The Guard Of Honour Manveer ff :) note pg 65 - Page 5

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome!! Loved it!! Continue soon n thanks for the pm:D
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Posted: 13 years ago
#42
Really good chapter and nice 1st meeting of manveer
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Posted: 13 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: Anam Ali

Amazing Part

Well Akash being her brother might still cause trouble that depends on u
Cont Soon

yup he definately will :p
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Posted: 13 years ago
#44
lyk it very much . do update soon and add me to ur PM list
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: -JEHAN-

awesome...👏👏👏

i loved it...read all 3 chap in one go...in second chap the lines u wrote about uday i got a lump in my throat...
awesome concept...really amazing..out of the world..and the way u r writing it its just WOWWW...👏
and yeah kya kam kiya hai akash manyta's bro...ahaaa...lovely!!!
really can't gather enough words...
i loved it...
plz update soon...and do PM Me...



i am glad u liked it will be updating soon
yaa by da way ihate akash and j
j will be dead and akash has to be there so i it was good to make her brother :p
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Posted: 13 years ago
#46
thanx alot u liked my work ill try my best to entertain u more here is another chap

chapter 4

huh what are u doing here did u left at night or stayed here

uv: don't u have manners I have greeted u without replying u are doubting and I left at night and I came here for u than u are sadly mistaken coz last night I forgot my phone here came here to take it but I think ur are intrested in me with his smirk

sneha: throws the phone and it breaks u are such a jerk I was a fool who thaught u were a nice person mr whatever

uv:huh nam poochna the aise he pooch lete what was the need to break my phn did u even know what u did u just messed my whole shedule and knw how much that would hurt my business out of ur imagintion

sneha: ya mr showoff u manage all ur work on that phone na uhh expect me to say sorry my foot

uv: I think u are much more eager to my name but u will find it soon with ur punishment and he left

sneha:calls shruti

shruti was snehas friend use to study with her

shruti : hey babes

sneha: is it important to go to the clg as I knw there would be no work we are into beginning of internship at uvs hospital

shruti : I knw dear but we hav to be there and greet the trustee tat old gun would be giving a lecture and have to be there

sneha : ok ill be there no worries

sneha on her way dresses in baby pink

as she enters the hospital somebogy drags her into a corner and she was about to scream but stop when she smells the same perfume which she smelt last night

and he planted a kiss on her lips she was left numb don't know what to do but couldn't resist where he was enjoying her softie lips and relishing its moistness she was amazed then he with his usual smirk that was ur punishment sunshine and left

she kept standing there as a statue

shruti : hey what aare u doing lets move to the conference hall

as they moved towrds the conference she told her all the story

shruti: what a jerk dun worry the trustie is my friends unatti's brother I will complain to him don't wry and we will punish him and what was his name

sneha:really didn't care about it some veer oh I cant remember

as the entered she was shocked to see that man as the trustee

she only heard yuvraj of jaigar she still didn't knew his name bcoz she was a girl busy in her own life didn't like page 3 and all

during udays speech he was staring her and she was totally embarrased

at the end

shruti: chal comon lets talk to hottie about ur matter or else I would forget abt it and I would get a chance to meet him

sneha: in anger and that hottie is that guy

shruti: was shocked he kissed you u are so lucky models and princess die for it ahh hope I was at ur place

sneha : u I hate u don't talk to me and she rushed out

shruti he stop for me plz

sneha : wats ur prb

shruti: sorry babes chalo ill make up for my mistake

sneha: ok tonight at restro bar at uday niwas ur treat

shruti : chal done

at night sneha and shruti reached there as they entered there was a huge suphisticated crowd there

sneha was once more draged in a corner

sneha : wat the hell u are doing here u jerk

uv:what are u doing here sunshine glad to see u how was the punishment hope u like it and winks at her

sneha: who are u the one asking is there ur name written and why the hell u are disturbing don't get on m,y nerve or else ill tell my akash bhaiya and then u would regret it

uv: whooo akash bhaiya I am scared and for that he hold s her by her waist bring her closer adjust a strad of hair behind her ear yup yes the name is written both in that hospital and this restaurant in donu jagohe hotel uday nivas and uday veer singh hospital ke uday hum hi hae yuvraj udayveer singh of jaigarh and he kissed her cheek leaving stunned andthen she tried to resist bcoz she didn't knew further what will happen and then gave uday a tight slap ran away from there uday in anger went tp her car in her chase opened the door noticed something has fallen on the passengers he picked it was a bracelet and was shocked to see the bracelet

and then with his smirk on

now I understand why it was a pleasure to my heart when I am with u don't wry

dear every person finds comfort with his owned possession and winks now live ur life sunshine untill I get to the bottom In this matter then there would be a blast in ur life for the touch u gave me

and smiles with his smirk on


sincerely

ROCKER12

Edited by rocker12 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#47
awesome post loved it...👏
ps thanx for pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#48
OMG maam Uv ko pata chal gayaa...hooo egarly waiting for the next update...cont soon n next time i want a long update ok...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#49
hey dear had u read my ff
plz do read it
i too hav put this thappad and bracelet scene in that
plz do read huh
its manveer:an eternal love story
and ur ff is really very nice
this part was awesome and that kiss was very nice huh.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: jazzthakur

hey dear had u read my ff

plz do read it
i too hav put this thappad and bracelet scene in that
plz do read huh
its manveer:an eternal love story
and ur ff is really very nice
this part was awesome and that kiss was very nice huh.


ya dear i followed ur ff but i have read only last 4 chaps due to hactic shedule i have already written the chaps and i just only check them before updating it was merely a coincedence and ya i loved ur writing but i knw the bracelet thing is something else in my one gald u liked and would definately read ur whole ff hope u dont mind it was a coincedence
Edited by rocker12 - 13 years ago

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