The Guard Of Honour Manveer ff :) note pg 65

hamra

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Posted: 13 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: Swini01
Wow Rocker itz awesome.i m speachless.pliz cont soon..becaouse now i cant wait.haye last scene...uff...keep up the good work mam.n yeah mere pass ek surperice hai...guesss guess...guesss...

tmhara agla chap ready hga but mere pas use bhe bara surprise hae tmhare lie u will love it guess guess guess

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Swinipriya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: rocker12

tmhara agla chap ready hga but mere pas use bhe bara surprise hae tmhare lie u will love it guess guess guess

OMG dont tell me ki tumhara next chappy tum thorey time main post karney valey hoo.am i right sweetheart...if then yeppi yeppi yppi.now i cant wait.dinka chika dhinka chika...yes yes yes.

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Sarah

@MsLuscious

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Posted: 13 years ago

#33

Read all the chps n0w l0vd it do c0ntinue

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hamra

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Posted: 13 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: Swini01

OMG dont tell me ki tumhara next chappy tum thorey time main post karney valey hoo.am i right sweetheart...if then yeppi yeppi yppi.now i cant wait.dinka chika dhinka chika...yes yes yes.

no dear but i am glad u like my work i was about to add a character as lazy as u in a next xhap

so thaught i must add ur name swini the lazy queen will update it soon dun worry :p

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Swinipriya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#35

Oh really mam..haye agar main lazy hoo toh Nikaami kya hai.main toh atleast cont karti hoon but Nia usney toh 3 ss cont nahi kiya.tabhi toh sab ussey nikammi kehtey hai.anyways mam lazy toh main hoo..so issliya chappy 15 likha toh hai but bohout short..hope u like it.

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hamra

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Posted: 13 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: Swini01
Oh really mam..haye agar main lazy hoo toh Nikaami kya hai.main toh atleast cont karti hoon but Nia usney toh 3 ss cont nahi kiya.tabhi toh sab ussey nikammi kehtey hai.anyways mam lazy toh main hoo..so issliya chappy 15 likha toh hai but bohout short..hope u like it.

it was awesome by the way now u are cming on track being rgular cont soon

next time i want it big and hate that abhay why did he came in such a lovely moment :p

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LadySosostris

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Posted: 13 years ago

#37

Wow Rocker nice one.loved it.cont soon n pm me if u can dear.

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-JEHAN-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#38

awesome...👏👏👏

i loved it...read all 3 chap in one go...in second chap the lines u wrote about uday i got a lump in my throat...

awesome concept...really amazing..out of the world..and the way u r writing it its just WOWWW...👏

and yeah kya kam kiya hai akash manyta's bro...ahaaa...lovely!!!

really can't gather enough words...

i loved it...

plz update soon...and do PM Me...

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Supernatural_10

@Supernatural_10

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Posted: 13 years ago

#39

Amazing Part

Well Akash being her brother might still cause trouble that depends on u

Cont Soon

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Mahibeejay

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Posted: 13 years ago

#40

Wow... What a lovely part!!! I liked it much but please make it lill bit longer... Thanks for this wonderful update and PM...please update next part soon...

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