The Guard Of Honour Manveer ff :) note pg 65 - Page 3

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Posted: 13 years ago
#21
Amazing Start
Very interesting
Loved both parts
Akash is in here too as villan oh well without a villan no fanfic can go ahead😆
Cont Soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anam Ali

Amazing Start

Very interesting
Loved both parts
Akash is in here too as villan oh well without a villan no fanfic can go ahead😆
Cont Soon

unfortunately he isnt he is manyata's brother
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Posted: 13 years ago
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GR8 WORK.LOVED THE UPDATE 👏...M DYING TO NOE HW D STORY UNFOLDS
PS THANKS FOR PM😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Aakash as Manyata's brother!!!🤣🤣
Awsome!! Do continue soon! And please add me to ur PM list!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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HEY GUYS
first of all thanx for ur appreciation
and sorry i would not be able to update tomorrow

si here is the precap of chap 3

manveer first meeting uday in anger holds sneha tightly,
he throw the glass of wine on her her legs starts to bleed bcoz of the cut by the glass
mr verma was in hospital ,she was looking him with love when he took her in his arms and went up the stairs

i knw there is alot of confusion and suspense will be cleared when i will update
regards
ROCKER12
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Posted: 13 years ago
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No prob dearie can totally understand!! love ur ff!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow nice one mam.n yeah no probs.suspence haye i loved the suspence...lovely promo.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: Swini01

Wow nice one mam.n yeah no probs.suspence haye i loved the suspence...lovely promo.

hey lazy queen when are u going to update the remaing part
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Posted: 13 years ago
#29
Guys here is chapter 3 hope u like it

Chapter 3

Mr verma was taken a back by this reaction of media and when to see who was coming who was more important than the merging news of two top companies after seeing him his blood started to boil

It was non other than yuvraj udayveer singh of jaigar who has taken jaigarh hotels and industries in to a new path with his sharp mind

kunal: always hated him he had a dream to became the best businees man but he has to go through the biggest obstacle of business yuvraj udayveer singh

Media turned towards him and were taking his pics

Udayveer: seeing kunal uday says to the media thanx people I am always famous in the media u should also gives importance to those people who are demanding it

Heaing it and seeing kunal facial expression sneha and the whole gathering just gave a laugh and this turned kunal into a monster he always was a monster he considered only him and him

Aditya: but u said about dad in the same way he was also selfish?

Unatti: yup he was but when it comes to girls his selfishness turns into his self wishes he was aplayer I told u earlier

Now then akash turned away from sneha(manyata was given the name sneha) she thaugt he was hurt she replied to udayveer yaa everybody knws who wants to be the center of attraction

Udayveer: surely everyone knws na look who is there drinking wine like a looser

Manyata: u are such a egostic man u find everyone likes ur self

Udayveer: with his smirk hold her tightly reffering to kunal sunshine there is only one udayveer singh I think u must se doctor u are comparing me to tat loser ahh forget it

And he moves away from her

Somewhere in his chest he felt something was beating wild he had an unkown urge to meet her and to touch her but he then leaves it when his mind told him girls die for him not he

Sneha: moves toward kunal who had left the party bcoz of every one laughingbut meanwhile became an monster drinking the wine when she tried to console him he just through the glass of wine on her which made a cut in her leg she was taken a back by this reaction and now held her tightly and in all anger what were u trying to show laughing on what that bloody creepy udayveer said and was forcing her saying u will be punished for it as u are going to be mine ur dad business is under a rough and needs me and trying to remove her dress she was trying he best to ressist but couldn't stand even a chance

Suddenly kunal flew with the wind it was udayveer who kicked himso hard on his stomach he was bleeding from his mouth

Uday jr : uhuuu dadu is the one who saved dadi

Unatti: with smile who else would

Udayveer: somebody called me and said to kunal yar u are always a losser sneha was crying her duppata had fallen on the ground he picked that up and gave it her he then took her into his car she was not able to move bcoz of the cut from the glass he thaught she might be resisting but he thaught to leave her to her house would be better he picked her up and placed her in the car she was crying like hell he didn't knw what to do when people cry he told her to be calm but she wouldn't listen she was quite then he broken the silecne by saying I told u he was a loser u did even know his identity he has newly seen money tats why wanted to get everthing with it tell me where do u live ill drop u there

Suddenly she spoke what do u think he is a jerk ur are no better then him u also insulted him

Udayveer: in anger hit his hand on the window of the car and it broke his hands were bleeding she was scared don't be scared tat is the differnce bw me and him he can hurt any one but I fight like a man I never hurt women suddenly he noticed her foot was wounded all his anger was gone in a mere he stoped the car an inquired about it she told him he thn picked her up she was looking him with an unkown feeling she never had she didn't want him too leave her and he placed her on the bad put his asked her about the first aid box and bandaged her leg and then was about to left she said thanx to him

Uday: with his smirk on said my pleasure sunshine and then left

Ranveer: what a first impression she would have fallen for him

Unatti: they were both different characters if he was charming she was the most stubborn but that night was a journey for a change in udayveer he never cared for anyone but she was the start of a new development in udayveer

All the night they both didn't slept thinking about the events that happened both have an unusual feeling about each other but both don't realised it suddenly manyata looked at her wirst her bracelet was not there but kunal was in the hospital being treated there

Next morning when she woke up she find him in her room and shouted what are u doing here?

good morning sunshine


sincerely

ROCKER12

Edited by rocker12 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow Rocker itz awesome.i m speachless.pliz cont soon..becaouse now i cant wait.haye last scene...uff...keep up the good work mam.n yeah mere pass ek surperice hai...guesss guess...guesss...

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