I killed Uday- OS! PART 3 on PAGE 12 Updated.

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IshaAkbar

@IshaAkbar

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Posted: 13 years ago

#61

oh my god it was awesome at firstvi almost cry it was so sad and then when uday found her and told her that she was only his i love it remind me of someone

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panchaali

@panchaali

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Posted: 13 years ago

#62

Soo nice...soo touchy 😊

At the i was in tears 😭

and then, the ending or the beginning of Manveer made me smile 😊

Nice job Adden...👍🏼

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...Zeenat...

@...Zeenat...

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Posted: 13 years ago

#63

Wow Adden!
Its beautifully written!
Loved it!

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ilvuday

@ilvuday

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Posted: 13 years ago

#64

are you crazy are u mad?..how dare you call something like this boring it was so beautiful i could feel the emotions and after ashish's acting yesterday ur the second person huz os triggered my heart i literally cried...i wish u cld make did a ff...but nevermind i loved it to bits every word every fullstop every comma...it was dat great u reali r a good writer accept it or nt!!!

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tannvi

@Badtameez_Dil

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Posted: 13 years ago

#65

adden It was absolute beautiful omggg specially the letter description to Uday was wowww😍 i was so engrossed in that letter...was so feel its so beautifully wrote yaar awesummm part i simply loveddd it!!!!

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princess_T

@princess_T

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Posted: 13 years ago

#66

OMG that was amazing. I loved it. No words for this. I'm in love with the ending line. Rocking... I loved it loved it loved loved it... Keep up ur good work Adden... Do make some Os's like this in the future...!!!

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kkate

@kkate

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Posted: 13 years ago

#67

It was faboulus, how u dare to call it boring while reading the second part i had tears in my eyes . It was great , i request u if possible pls continue as u said its a beggning...

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kojagoryfan

@kojagoryfan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#68

wow!wow!wow! beautiful.!!! n i love the letter.very touchy.pls write more adden.

Edited by a.anu - 13 years ago

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â™ªáƒ¦â™¥Jazzy..!â™ªáƒ¦â™¥

@thejazzgal

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Posted: 13 years ago

#69

wohow!! addennn!

ur just superb splendid writer girl!

this OS made my cry..

the time i started reading this os i completely forgot about DEK ending sooner :'(

and after i finished reading this i was like.. ye bhi khallas mera DEK bhi khallas honey wala hai :(

and i was upto cry :(

Love UV Love M Love ManVeer ... Love DEK <3

loved this OS <3

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Adden

@Add123

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Posted: 13 years ago

#70

Do you want me to continue this OS? 😊

The awesome Mahi's awesome comment, made me rethink my decision ... Mahi suggested I should continue this FF, and I loved her comment, Thankyou soo Much Mahi 🤗

So what say guyz? Should I continue ?? 😕

No I'm not planning to convert this into an other FF ... just perhaps an OS with 3/4 parts...

Do let me kno what you think ... I will only continue if a lot of you guyz "comment" and think that I should continue ... because you all know how lazy I am 😆 and it takes a lot of effort while writing 😉 But I'll be honoured to write an other part for you guyz 😃

So let me know ... every comment counts 😉

P.S. WTAWTAW has been updated ... go see if you haven't 😊😃

Love you all, and thankyou soo much for the brilliant response to this OS, I could not have imagined this much love for this OS, you guyz are too kind 🤗

Tik Tok, Times ticking ... let me know asap 😉

Cheerz.

:-ADDEN-:

Edited by Add123 - 13 years ago