lungi' uday'to kya dekh k main us kaante se pyar kruga,main bi nikalunga..hi.
Manyata kaanta nikalne ki koshish krti h,lekin jeise hi wo kaant nikalne jati h,weise hi uday shoute krta h'aa,nikl gya aaj to.
Manyata dar jati bar-2'kya h tum chila kyn rhe ho?mujhe kaanta nikalne do.
Uday'kaanta na ho gya,teer chubh gya ho,weise apni sleeper kis jrurtmand ko dediya.
Manyata'wo whi shadi me rh gai,wo dar dar ke apne kante ko touch krti h.
Uday'tum na puri pagal ho,bhaagi bi ho to aise saj dhaj ki kisi ki bi njr bigad jaye,wo janbujh k uske pair pkdta h,or manyata suddn uski trf dekhti h'tujhe kya krna main jeise bi bhaagu,jruri tha,or apni njr kaabu me rkhiyo'
Uday bolte-2'meri njr tere njr jeisi ni h,smjhi..wo kaanta nikal nikal deta h,or manyata ko pta bi ni chlta..
Manyata'meri njr ko kya hua?
Uday lughng'tumne kha tha na,kurta kyn utarna h,romance krna h kya?
Manyata pissed hoke'tum na
,tum na chup rho,or mujhe kaanta nikalne do.
Uday'ha nikalo apna teer'
Wo jeise hi apna pair dekhti h kaanta ni h.
'kaanta kha h?
Uday'ander chla gya tumhari body me,khoj lo apni body me..
Manyata'tum na..thanku once again.
Uday'ye rha kaanta lo aarti utarlo'chla jayega na tumse ya ni.
Manyata'ha chala jayega,ni chalti to kya krte?
Uday'main phr chup chap chla jata..or kya,hath dukh rhe h tumhein utha k ni le ja skta..'nd laughng.
Manyata again hit bck...
Uday'tum ghr kb jaogi?
Manyata'pta ni.!
Uday'mtlb,ye kya jwab hua..

To awaaz aati h phr,oye us uday ko dhundo,giriraj ko wo chahiye..
Uday'o shit,ye mera baap na.
Manyata hsti h'main yhi soch ri thi ki tere beautiful papag ne abi tk tere ko dhudne k liye gunde kyn ni bheje.
Uday'manhus,mt socha kr,ruk main apna kurta utar ku,ldne me aasni hogi,itna heavy kurta lda ni jata.
Manyata use ajeeb tarike se dekhti h..
To uday use shouldr se lightly push krta h'oye romance krne k liye kbi or'or hsne lgta h.
Manyata'kitne besharm mre honge tb jake tu hua hoga..ha ni to
Uday'wo to pta ni,lekin ha jis din main smarty hua hu us din bhagwan ne tujhe itme ko bnane me lge hnge..ha ni to...
Tb wo kurta nikalta h apna to manyata uske bipas dekhti h...
Or use touch krti h
'arey wah,body sody to bhoot h teri...
Uday'ha to ldai kya tere bal pe kr rha tha,inhi k bal se ld rha tha..
To manyata apne bipas Check krti h,mere to ni h.
Uday'chl jb main tujhe apne ghr le jaunga na tb tujhe exersize krauga.
Manyata'oye main tere ghr kyn aaungi..'
Uday chup...
Manyata'weise body sody mst h teri...
Uday'oye bolna bnd kr wrna teri njr lg jayegi..
Manyata'hat pare idhr se,thanku ni bol skta..mere piche-2 chl main aage aage chal ri hu.'
Uday jaldi-2 tej chalta h,main kya tera bodyguard lga hu..chup-chap race lga.
Manyata'such isse bda besharm koi ni hoga...o god...

Jay,vijay nd tara.
Jay'vijay bhai mujhe di ki chinta ho ri h,pta ni kha hogi.
Vijay'arey wo thik hogi,jha bi hogi uska kam chl hi jata h.lekin abi tk uska phone ni aaya.
Tara-4din ho gye h,gunde piche h,pta ni dar lg rha h.hy babag kudi nu thik rkhna..

Jagat'papag agar apke bheje hue gundo ne bhai ko kuch kiya na to dekhna.
Gr:oye main tera baap mujhe dhamki mt de.
J:maa,agr tere ek bete ko kuch hua na to dusre ko bi bhul jaiyo.ha ni to

Precap:uday manyata ko leke aata h apne ghr,...

Pari
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey Pari 🤗, another awesome update👏. Now hwat is Uday and Manaya planning to do😉,behave like fake husband and wife in front of Uday's family🤣. Gosh this is getting more and more exciting.😆 And thanks for the PM meri jaan 🤗
Edited by chitra_rao - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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aww it was super cute loved it awesome cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wonderful freaking awesome please update soon and this part was great manveer in the jungle and now he will take her home that sound cool pleas update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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WOW! Love the update. It is super duper cute. LOL! uday and manyata har jagah ladte hi rehte hain. And manyata was checking out uday.. lol!

Precap is very interesting. So, guess manyata is going to stay in uday's house. WOW! loving it!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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🤣🤣pari this was hilarious
especially that kurta and romance wala dialogue😆😆😆
i was off my chair now
this was amazing, i cant stop my self from laughing now.
awesome👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hahahahahehe...:-D:-D:-*:-* very nice. Update soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#98
Manveer ss.
Two HEART:that BEAT as One.:-)
Part-13th

Maya'mere bache apne maa-baap se hi jwan ldate h.
Un:aap log hi mjbur krte ho..
Gr guse me unanti pe hath uthate h..
Jagat'bs yhi rh gya tha,papag ek bat smjh lo,bhai h is ghr me h to is ghr ki khushiya h wrna ni...
Aap logo ki meri duniya ruki pdi h...
Chl unanti,yha kisi ko hmari khushiyo se..
Wo chle jate h.
Maya'unanti bdi ho gai h,bache ko is trh.
Gr angry me 'oye,mujhe ya meri izzat se koi frq ni pdta.mujhe preshan krdiya h tere bacho ne...

In other side...
Uday'tu ja apne ghr,tere maa-baap chinta kr rhe honge..
Or wo pinky sister or tera bhai wo tere bina pagal ho gye honge...
Manyata cryng'mujhe bi sbki yad aa ri h,pr main ghr..
Uday uski trf dekhta h,she s cryng.
Uday use decently dekhta h..automatical bolta h.
'rote huye tu aachi ni lgti...
Manyata use ni dekhti 'rote huye koi aacha ni lgta..
Uday cntinuos use dekh rha h'oro ka pta ni,lekin tum bilkul aachi ni lgti,
Wo aise bolta h pyar se,to manyata ko bi feel hota h to wo bi use pyar se dekhti h'kyn?
Uday pyar se wipes hr tears.
'qki tumhari aankhe hste huye hi aachi lgti h'
Manyata innocently use dekhti h.
'tumhein keise pta?
Both in eye cntct
Uday'qki tumhari aankhe hsti h to tumhara chahra hsta h,or jb tum hsti ho to,duniya ki sbse...
Manyata'sbse...kya?
Uday realize'ki ho kya rha h ye?to wo bat change krdeta h
'tum apne ghr kyn ni ja skti?
Manyata bi phr sochti h ye kya ho gya?'wo ghr se bhaagi hu na,puch k ni bhaagi hu na.'
Both laughng.
Uday'to kha jaugi?
Manyata'ghr to
Jaugi.jb sb thik ho jayega.4days katgye na 3-4 din or ct jayegnge.
Uday'gundo se kaun bchayega?
Manyata'jeise tu mil gya,weise koi or bi ld lega mere liye.
Uday'chl mere 7th,jitne din rhegi utne din me exercise sikha dunga.tb ldti rhiyo..
Manyata'tera baap puchega ni,main kaun hu?
Uday'pagal ho kya?main to chori-2 apne rum me jaunga.ha ni to.
Mere papag mujhe dekhte hi rifel se uda denge..
Manyata'ha to chl.lekin mere bhai bhno ko udhr milne k liye bulayega?
Uday'chl itne risk leliye to wo bi..chl.

In nyt.
Jagat akash nd unanti sad hoke beithe h.

Wo dono apne ghr k niche khade h.
Manyata dhire se'uper se tumhein koi ni khinchega,tumhein hi chadna pdega.'
Uday'arey main soch rha hu tujhe keise..
Manyata'oye tu chad main aajaugi..
Uday'pkka.
Manyata'ha na ja..

Jagat'yar main bi ja rha hu,bhai ko dhudne mera man ni lg rha h.
Tbi window se awaz aati h'oye jagat kha h?hath de wrna gir jaunga.
Jagat'o teri,bhai,uski khushi ka thikana ni wo window k pas jata h uday ko hath deta h,nd uday nter in rum..
Nd again all cryng.nt akash...
Uday chup ho jao,akash se kuch sikho gya tha to bi aankho me akaal tha aya hu to bi..
Again all laughng.,..

Manyata'oye koi hath do,haddi ki dukaan tu mt diyo,wrna mujhe uper layega ni,khud niche aa jayega..
All laughng..
Jagat'ye kis gundi ko utha ke laya h.
Uday'khud dekh le khush ho jayega...

To uday hath deta h,manyata nter in rum
Sb dekh k shocked h.
Jagat'o teri,tu lal mirchi,ye kha mil gai,or wo pink wali kha h?

Tb uday use saari bat batata h.
Jagat'simran teri dost kyn Bni thi,ab pta chla..
Manyata uncom4tble feel kr ri thi..wo chup ho gai thi.
Jagat'tum whi ho jo bhai ko katne ko duadti thi,or aaj chup kyn ho?
Unanti ko smjh aa rha tha'of oh,chup ho jao,manyata idhr uncmfortble feel krne ki koi jrurt ni h,apna ghr hi smjho.

Uday nd jagat dono 7th bolte h'ni ni apna mt smjhna,ye ghr maya k nam pe h.
Manyata'maya kaun?
Uday'hmari maa..
All laughng..
Jagat'tum apni bhn ko bi bulao na.nam kya h uska?
M:jay
Akash:jay,bda alfabetic nam h.
Jagat'main bi j wo bi j.kamal h.
Uday'tubi j wo bi j
Ye bi m or maya bi m..
Jagat:waah..chl bulate h.pr keise?

Uday'jagat vijay tera dost h.
Jagat'ni ni meri dost j h na.
Uday'arey tera dost vijay nd unanti teri dost jay..chalo phono kro bulao dono ko yha..'
Akash'rat ko aajayege wo?
Uday manyata ki side dekhta h'gundi k bhai bhan h aa hi jayege..
Manyata'gunda hoga tu,hat..wo nu.milati h vijay ka.
Vijay or jay beithe h.
Vijay pic d cal
'hello kaun?
Uday'tera baap.be.
Vijay'mera baap ghr me h,tu kaun h ye bta.
Uday'manyata se milna h to is addres pe window k thru rum me aaja.
Vijay happy'kha h manyata?
Manyata'vijay bhai,jay ko leke jaldi aajao yha.
Vijay'ha hm aate h..rukna jaana mt...

Jagat'oye sun wo jay ko jrur laiyo,surprize h uske liye..
Cal cut.
Akash'surprize kaun sa?
Uday'hm kya surprize se km h.
All laughng...

Then sudden gr door nock krte h jagat k rum ka..
'oye jagat tere rum se ye awaaze keisi aa ri h.
All shocked.
To jagat uday hste h,or game khlete h.dono..
Uday'main kyn btau?
Gr:o ye awaz to uday ki h.
Jagat'dekhlo khud Itna mis kr rhe ho,meri awaz bhai ki lg ri h.
Gr:oye khote darwaza khol.
Uday'main ni kholuga,phle bhai ko shi slamat ghr bulaao.
Gr:oye agar wo shi slamat aa bi gya na to uski taange main toduga...uski shadi phr zbrdsti kra dunga.
Uday'weise us kamre ki shadi ho gai kya?
Gr cnfused wo apne aap se bolte h'lgta h uday ki yad kuch jyada aa ri h isliye uski awaaz sunai de ri h!wo bolke chale jate h...
All laughng..
Unanti'weise manyata tum bhaagi kyn?
Manyata'main apni shadi wale din bhaagi thi,mere papag ek gunde meri shadi kra rhe the isliye.'
Jagat'oye hoye,shadiya tudwate-2 apni shadi se hi..
Akash'weise uday bi to shaadi se hi bhaaga tha apni,or tumbi.
Unanti:thouts bdi same h.
A:dono shadi kyn ni krlete.
Uday-manyata sudden ek dusre ko dekhte h...
Manyata'ye kaun sa gunde se km h
Jagat'ha to tu kaun si km
Uday uske muh pe hath rkh deta h'beta km bol,bura maan jayegi.
Unanti dhire se'oye hoye ki gal h,bura maan jayegi,bda khyal h iska..
Jagat'chad yar,ye pink wali kyn ni aai...

To akash window ki trf dekhta h to wo dono khade h.
'oye wo dono aa gye,
Manyata phr dekhti h,wo hi krte h..
Vijay phle aata h,phr jay aati h.
Then manyata cryng alot.wo 3no bi hug krte h tightly...
'papag maa keisi h?
Jay'rhne de mt puch,tere bina rhna sbka muskil h,phr bi jhutha gusa dikhate h.
Vijay'or wo jeet kamina,jis din tu use thappad maregi na us din mujhe bi bula liyo,main bi dho dunga pakad k use..ha ni to.
To jay jagat ko dekhti h.
Jagat'hi pinky keisi,bhai ki tunning lal mirchi k 7th bhagwan g ko mst lgti h or tere 7th meri.
Jay'ye yha kya kr rhe h,di?
Uday'teri bhan aai h yha,ye hmara hi ghr h.
Manyata'ni ye tumhara ghr ni maya ka ghr h.smjhe.
Ha ni to..
Jagat'sb sudhr jayenge,lekin tum ni.
Vijay'ye sb chd phle ye bta yha keise?
Phr uday,jagat btate h...
Vijay'ye kya reason hua shadi se bhagne ka uday?
Uday manyata se'tere is bhai ki shadi ab pkka kisi bhais ldki se kraunga...
Vijay'main ldki se shadi ni kruga...
Sb bolte h'kya?
Uday use ajeeb tarike se dekhta h'jagat,akash piche hato,tu ldka hi h na,ya
Vijay'arey mera mtlb moti ldki se shadi ni krunga.
Jagat'aacha,bhai sb thik h,yar vijay double meaning baatein mt kiya kr.dar lgta h...

Precap:uday-manyata love...

Pari
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Posted: 13 years ago
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🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 FANTASTIC & VERY FUNNY UPDATE PARI.👏 👏 👏
ARE YAAR MERE TUMMY MEIN PAIN HO RAHA HAI ISE PADNE KE BAAD.😆 😆 😆
I LOVE JAGAT-UDAY TUNIING.😉
GIRIRAJ & UV CONVO THAT WAS HILLARIOUS.🤣 🤣
PRECAP WAS DAMN INTERESTING.☺️ ☺️
THNKS FOR THE FABULOUS UPDATE & PM.😊
LOVE YOU.🤗 🤗
THIS SS IS MY LAUGHTER MEDICINE.😆 NOW I'M ADDICTED WITH YOUR BOTH SS.😳
Edited by sonam2801 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
brilliant update pari 😃 and sorry yr mai fb pe like and comment ni kr pai mera net problem kr rha hai by the way the best scene was when uday wipes manayta tears and vijey :me larki se shadi ni krun ga

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