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-JEHAN-

@-JEHAN-

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#31

OMG...gabbu meri jaan ye kya tha???☺️

ufff...too hot to handle..seriously!!!i think my room's AC is not working..it so hot yar!!

okay...gabbu really i have no words to praise u for this...😳

but one thing that was HOT...u were right...😆😆

can i say i loved it...

gabbu this was censored one...omg...tu uncensored main...

😆😆😍

lizzy can't say much..right now m speechless...

but i love ur title...really awesome...👏👏👏

today i would say what a HOT ff...☺️👍🏼kya likha hai...

love u gabbu...🤗

and plz PM me when u update...

basanti...😳

Edited by -JEHAN- - 13 years ago

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Supernatural_10

@Supernatural_10

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#32

OMG!!! Alissa just read your fanfic 🤬☺️ seriously where do you get all these ideas from I would never write such parts and I'm like 23 I'm too shy... I thought she hated him she changed her mind and then she still hates him Manyata is weirdo really everyone locks the bathroom door she didn't 😆

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SaHillover101

@SaHillover101

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#33

THAT WAS TOOO HOT LIZA!! I LOVED IT:D Plzzz pm me when u update!! Thanks n luv ya!!

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Inkpen4877

@Inkpen4877

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#34

Super intense!!! It was great though!

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644078

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Posted: 13 years ago

#35

Partner tum kafi experienced lagti ho🤣

gud work.its damn hot.
Thumbs up.

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Alissa

@alissa345

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: -playboy-
Partner tum kafi experienced lagti ho🤣

gud work.its damn hot.
Thumbs up.

Lol It's not about experience it's about writing skills 😛
Awww thanks you...I am glad you liked it 😊
Thanks for reading partner 😃

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644078

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Posted: 13 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: alissa345
Lol It's not about experience it's about writing skills 😛

I KNOW ALI,MAI TO TUMHE TEASE KAR RAHA THA.

Awww thanks you...I am glad you liked it 😊
Thanks for reading partner 😃

PHIR SE THANK YOU PARTNERSHIP ME NO SORRY NO THANK YOU.

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Shazzie

@Shazzie

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#38

WOOHOO!! THAT WAS SMOKING HOT!! ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

If this is the censored update, I m dying to read the uncensored one.☺️ Can you pls pm me.. if you dont mind. 😉

Love it Alissa baby! Keep on coming more! 😆

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Killer

@.Killer.

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#39

Aalu,,,,,sorryyy for the late reply...was busy yesterday...

But what have u done dear...it was not at all good it was..AWEEESOOOMMMEEE...but actually I didnt understand the whole part par jitna samajh mein aaya woh super hot tha☺️☺️...baby u rock...!!!👏👏

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RuthlessQueen

@RuthlessQueen

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#40

That was beautifully written. 😊 The dominant Uday is so hot. The ManVeer moments were just perfect. all I could say is WOW! And you know those were some hard to write scenes. You have done it so well. Dayum hot! 😍 It's nice to see the Manyata finding it hard to resist Uday.

Excellent work! ⭐️ Please update soon!

Lots of Love
xxx

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