I killed Uday- OS! PART 3 on PAGE 12 Updated. - Page 6

OMG!! That was awesome! Loved it! 👍🏼

woho!! Wat an awesome update
I really did feel bad for manyata...being alone is the wackiest thought one could ever get...but manyata lived in loneliness for big bad 2 years...so did UV he hurted himself...punishing themselves...DS the silent listener to manyatas pain was her only strength...awesome adden ur such a beautiful writer...u made me feel the emotions M and UV going through..the pain the lonliness ...and Ms tears...perfect loved it :)

I wish to read more frm ua side :)

amazing!!! simply amazing!!! cant say how GOOD it was!!!

Awww Adden 🤗

That was fabulous!!... I can't tell you how engulfed I was in your story, I was captured by every single emotion that you wove into your sentence. It was such a breath of fresh air yaar!😍... I fell in love with your OS... It was how a real track should've been conceived and executed all along... a true play with pain, romance etc.


And I loved how he married her... so filmy but ManVeer are not a normal, ordinary jodi... they have a filmy touch to them and I LOVED how you made their journey so extraordinary... showing that ManVeer are not just connected by their destinies but also by their hearts.. Superlative piece of work!!!⭐️.

But I have one thing to add yaar... I wish I knew what happened to Jay? and somehow I wanted that M and U hadn't consummated in the penthouse without telling the Royals that he married their older daughter and broke his engagement with the younger one, for once I wanted M not to be the one giving everybody shocks and coming out in the open instead of creating more messes (don't want M to bear the brunt again or look like someone who justs ends up wrecking things, and then they should've consummated 😈 with Jay writhing in agony imagining the horror (bliss for us) of the two doing IT)... I want to SEE JAY PAY for her sins somewhere and your OS is near perfect. I wish you could've also added what happened to Jay... her expressions and her emotions and whether she is the same old Bit*h or is there any improvement? and did DS do Jay's parda faash on tripping her?...


I know its the last part, but can you write one more part on Jay's anguish + ManVeer's marital bliss/ them finally getting a happily ever after... I badly wanna imagine how that would be from your POV!! but even if you can't I still understand and won't hold it against you... its your OS and I'm happy to have gotten the opportunity to read your fine work!!😊 but it is my humble request yaara😳❤️❤️!


Once again... babe you ROCK🤗🤗!!... You've gotten a fan of your writings in me dear!!

👏 oh c'mon adden it's nt boring at all!!
bt i cried for a while when J & uv were engaged!!!😭
Do continue writing ur OS & nxt tym dnt forget to PM me...

Wow Adden! I really liked the sad and poetic beginning but no offense, but the end made me laugh!! "penthouse", really? I still can't stop laughing! Well done :D

That was Amazing. I m crying now. U r a brilliant writer Adden. Love it.

loved it adden nd that was so emotional one yar 😭 staff standing 4r M was different