FF:You are the one...!!!! Part 3 at pg 6 updated - Page 4

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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice one...i like it...and jay!!despo hai pori..had hai!!but oh love manveer parts!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Beautiful update but very short. Next time a long update please...I'm waiting for shimla journey. Try to update soon and thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome part i just loved it omg precap is really interesting please update soon and thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey Ya Guys I Know that I have been very late in updating😕.Actually I have some work to do and I assure you that you'll get an update tomorrow😳.But I now here's the promo:
Rajmata and Brijraj Say to Manyita and Uday that they have to go to shimla for some work😛.Jay comes and say that she and Akash also wants to go with them as four of them will enjoy there.Rajmata agrees saying Okay!! Enjoy you all.And tickets are for tonight.Jay turns and gives an evil look.
Voiceover:Ye sirf aik ghumne ka he plan ya Jaynadini k dimagh me chal rha k koi khatarnaak plan!!!😲 😲😲
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Posted: 13 years ago
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The party time is now over.And evryone has slept in RajMahal.
In Jaynadini's room:
Jay is taking off her jewellery still thinking about the scene when Uday kissed her.And then she says.
Jay:Akash or Manyita...Jay or Uday.Kya jodi hai? Wow.And then she grins.

At breakfast table:
Its morning and everyone comes to eat breakfast.Vijay notices Jay smiling and thinking.
Vijay:Jay Bhai! Bri khush nazar aa rhi ho.Koi naya shakar haath lga he kya?
Jay:Oh vijay bhai aap hume hamesha pakr lete hen!!
Manyita:Ab tum dono phir se shuru mat ho jana wrna Maa or Data naraz ho jayen ge ha nai to.
Everyone eats the breakfast.When everyone has finished.Uday comes in and say Khamagani to everyone.
Brijraj:Are Uday beta hum aap hi ko yaad kr rhe the.
Uday:Are Brij uncle aap hume yaad kren or hum na aye ye to ho hi ni skta.
Saying this he looks at Manyita who is making faces on UV's dialogue.
Uday:Acha btayein Brij uncle aapne hume kya kehna tha.
Brijraj:Beta baat darasal yeh he k Shimla me Mr.Mehta ne aap ko or hone wali Uuvraani yani Manyita ko bulaya he.
Uday:Mr. Mehta??
Brijraj:Are Mr.Mehta hmare lawyer.
Uday:Oh acha.Theek he uncle hum to chale jayen gen lekin aik baar aap apni beti se puch len.
Manyita looks in anger towards UV who is smiling as if he is thinking
Ab aya oonth pahar k neeche!!
Mahrani Komal:Are Manyita ko aap k sath jaane me kya problem ho gi? Hena Manyita?
Manyita looked confused and in trouble.
Manyita:G maa bilkul.
Brijraj:To phir theek hai.Humne aapki tickets krwa di hai or aapko aaj raat hi nikalna he.
Jay and Vijay is listening all the converation.Vijay comes to Manyita and whispers.
Vijay:Wah Manyita bhai shadi se pehle hi Honeymoon.Ye to sirf aap or Uday kr skte hai I tell you.
Manyita gives a fake smile and looked tense.
Jay who is thinking and planning something for a long time jumps into the conversation.
Jay:Maa wo hmnw aapse kuch kehan tha aagr aap ki permission ho to.
Mahrani Komal:Han gi kaheyeian na Jaynandini
Jay:Wo agr hum or Akash bhi jiji or Udayveer k sath shimla chale jayen to?
Brijraj and Mahrani Komal looks towards each other.Vijay senses some kind of planning and says
vijay:Are Jay bhai tme kabab me haddi bnne k bra shok hai!
Manyita thinks to herself:Agr Jay or Akash hmare sath chale to mjhe zyada wakt is Uday k sath ni guzarna pre ga.
Manyita:Are ni Vijay bhai is me koi buri baat to nai.Hum sab waha masti kr len ge.
Jay:Wohi to me keh rhi hun jiji.
Brijraj looks in an approving way towards Mahrani Komal and says:
Brijraj:To phir theek hai.Hum do or tickets book krwa dete hen shimla k liye.
Mahrani Komal comes towards her daughters and put her hands on their shoulders.
Mahrani Komal:enjoy beta
Everyone goes from thier.Jay turns and gives a evil smile.She thinks to herself:
Are yeh kay Manyita jiji.Aapne to apne hi per pe kulhari maar di.

Manyita's room:
Manyita is walking here and there and is in tension.Uday comes in.
Uday:Hi princess
Manyita:Khasama nu khana dafa ho ja yaha s.Me jaanti hun tune hi koi patti parahi ho gi Data ko jo wo hme shimla bhej rhe hen.
Uday:Are princess hme kuch krna ni prta hmare liye sub khud ba khud ho jata he.
Udy comes closer to Manyita.Manyita steps back.Uday keeps coming closer to her and she keeps moving back.She hits the wall and looks back noticing that their is no more space to move back.
She looks towards Uday.Udy smirks.
Manyita:Uday door ho mjhse.
Uday:Nai haten ge kya kr lo gi?
Manyita:Me me cheekh maar kr sb ko bula loon gi.
Uday laughs.
Uday:To bulao.
Manyita is going to shriek.Uday stops her by putting on his hand on her mouth.Manyita looks in Uday's eyes and an eyelock with the tune of Dheeme Dheeme at bg.
Suddenly Manyita came back to her senses and pushes UV away from her.
Manyita:Tjhe to me pasand hi ni hun na to mere kareeb kyun aata he baar baar.
UdaY laughs clapping and says
Uday:hmare liye her khubsurat larki aik khilona he jis se khelna hme bht pasand he.
Manyita:Tjh jesa ghatiya insaan hmne aaj tak ni dekha!
Uday:or dekha gi bhi ni.

Jay's room:
Jay is ver happy.She calls Akash.
Akash:Hi princess kesi ho?
Jay:Me theek hun.Mjhe tmse bht zaruri kaam he.
Akash:Haan bolo me tmare liya kuch bhi kr skta hun.
Jay:Pta he is liye to phone kiya he.
Akash:Acha kaam he kya btao?
Jay tells Akash something which is kept secret means their dialogues are not shown.When Jay has told everything to Akash.
Akash:Kaam bht rizk wala he Jay.Are you sure?
Jay:Tum bus haan ya naa kaho Akash!
Akash.Tme pta he k me tmhe kbhi naa nahi kahun gaa isi liye Haan theek he.
Jay:Mjhe pta tha.
She cuts the call.
Jay:Ab Uday sirf hmara ho ga sirf hmara!!!

Precap:UV and manyita are sitting in plane.The journey starts.Manyita fall asleep and unintetionally her head rests on UV's shoulder.UV clears the hair on her face smiling.

Note:
Guys I hoped to write more longer but as I told you I am on a visit out of station so I got net for few time and I wrote how much I can in that time.!!! Will update soob do leave ur comments luv ya all!!!🤗
Edited by -NSKluvsSRK- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#36
short bt gr8.. keep writing.. thanku for pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#37
Wow nice one.Loved it.Cont soon yaar.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#38
Awesome!! Do continue soon n thanks for the pm:D
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Posted: 13 years ago
#39
that was awesome really loved it just loved manveer scene and oh god j and akash going along... the precap is really exciting update soon and thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#40
Loved it please update soon dear...

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