FF:You are the one...!!!! Part 3 at pg 6 updated - Page 3

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Finally two of my favourite pairs I found in your story...Manveer and Vijay-Unnati...I can't wait for next part...please update soon dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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that was awesome loved this first part update soon cant wait for manveer entry and thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#23
Wow mast update dear..m so awaited 4 manveer entry ! Do continue soon ..TY 4 d pm😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: -NSKluvsSRK-

hahahahah I understand dear but you know he has a major role in bringing manveer together!!! so cant do anything 😃

ok
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey i loved it...plz pm me when u update plzzz...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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At Party:
Everyone looka at her.She is looking as beautiful as a princess in fairy tales.She is wearing a crown made up of diamond.
Unnati:Princess Manyita aa gyi!!!
Vijay:Sirf Princess hi ni ayi hmare yuvraaj bhi aa gaye hen!!!
Jay:Kya mtlb??
Vijay:Wo dekhiyen
And he points his finger towards a boy dressed in black shirt with its two buttons opened☺️!!! and a white scarf around his neck.
Jay sees him and continues staring at him with blushing and smile on her face.
Manyita comes down and say hi to all.On the other hand Udayveer also come to all.
Vijay:Dekho zra dono love birds ne aik sath entry mari he.Ye sub planned tha I tell you!!!
Udayveer:Are ni Vijay bnna aesa kuch ni.
Unnati:Ji ji bilkul Dada yeh sb to dil ki baatien hen!
Udayveer smiles and looks towards Manyita who is also looking at him.Both gave a disgusted look to each other and then suddenly remembering that everyone is looking at them they both gave a fake smile.
Akash:Aaj to hmari princess Manyita bht khubsurat lg rhi hen.Right?
Udayveer:Han bilkul lekin Jay bhi kuch kam ni lg rhi.
Saying this he walks towards Jay,holds her hands and kisses her on her hand.Everyone laughs.
Unnati:Dada aapki bhabi ko tang krne ki adat kbhi ni jaye gi.Yeh sab Bhabi ko jealous krne k liye!!!
Udayveer:Han choti hum aapki bhabi ko tang krne k liye kuch bhi kr skte hen(and he gives a evil look to Manyita who avoids it)
Vijay:Bht ho gyi baatein!! Kyun ni dance ho jaye.
And he offers Unnati to dance with him.Unnati blushes and go with him to dance floor.Akash and Jay also follows them.
Udayveer and Manyita are sanding all alone.Udayveer comes closer to her.
Udayveer:Abh hum bhi chale Princess wrna sb kahen ge k UV Manyita ko time ni deta.(He grins)
Manyita:Uday yeh sb dramebazi band kr hum dono jaante hen k me or tu kbhi aik ni the or na honge yeh shadi to srf ghar walo ki khushi k liye hen.
Udayveer:aik minute princess hum ne kb kaha k hum aap ko pasand krte hen humto khud aapse srf aik samjhota kr rhe hen bus!
Manyita frowns and is going to go.Uday hold her waist and pulls her towards him☺️.They both look into each other eyes.
Manyita:Uday chor mjhe!!!
Udayveer:Wese princess tum aaj lg bht khubsurat rhi ho dil kr rha he k(he tries to come more closer t kiss her).Manyita pushes her away.
Manyita:Uday door rhe hmse.Hum un baki lrkiyon ki trah ni hen jo tere pe pagalon ki trah marti rehti hen.
Udayveer:Are ye kya princess Jealousy!!!
Manyita:Sarti meri Juti!!! Tharkey peepa!!!
Udayveer:Oh princess ye chawl wali language tmare mun se bri achi lgti he!!!
Manyita:Chup kr ja wrna me party se chali jaon gi.Haan nai toh!

At dance floor:
Jay and Akash are dancing.Jay is thinking the moment when Uday kissed her hand.She talks to herself.
Jay:Akash ne aik bar Maniyta ki tareef ki to Uday ne hme kiss kiya agr...
And she looks towards Udayveer and Manyita and then towards Akash.

There Vijay and Unnati are dancing.
Vijay:Hum soch rhe hen k sb ko hmary bare me bta de
Unnati:Ni Vijay abhi ni pehle hme dada se baat krni ho gi iss bare me.
Vijay:acha theek he.Per jaldi.
Unnati:Ofcourse

Manyita and Uday are standing there.few people come towards them.
Girl:Aap dono aik sath bht khubsurat lgte ho.
Boy:Yeah they make a perfect couple!
Manyita and Uday stare at each other and walk away in opposite direction.

Precap: Brijraj and Komal tells Manyita and Uday that they have to go to Shimla for some purpose😳😳😳
Edited by -NSKluvsSRK- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Very nice but it was lil bit short ...please make it long next time dear...u know can't have enough Manveer even though have plenty...thanks for update and please update next part soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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👏VERY NICE NOW WAITING FOR NEXT PART
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Amibaiju

Very nice but it was lil bit short ...please make it long next time dear...u know can't have enough Manveer even though have plenty...thanks for update and please update next part soon...

Its very nice of you actually having a flight tommorow so thought to update my FF before just stay glued next time you'll get a really long part😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#30
Nice update!! I'm very curious to know what happens between ManVeer in Shimla 😳 So continue soon n.thanks for the pm:D

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