'Destiny'|| An Udayveer SS || Part 2 Updated.

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It strictly based on the writer imagination.No dialogue,plot,Nothing is Real..The characters might have been taken from some real people just to imagine them as the story characters from writer point of view to create a story.

Actor's real life is no way related to it.It's purely an imaginativefiction.
So Don't get hurt,Don't bash or over-react.Remember It's just a story of someone's Imagination,Notneeded writer wants such thing to happen in real.

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' Destiny '- Made us Come Together
|| An Udayveer SS
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Now that we all have our stage set for the next performance,so lets not waste any more time'Oh! Wait! You guys actually think I'm wasting your time?! 😕

(The host of the show makes a funny face while audience & judges burst out laughing)

Anyway,Like I care 😛 ..So here we present our next performer! Does she need any sort of introduction? No right?! so just know her through her dance,After all it's the last episode before our finale..so Lets just hear it for this beautiful girl 😃 👏 ..


Audiences claps,Judges flashes a pleasant look,while the stage light goes off & light-man brought a sky shed deem light with a mix of white,pink which perfectly matches the tune of the song'Gunja sa hai koi Ik tara..'


She comes in a knee length white dress which suited her perfect feminine figure perfectly..light make up. bare footed..No ornaments except for that beautiful smile she wears always & that baby pink shed's lipstick making her lips looks ..Amazing ? - is the word may be..having her long hair resting on the back..adding extra beauty naturally..

She dances.If there won't be any tomorrow..The beats of the songs seems more musical while she is performing the free style dancing,contemporary with a mix of lyrical hip-hop.Each movements fell into the right way like everyone wishes to fall their wishes in the right places.

The dance which was treat to watch comes to it end with the story she wanted to portray through her dance.A girl having fulfilled her wishes & all smiling..Thanking God.

Like Always It was her day..Her performance..it seems to the audience perhaps they were right..The 3 famous judges of the famous dancing show "Dance India Dance" gives her their standing ovation while the host/s Jay & Soumya seen to hug & congratulate her for her wonderful piece of art.

& then..The Judges start with their comments ..Wait There were some other people too..Who were neither the judges nor the perfect audience who follows the show regularly..They were actors,came to grace the show as celebrity judges..much popular..much stylish..much experienced in this glam world but among those someone who was not much experience yet made it big for himself in a really short span of time.The new face on the block.The latest heart-throb of the girls who claims he is here to stay in their hearts forever..

* Flash back Out,Back to Reality *

What the hell I was actually trying to re-collect? I just saw her yesterday night & I'm finding myself thinking about her? making a W*f face,he woke up from his bed,Gets ready n on his way of his show's set where his girl-friend already waiting for him.

Meet Ms. Manyata ..much..much.. younger than Uday but Loves him.


[No! not that it's bad but still..some doubt on their relation & think may be it's just to give their onscreen pair a lil' more hype & some think may be they are dating but won't last long & some are head over heels love with their pair as well ]

He arrives & his girl-friend start on him.

-Why you are so late,baby ? Know I was waiting for so long ? & Makes a pouts.

-What's wrong yaar? I'm just.. (Having a look on his watch) 5 mins late? (Then he shakes his head quite "you are impossible" manner)

but realizes she is still standing n making sad faces..So he thought to make up.

-Sorry baby ! I just couldn't wake up at the right time (Having a flash back of "Why?")jerks his head off & Says,

-Sorry .


She is still not listening.


Then he puts his arm around her neck,having a chocolate on his other hand..giving it to her,smile & again says..

-Sorry : )

Now,Finally it seems to work.She gets happy,takes the Chocho bar from his hand & hugs him..& just like a kid while eating chocho says,

-Dobara maat karma..Okay !

He smiles through saying this.


-Yeah..Okay..Now Lets go..Otherwise The director 'd make us both say sorry to him.

She says..Okay..😉

It was 11 @ morning when they had started shooting & now it's 9 @ night when it was almost time for pack up.

Manyata still has the last shot of the day to finish,So he was waiting for her in his vanity..playing games in his BB phone,wearing a white collar up full sleeves tee * black pant..But suddenly something struck in his head..or mind..? or..Heart !..

It's 9 already?! (Checking his phone)Ab tak to show khatam bhi ho gaya hogha,nahin? ( Asking himself ) So what did happen..It was live so result must be out already.Did she win?

Ahh!What exactly I'm thinking..How does it really matter if she did or not? 😛 Then again 😕She was so good yesterday..her dancing was flawless 😳 & That AB clips,all were praising so much & I ! I have also witness her performance she is just the other name of perfection 😳 (Smiling).


(Trying to hold on his own word) I mean,Her dance (having almost an unknowingly shy expression on his face)


So she should win. 😊


Again backing out from the thought he goes..😳


Mujhe kya ? .. aise to hazaraon reality show mein acche khase contestants honghe who wins or lose..So No big deal..🤔


Again going back to his thoughtful mood ;


Still should I make a call to the channel or check by myself to know if she actually won or not?! 😕


He asked to himself & flashes a look on his laptop..

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i loved it...can u plz add me in ur PM list..i would love to read the next part...
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Perfect one! Loved it 2 d core pls add me 2 ur pm list😃
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Loved it ad me in ur pm list!!
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Part - 2


*Goes into flash back*

"She is an Untrained dancer,but from day one she didn't really make me feel for a sec that she never let her trained..If from my group I have to take one name who defines the word versatile.It's her- Rimghim." : says, Terrence.

"Although It's finale tomorrow & We are going to show-case our best dance tomorrow to give each other hard competition but in all this or that one thing I really want to mention.She's flawless,We all wants to win but If after me or if not me,want anyone to see as the winner it should be her..She is a dear friend & loosing in-front of her is not really a shame but would be a honor to see that India getting a great talented dancer..She's untrained but look at her she's hard competition to any of us or any dancers" Says sitting their contestants & Someone just sweetly smiles & says thank you guys..Means a lot ..really! & hugs the one sitting next to her who is another finalist.

Then comes the AB where She talks about herself..

Hi guys..Rimghim here (Smiling) [With all those Sony Vegas kind of effects the AB was looking amazing]I could never thought a non-dancer like me would be so much appreciated in a stage like DID.It's a fact that I had never dreamt of any of my dream since I'm a huge day dreamer (laughs) that I'd dance that too in a dance based show like DID & would be sharing stage with the superb,talented dancer like all DID contestant & 'll be appreciated by so much viewers who votes for us,Mentors who teaches us.having a background such as a non-Indian,came just to visit the place & then suddenly happening this in my life..Wow ! I mean it's really terrific.I never plan in my life but It was all b'coz of you people & god that my unplanned life shaped up so nicely that I'm really enjoying all this..More than the show,winning I'm glad that I could come in such a place,meet & bond with those people whom I 'd have never think of meeting or bonding but It's a great feeling & Thank you so much for making me stand today where I'm & gifting me with all these precious moments..I'll keep it with me & take wherever I go : ) Thank you..

*Knock..Knock *

UV ..! Open up the door baby.


She calls then realizes the door was already open..She gets in..& so he had to snap himself out from his thought.

-What you were doing? I was calling you..


Taking back his eyes from his laptop with a not so happy –half-hearted tone,He replies-


-Ahh ! was just Playi..

-(Interrupting him in middle of the sentence)

-Accha chalo abhi..My shoot is done (making a 'Finally' body language) ghar chalte hain : )

-Wait ! Tum mujhe drop to karrahe ho na ? ! (pointing a finger @ him,While he was still sitting & she was standing is a short Black pant & navy-blue Top with her hair tide-up)


He keeps his phone in his pocket,take the car keys while standing up & says looking here & there..


-If not,I'd have gone home kabka..

-That's good..!She says hugging himself from back & smiling..

-Lets Go..

He says..

-Yeah..

*4 & a half month later*

Sir ! Your shot is ready..-says someone associated with the show.

-Yeah coming, "he replies"

He was sitting outside waiting for his shot to be ready while after the call from the spot guys the make-up man came for touch up.

Manyata was sitting next to him..Looking at her phone saying..


-Can't believe,It's our last day of shoot for this show (Sadly)

-It's ok baba..everything start to end one day,right ! (Looking at the mirror)

-But it's last day for us as well (Looking down,,looking sad)


He keeps his eyes off from the mirror put his hands down which were occupied setting his hair,indicating the make-up man to leave..Putting his right hand on her shoulder,says;


-Last day of our show where we shoot together.not for us na ? (Giving a lil' smile to her.)

-Yes ! She smiles back.About to hug him while the director shouts..guyz come we'r getting late..

-She acts furiously saying, Yea director bhi na,rozka hai iska toh..


Him behind her..(laughing & walking in a lil' speed)


Abhi toh bohout dukhi ho rahi thi,ab kya huya !..Both laughs..& goes for the shot.

After the last shot of the show,everyone were getting emotional..& after all hugs,goodbyes & love yous both Uday & Manyata get into Uday's car..

After a while she tells.rather asks..


-So finally we are done with the show..Sukriya hai bhawan ka.. ab main ghar jake arram se jo chahe who kar chati hu : )

-Tum bhi na kafi ajjeb ho,yehi subha ki baat hai itna dukhi ho rahi thi ki it's ending & now look @ you..Sukriya n all hun! (smiles while shaking his head lil')

-haha..mere sodho tum kya karne wale ho..gym ? outing or romancing..?She laughs..


He gives a "You are impossible"type look n smiles"& says,


-Actually…all : )


-Matlab? (Giving him a confuse look)

-Arre ! you forgot ? I told you about me getting that 2 new show offers na..!So I have decided to take one of them..It's a good role & I think I can play it well so tomorrow I'm going to meet up the PH of that show & if everything goes well..I'll be signing that show tomorrow itself..Then goona head for the outdoor shooting & then obviously! gym to look good & romancing with lead actress on it's way..(he said jokingly)That's how it's 3 in one..(laughs)

-Very cleaver (She says making faces)

-Arre baba.I was kidding..Issmein bura manne ki kya baat hai..Chalo tumhara ghar aa gaya..


He stops the car & open the door for her..She gets down & he holds her hand & says;

-Chalo now give me a good smile.so that I can leave : )

She smiles & hugs him while asking..


-If you sign the show then when you are going out of the town?

-Hmm..That I' can tell you properly after meeting them know but from what I have heard I might have to leave a day after tomorrow or it's next day..

-Accha okay..Take care of you self. : )

-Sure & you too {He smiles back @ her & take a leave from there)

While returning home,After having such an exhaustic day alongside having the feeling of satisfaction that he did extremely well throughout the show & the artists in him only grew if nothing else..He sighs a sigh of relief which brushing off his hair with one hand & then turn on the music player..To his surprise it was the same song which has been performed by that very girl whom he once tried to define as perfection oh wait..just her dance not her..or..before he could think much the traffic police came n yelled ;

-Sahab,Dekhke chaliye..


He had to take a break from where his heart or mind or head was wandering …


-Sorry..Maine ..I mean..Sorry..(He was kind of sad by then for some unknown reason)


-Thik hai sahi time pe rok di gaddi app ne to main chalan nahin kaat raha hoon..App jayiye per aghe se dhyan rakhna..

He nods for an yes & start driving again.

After reaching home,taking a hot shower,changing himself into a black vest & boxer he made himself comfortable in his bed.Although that sad feeling for some unknown reason were still there but he thought to himself..From tomorrow it'll be an another journey,A fresh one..He turn offs the light & closes his eyes..

As they say-Sometime what we say without thinking any left or Right becomes the reality of our life..That exactly what happened to him..

It was a new day..A new beginning as he thought..just for his new show for which he's on talk..

He did the usual stuff he does in the morning..dressing up in a red-orange shirt & In a white pant..Wearing a pair of shoe..Looking casual yet classy..Sit in his car & on his way of meeting the PH people.

The talks was going on & been almost 2 hours..When everything looked perfect to him,he agreed to do the show..The papers were ready..They placed the paper infront of him & he was ready to sign,having the pen almost ready to sign the paper when one of the producer speak out-

As you know it's a love story,dealing with how two different people come together & fell in love,Their hurdles..etc..Though the concept is not so new but the handling 'd be atleast that what we'll be telling the audiences (laughs)


On that Uday too gives a "Yeah like I didn't know" kind of smile but It's my job to act which I'm going to do..He thought to himself.. Director continued..


-Yes,& whats goona make the show more interesting that the intensity we want to show to the audience between the leads..Afterall,after sometime everyone forget the story * if the story is not doing well,if the pair is hit..They show is ultimately a (Almost everyone the PH & the director shouts together) "HiT" they laughs with a cheers..The Producer while taking a slip from his glass of win asks,

"BTW..what was the girl name we have casted opposite him..?


-Yeah It's Rimghim.


Uday's hands stops in midway from signing..He was confused for a second as if he had heard this name before,he looking still at the paper but concentrated more on what the Director & Producer saying..


-Rimghim..! That girl from that dancing competition na..

-Yes..Yes..She is the one!

-Oh she's a fabulous dancer..

The Director took a slip from his glass of wine & says..


-umm..& sir would be a fabulous actress as well.

-How you are so sure?


-See!She has been a wonderful dancer & A dancer is incomplete if her expression are not right..& in which she excels..Her body language is perfect..Moreover She is a new face..That too an attractive one..Dances well..Looks amazing,has an innocent face..She goona click with the audience just like that..


(he did some hand movement while saying this)


Although she said No,to the show 1st..but I had to make her say yes,She is new & never acted before & what not excuse she had given but hum bhi hum hai,itne assani se kaise janne detain,acting toh phir bhi she 'll do n can learn with passing day but such a gem how can we loss with all those good quality along side having such a good fan following being the show's winner..


-Good Job done fellow..they cheers..while having a glorified laugh already..


& there He was thinking & smiled to himself & said,So.. She won hun ! & signed the rest of the paper.

While driving home away.He thought & smiled in disbelief..

*Going to the flashback..*

After she completes her act..Everyone out there were cheering for her..Be it her own mentor or the mentor of her competitors or the audiences/hosts or the celebrity guests..Yet again she made it special by her dancing..


Asking to the judges about her performance..


Remo clearly said,Having her on stage dancing so gracefully it,itself a big pleasure to eyes & when she comes magic happens..No compliments can actually define how well she actually does.

Geeta..Simply gave her a hug & says Finale is proud to have her.


Where her mentor was proud as ever.

When The host jay ask her how she felt,She simply replied how it always feels when someone appreciate you..To which Jay says horrifiedly..don't fire me like that with such honest ans..My producer 'd throw me out of my job if I fall short of asking question..


Everyone laughs & then moving on When asking the celebrity judges one by one praises him..& when the question was asked "How did you like it Uday" As if I came out just from a beautiful sight of a dream which was not mine still I was witnessing it..Till then I was just watching her performance or just looking at her..I forget but I remember after that question been asked she finally looked at me..the smile was still on her face.. I congratulated her for her wonderful performance.Didn't know what too add more..but She thanked me for that..Though I didn't had such thing going on mind but still when the question was asked to her by another actor from our industry I were somewhat curious to know the answer"

Xyz -So if you don't mind me asking,would you like to act some day ?

In which she replied politely..-


-.I never plan things & Honestly speaking if I do they never take place..Here everybody wants to win,make big names as choreographer n what not but may be I'm being only the aimless one..I don't know what I'll be doing next minute so how to tell you if I'll ever act or not : ) I never thought I'd dance but I'm dancing..Simply that way I never acted so I'm not fit for that field but if destiny makes me want to be there I'll or it's also possible that I won't be in that medium ever.. It's all about destiny..:)

After Re-visiting the memory-lane,He uttered to himself in a playful manner..

"Destiny" : )


He reached home then.

Edited by Rimghim - 13 years ago
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Thanks whoever commented.Really appreciated.. & Whoever pressed the 'Like' Button.."ll receive a pm..

I'll appreciated it if I get to know you guys view as well along with the likes.It'll let me understand your POV well.

I Know It's not a M-UVthing but whoever written it (Not disclosing the name right now as she was not really keen about posting it on the forum but I insisted)she had a different way of thinking about UV & M..

PS-The Girl,Rimghim in the SS is not me😆,It's just a imaginative character just like the story but She thought the name 'd suit the character..

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loved it awesome...this is something different...i like something different from usual...something out of the box!!lolll..
and i strongly believe in destiny too...that's whay i like ur SS...
i would love to read the next part...eagerly waiting...plz update soon!!

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nice one:)very different kind of concept frm d usual..n thanx for d PM..
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it was vryy nicee,hpe to c sme more os of u!!! thanks for d pm
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