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Posted: 13 years ago
Manveer ss:
Without u no life:u nd me:Soulmate

Part-39th

Manyata remember phone voice..
'wo awaaz to usi ki trh thi,lekin awaaz to same bi ho skti h...'
Or uday jhuth to ni bolega..
Unanti cum'bhabhi,aapne mrng me kyn pucha tha ki kiss dungi to pta chlta h ki ni all that..kyn pucha tha?
Manyata'ah,wo kuch ni unanti kuch shaq tha wo dur krna tha...
Un:ok,weise shaq dur ho gya..
Manyata'ni..
Unanti'idhr aao,main dur krti hu.
Manyata'keise?
Un:phle saari bat btao..
Manyata saari bat btati h..
Unanti'jay ne shayed.
Manyata shockd'jay,ni wo aai kha thi?
Un:of oh wo phle bi deti thi,lekin agar wo aai ni to phr kisne..
Manyata'unanti jyada mt soch tu ja.main pta lga lungi.
Unanti'bhabhi mujhe bi btana...

Manyata'ye uday bi na..bat hi ni krungi.apne aap bta denge...

Jay aati h
'hi,manyata itni gehri soch me kha dubi ho?
Manyata'jay tum kal aai thi kya?
Uday sun leta h,to wo hsta h..
Jay'ha aai thi uday se milne pr.
Manyata thout'isi ne di hogi..weise bi iska kam h kiss dena...
Jay'o hi uday,keise ho?
Uday'i m fyn nd u?
Manyata chali jati h.
Jay'uday manyata khin pagal to ni ho gai,ajeeb harqute kr ri h aaj.
Uday'pagal wo ni tum ho,harqute uski weisi hi h jeisi wo h..
Unanti'jay ek bat bolu'ye tumhara ghr ni h to tum yha kyn aati ho,or agar aati bi ho to apni baatein kiya kro,bhahi ki baatein kyn krti ho.?
Jay'wo kya h na unanti mujhe manyata bhoot pasnd h.
Un:jo pasnd hota h uske baare me aachi baatein krte h na ki buri...or tum is ghr ki member ni ho.or main phle bi kh chuki hu mere pariwar k baare me agar Kuch kha na to main ni sunugi...
Wo bolke chali jati h.
Nd jay uday ko dekhti h
'tumhein koi farq ni pdhta na,uday mujhe koi kuch bi khe...
Uday'frq to phle bi ni pdhta tha jay,pta h jay tum hmesha khti thi ki main tumhare 7th khush ni rhta,pta h kyn qki meri khushi wo apne cel me manyata ki pic dikhata h,iske 7th thi..
Jay jealous'to tum mujhse shaddi kyn kr rhe the'?
Uday'pta h jay phle main jb koi kam krta tha to bina ki si wjh,or apni family k liye krta tha..meri family khush thi tumhein bhu bnake to unki khushi me main khush tha..
'lekin jb se manyata aai h tb se zindgi me khushiya bhar di,usne jeena sikha diya...main ldna ni chahta hu apne dad se pr na chahte huye bi mujhe gusa aajata h jb koi use bolta h.
In shrt tum mere saamne manyata ko kuch na bolo to hi aacha h..tumhare liye...
Wo bolke chl deta h..
Jay jealous'such uday tumhari or manyata ki zindgi brbaad na krdi na to hmara nam bdal dena,or tumhein ekdin apna jrur bnayge..'

Akash 2 br
'dad,ab mujhe ghr jaana h,mera man ni lg rha h idhr.
Br:i 9 beta its vry difficult,bt wait meri annivrsry tk..
Usdin to sbko double surprised nd shock dena h...
Akash'dad,pr maa ki bhut yad aa ri h,or unanti ki bi.
Br'ab srf 5 din rh gye h.itna wait kiya h to or 5 din.plz...

Akash'uff dad...5din mere liye bhoot mushkil hone wale h..
Meneka'na na,akash ye mushkil to kuch bi ni jo 5din bad jo mushkile hogi usse ldo tb pta chlega.
Akash'bua,aapko aachi trh pta h,meri family ki jisne izzat uchali h bhare baazar me,main use hmare ghr se bahar nikal dunga...'...Manyata hair comb kr ri h..
Nd uday bahr se chupke se dekhta h.
Manyata'keise bulawau,ki kisne diya?
Uday smile krta h..
Manyata'wo apni lipstik utha k dekhti h..
'col.to yhi tha,ab mark ka keise pta kru?
Uday bde pyar se use or uski harquito ko dekhta h..or apne cel me pic capture krta g.

Manyata lipstik lgati h first capture..
Uske bad wo uday ki ek pic leti h,nd use pyar se dekhti h'photo pe dene me sharm aa ri h,pr photo me kaun dekhta h,wo photo ko phr bde pyar se kiss krti h...2nd capture..

Jb wo pic pe kiss krti h tb uday apne chicks ko touch krta h nd blushng both..
Or phr us mark ko bde dhyan se dekhti h'pta ni,mujhe to ni lg rha maine to ni diya,lekin...'
Tbi uday janbhujh k ander aata h'manyata .
Manyata dar jati h or wo phote piche chupa leti h,wo main.
Uday'piche kya chupa ri ho?
Manyata'ku ku kuch ni,main aati hu,wo.
Uday uska hath ni chodta'phle btao kya chupa ri ho?
Manyata pic apne hath me tightly pkad k khadi h,ni ni kuch ni..
Uday use or tightly pkdta h,to dono me eye cntct hota h

Manyata'wo kisne di thi?
Uday'phle tum btao tum kyn janna chahti ho?
Manyata'qki main tum.
Uday'ha,maine suna ni.
Manyata dar k ghabra k' papa maa k annivrsry k din tumhein btaugi.

Uday'ok,main bi usi din btadunga...
Wo manyata ko chod deta h,or manyata hske chali jati h...

Manyata bahar jati h khush hoti h nd uday ki pic dekhti h
'ab btana pdega,qki mujhse bi ni rha jata h ab tumse dur...ha ni to wo ek or kiss deti h...

Uday bi blush krta h
'finaly,tum bologi,or main bi...
Mere ab tk ka sbse khubsurt din hoga...thanku god...love u manyata...

Unanti nd manyata planning anniversry party.
Ds'sb taiyari ho gai beta.
Manyata'dadi taiyari to
Un:bhabhi chup na surprize hogi party decoratives.
Hr saal main deti hu,is saal hm dono...
Ds'ha ha thik h.hr saal nya nya krti h kuch lekin is saal to manyata se jyada nya kuch ni.
Manyata thout'ni dadi kuch or bi nya h...mere liye...
Un:why u r blushng?
Manyata'nthng..

Precap-party day cuming.

Pari
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Hey Pari 🤗, gosh Finally Manveer confession is hapeening yeh party kab hoga, I'm excited now for manveer confession 😳😍plus hell scared to know what will happen when Askah would come face to face with Uday and Manyata😡 , how the heck will Manyata react when she would know that the person whom she has fallen for is her rapist brother 😲, feeling really bad for manyata😭 and I hope confession happens before Akash comes, or else sab karcha ho jayega.
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Manveer ss:
Without u no life:u nd me:Soulmate

Part-40

Saare members beithe h.
Br'unanti kya khas h is party me.
Un'khas,sbse khas to bhabhi h..or jha party hogi wo sb ho cuka h.
Ds'is baari party me bhoot mja ayega.
Komal:ha manyata meri bhu bi hogi..na isliye..
Manyata smile...

Uday alg beitha apne kam me lga h... Un:bhai,tum itni dur kyn beithe ho,aake idhr beitho,kal ki party ki baatein ho ri h..
Uday'unanti,main bhoot jruri kam kr rha hu,don't disturb me.
Manyata'unanti rhne do na,kam jyada jruri h,annivrsry to roj aati h..
Uday use dekhta h wo smile krta h or kam wam chod k udhr family k 7th aake beith jata h...

Manyata unanti phr chupke se hsti h...
Br'aaplog jo surprize denge to denge,lekin hm aaplogo ko double surprize denge..
Jisse sbki khushi dugunni ho jayegi...

Uday'aisa kya h dad?
Meneka'surprize h beta,usse bdi khushi aapki zindgi me shayed hi koi hogi..
Uday manyata ki trf dekhta h thout'ni shayed usse bdi khushi ka bi din h kal mere liye'...

Manyata'hy bhagwan jaldi jaldi me bol to diya party me bol dungi,pr keise..bdi tnsn ho ri h...
Uday'kis soch me dubi ho manyata..'
M:ni kuch ni,wo mujhe puchna tha.
Uday'ab jo puchna h khna h wo kal...gud nyt.,..
Manyata'gud nyt...

Manyata ko ratbhar couch pe karwate le ri thi..'ek trf khushi bi h,dar bi h keise bolungi...
Or uday ko nind hi ni aa ri h,khushi k maare...
'ye kal kb hoga,jaldi se aaja...

In nxt mrng..
Sb br nd komal ko anniversry wish krte h..
Manyata-uday blessing lete h.

Br 2 meneka.
'menka akash k pas jao,yha se wha
Se rhna jruri h..
Menka'ha bhaiya,main jati hu.tym pe undono ko leke aajaungi..
Br'ha tum jao jaldi..
Maneka'aaj hmara pariwar pura hoga.bhaiya,i m happy.
Br'me 2.or jo ni h pariwar ka ab wo bahr jayega..
Menka'or wo h manyata...
'bhabhi,main rat tk party me aajaungi,kuch jruri kam h pura krna h.
Komal'thik h,aajana jrur..
Meneka chali jati h...

Manyata apne rum me jati h,unanti bi aati h...
'bhabhi,saare guests ko invitation de diya h,party hall puri trh taiyar h..
Kya hua?aap itni preshan kyn ho?
Manyata'arey kuch ni,ha sb ho chuka h,phle ghr k saare guest jayenge na,phr saari ladies na.
Un:ha ye to maa ne bol diya h..mja ayega..i m exicted...
Manyata'me 2..chlo tumhare bhai k kapde nikal du..
Un:mst bnake bhejna bhai ko...
Manyata'ni ni,jyada aacha bnaya to ldkiya utha k le jayegi.ha ni to.
Both laughng...
Unanti chali jati h...

Manyata'aaj bda ajeeb sa dar lg rha h,shayed rat ko jo uday se bolna h uska dar h...
Hy bhagwan,main pagal ho jaungi..

In hospital
Akash ready h.
Meneka'chle akash beta,jay wait kr ri hogi.
Akash'ha bua g i m ready...
Akash nd menka'aaj phr se us ghr ki kismat bdal jayegi..
Both evil laughng...

Uday rum me aata h,manyata coverd me se uday k kapde nikal k rkhti h.
Uday uski trf dekhta h'hello jagat,aaj party hall me tym se phuch jaana,annivrsy se imp.bi aaj kuch...

To manyata achanak use dekhti h..
Or uday use dekh k smile krta h...
Manyata uske kapde nikal k rkh k chali jati h
'taiyar ho jana,or idhr se papa k 7th chale jana..jaldi.ha ni to..

Jagat'ha uday Main tym pe phuch jaunga..
Uday'hmmm..
Cal cut...


In nyt.
Uday ne totaly blck kapde bs shrt vry lightly pink h phne h.he weard vry lightly pink shrt,blck court nd paint...
All gents ready h...
Br:mrs komal singh jeisa aapne kha tha,hm saare gents ready h..or hm party hall ja rhe h.
Komal'thanku,itne saare gents kha h srf 2hi to h..
Vijay'arey aisi kya bat h,main bi hu..uncle g.
All laughng.
Uday'aap sb aaram se aana..or wo manyata ki trf dekhta h or uske pas jake khta h'i watng nly u..tumhara ans.sunna h,jaldi aana..bye..
Manyata'hmm..

Un'weise vijay,jay kha h?
Vijay'kh ri thi aaungi,lekin thodi deir me sbko surprize dena h...
Komal:jrur kuch bda plan kr ri h hmare liye..
Phr saare gaints chale jate h...

Ds'chalo-2 tum sb bi jaldi taiyar ho jao...wrna late ho jaoge...
Sb phr apne apne rum me taiyar hone jate h...

Sb taiyar hoke aate h..
Komal'of oh,meri aankho ka kajal khtm ho jayega,meri bhu beti itni sunder jo lg ri h..'njr na lge.
Ds'manyata specialy aap bhoot sunder lg ri ho'
Un'ha bhabhi..u r 2 beautiful.
Manyata'hm sb aache lg rhe h chale...

Sb chale jate h...
Uday besbri se manyata ka intzar kr rha h...
Br'ye party hall open kb hoga uday.
Uday'dad jb mummy aapke 7th hogi tb..
Vijay'yes qki aap dono ki ntry 7th krwani h or phle..

To tbi komal or ds phuchti h.
Br'oh,komal luking pretty..
Komal smile..
Uday'maa,manyata unanti kha h.
Ds'wo dusri car me aa rhe h.
To br nd komal hall door open krte h,nd jb hall door open hota h nd br nd komal nter in hall to weise hi lytes on hoti h,nd
Roses patels girti h.
Both vry hapy nd all guests clappng nd wishing annivesry..
Br'ye unanti bi
Ds'a.a.a,unanti ne to whi kiya h jo wo krti h,ye idea aapki bhu manyata ka h..
Br ka muh bn jata or hall me chale jate h...

Uday jagat se baatein krta h tbi tara aati h
'bhai bhabhi unanti kha h?
Uday'main bi unhe hi dekh rha hu pta ni kha rh gai..
Tara'ab tk to aa jaana...omg
Jagat'kya hua?
Tara'bhai bhabhi aa gai.
Uday dekhta h to bs dekhta rh jata h..
Wo manyata ko niche se uper tk uske luk ko notice krta h.
Manyata wearing lightly pink colour fully decoretive heavy lehnga nd shrt blouse with bck dori,nd lehnga net chunni coverd full body...state open hair h,nd usne ek tika(4head jwelery)lgaya h.she luking vry vry pretty.,

Uday ki njre bs stop ho gai h,nd he s lightly smile.uske face pe ek shine aa gai h...

To manyata chlth h to piche thodi kuch ladies ki bheed aati h to manyata ko thoda dhakka lg jata h..
Wo ruk jati h.
1aunty bolti h'sry beta..glti se ho
Manyata'koi bat ni..its ok.
Manyata jaldi se ek corner me chali jati h,becoz uske blouse ki dori khul gai hoti h..
Uday sb dekh rha hota h,'jagat main aata hu..wo phr manyata ko dhudne me lg jata h...

Manyata dori bandhne ki koshish krti h'arey bandh ja,ghr pe bi bdi mushkil se bndha tha..plz..wo jaldi-2 bandh ri hoti h,bt wo bandh ni pa ri h..weise hi uske bck pe koi hath lgata h,wo dar k piche dekhti h,wo uday hota h...
Manyata'ah,wo main wo bina kuch bole jane lgti h tb uday uska hath pkdta h,nd use bck turn krta h,uski njr manyata pe h or hath Dori pe..
Manyata apni chuni ko tightly pkad ri h,kbi apne hatho ko bond kr ri h..wo ghabra ri h.

Uday uski dori bandh deta h,or manyata phr wha se jaldi jaane lgti h..
Uday uska hath pkad leta h,or use apni bck trf laane lgta h
'or dhire se uske kaano me bolta h,tumhein pta h aaj kya
Manyata ghabrai hui h or wo zbrdsti hath chuda k bhaag jati h...
Uday smile'main hi is duniya ka sbse khushkismat insaan hu..ha ni to.

Manyata jagat tara k pas jati h,or uday use dur se dekhta h...

Jagat'manyata u r luking vry prety.
Tara'yes,bhai s vry lucky aap jeise khubsurta wife mili.
Manyata little sad
'jagat'kya main such me uday k layek hu.?
Jagat'ha manyata,zindgi pyar hr kisi ko ni deti,tum khusnaseeb ho ki tumhein uday mila.
Tara'ryt bhabhi pta h,aap dono ko dekh k kya lgta h made 4 each other..
Jagat'uday se ye bat mt khna kbi,wrna uska dil tuit jayega..
'or zindgi ne tumhein uday se milaya h,to kuch to socha hoga...

Manyata c uday nd say'main bol dungi uday,aaj main apne dil ki bat tumhein bta dungi'..
Unanti'dad maa se apne pyar ka izhar kro or maa tumbi plz.
Jb br bolte h tb uday manyata ki trf dekhta h.
Br'i love u komal...
Uday thout'main bi jald boluga manyata..
K:i love u 2...
Manyata thout'main bi ye bolna chahti hu uday...

Uday table k shahre hath me drink liye hue,manyata ko dekh rha h,or manyata chori-2 njro se use dekh ri h...

Gr 2 br
'br tum lucky ho,family tumhari itni bdi h,sb khush h.or tumhari family specialy manyata ki wjh se meri beti tara khush h..
Br smile'manyata wo hmare ghr k
Layek ni h,hm use apne.
Gr:ek bar uske past ko bhul jao,phr i m dam sure tumhein usse better bhu ni milegi.

Vijay'hy guys,itni bdi party bina gaane dance k aacha ni lgta..
Plz come couples on dance floor.firstly br uncle nd komal aunty...
All guests clapping...

Precap-manveer dance...nd akash nter in hall..

Pari
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Posted: 13 years ago
Pari😊 I love it.❤️
I love it. ❤️
I love it.❤️
I love it.❤️
I love it.❤️
Precap was damn interesting.👍🏼 Now waiting for Akash ki Dhulaayi wo bhi dhobi pachaad by Uday.😆 Oh God, I'm dying to read the next chapter right now. 🥳
Thanks Angel for the beautiful update & PM .😊
LOVE YOU.🤗 🤗
Edited by sonam2801 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
it was awesomely written just awesome it was truely fab
dont let that akash spoil manveer moment
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey pari 🤗, manveer are so cute, and Manyata in pink lehega uff,😳😍. I so want teh confession to happen before that Paakash entry😡, yaar please dont spoil the confession beacuse of that Akash, J and Menka Br team.😡

And yeh BR ka kya chakkar hai, does he know that Akash coma mein kaise gaya, I guess he knows what he did but he doesnt know that the girl in manyata😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
@sonam swtheart uski akash ki dhulai to main bhoot kraugi.sb se...
@rocker wo to aaj pta chlega..let c dear.
@chitra..pink lehnga imagine krke aacha lg rha hoga,.
Wel,let c darlng..akash ki ntry kya kmaal krti h...

Pari
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Manveer ss:
Without u no life:u nd me:Soulmate

Part-41

Tara'ha ha dance krne se phle uday bhai se ek req.bhabhi k liye aaj kuch bolna bnta h..

Manyata tara ki trf dekhti h ni,iski koi
Un'ryt tara,papa ne maa ne ko i love u bola,lekin bhai aap kuch unique bolo.'

Manyata ko ghabhraht ho ri h to wo achanak bolti h'ni uday...


Uday romentic style me dhire-2 aata h manyata k pas..or bolta h
'aisa lga dil pr hath rkh diya khuda ne,unhone hmara nam liya kuch aisi ada se'..
Unanti'waah...bhai.
Jagat'owsum..shayar kb se bn gye...
Uday'meri zindgi me mera khuda hsta muskurata aankho k saamne rhta h,use dekh dekh k shayri bnti h'...
Wo knees pe beith k manyata se puchta h'will u dance wid me...?
Manyata blushng'yes...

Komal'mere bacho ko njr na lge.kbi.
Br thout'thodi deir me sb bdal jayega komal...

Vijay'unanti,dance krna aata h?
Un'ha.
V:of oh chalo na hm boar ho rhe h.
Wo lejata h.

Jagat'nd mis.tara wil u dance wid me.?yha aapki trh khubsurat koi ni h..
Tara'hmm..flirt krne ki jrurt ni h,main khud apne liye perfct dhund ri thi...chalo..
Jagat smile...

Dance floor pe sb jate h..
(Sng start)
Both in eye cntnct,manyata ne uday ko lightly hug kiya h,uday ne waist se pkda h use...

{male version}
"Jaane wafa,teri aarzoo h
(Female version)
''Oh,diwane dil ko teri zuztzu...
{uday pick up tigtly hr waist nd
both in eye cntct,nd both r
fastly moving..steps Manyata in
his arms while Dancing)

(M.V)
Meri zindgi h kya,teri baahar h..

(F.V)
Tera intzaar h snam,mujhe tumse pyar h.
{uday nd manyata dancing
passionately...Both completely
lost,manyata bi dhire-2 uday ki
baaho me simat ri h.or uday bi use apni baaho me tightly hug kr rha h}

(F.V)
'Tumne agar mujhko chaha,mera sbkuch tumhi pe luita du,

{He rubbed his palm very softly
on
her waist and hold her hand in his
another hand and manyata's
other hand on uday's shoulder}

"Tum jo gle se lga lo,main hsti bi apni mitta du...

{manyata little blushng,uday
passinately takes manyata
to his
arms...and again both looked in
each other eyes and then he
moves her to his left and then to
right after that they dance very
Close.]


(M.V)
Meri zindgi h kya?teri baahar h,

(F.V)
Tera intzaar h,snam mujhe tumse pyar h...
Dil bekraar h,mujhe tumse pyar h...

{uday use apne rounding krta
h,nd both smile,and Every eye in
the party
stuck on them.uday pulled
manyata towards
hm.
He put his one hand on her
waist.)

(Both version)
"Jaane wafa teri aarzoo h..
Diwane dil ko teri arzoo h.."


(uday lifts her
and rotate hr so passionately.
Both forgot evry thng..)
Uday already lost hr,bt dis tym
manyata uday me lost h na use
bhoot pyar aa rha uday pe..
Manyata's eyes when she was
carassing Uday's cheeks while
dancing , that feeling of
submitting himself in Uday's eyes
when he was pic up Hr in his
arms while Dancing ... Everything
was just so flawless and
mesmerising...


Akash ntry in party hall..wo dhire-2 chalke aata h..

Sudden unanti or tara
'of oh bhai ab bhabhi ko chod bi do dance khtm ho gya h..
Tara
'bhabhi yha aaiye,aapse kuch kam h'

Wo manyata ko khinc k le jate h,ek party corner me,or manyata uday ko dekhti rhti h,ki aaj to bs main apne pyar ka izhaar krdungi...

Uday'manyata main bi tumse bolne k liye tadp rha hu,tumhari aankhe bi bhoot kuch kh ri h,wo phr manyata k pas jeise hi jane lgta h.
Weise hi awaaz aati h
Dad..
Sb dekhte h,uday bck turn leta h.
All family members shocked...

In corner
Un'kya hua bhabhi aap.
M:of oh mujhe tumhare bhai se aaj kisi bi hal me bolna h.
T:kya?
M:i love u or kya?
Unanti happy'main bhai ko btane ja ri hu,or aap party me unhe bolna.
M:ni main khud
Unanti khush hoke aati h'bhai pta h bha..she shocked..

Ds:akash,tu thik ho gya..
Sb khush hote h,all cryng.
Sb akash ko hug krte h,
Akash'bhai,aap bhule to ni mujhe..
Uday aata h'pagl h kya nd both r hug...
Unanti bi hug krti h..

Akash'main wapis aaya,isse bda surprize ho ni skta..
Menka'lekin aap sb

Unanti'lekin akash ye tum groom k dres me kyn ho,ldki pasnd krli kya?

Jay'pasnd ki ldki hi ni unanti wo shadi krke bi aaya h..
Akash k bck se jay niklti h as a bridal..

All shocked.again..
Uday'jay tum..
Akash ye tumne...
Meneka'q kya hua??uday beta,oh aap apni ptni ko bulaiye..use bi to uske dever se use milana h...
Komal:akash,beta ye kya h sb koi mujhe btayega...
Br:ha main btata
Akash'ni dad phle mujhe bhabhi se milna h..

In other side
Tara'bhabhi al d bst.jao.
Manyata wha se khushi se bhaagi aati h,nd say'uday main tumse bhoot...

Wo bheed dekhti h,or uday jha khada hota h to manyata ko akash ka chahra ni
Dikh rha h..
Phr jeise hi manyata ki awaaz sunke uday bck turn hota h..
Manyata'uday main tumse bhoot...shocked..wo akash ko dekh leti h,
Wo chup,koi reaction ni..

Menka'akash apne gle phoolo chodo,or apni bhabhi ko dekho..
Jeise hi akash apna sir uper krta h,obivously he s also shocked...

Manyata k saane uska saara past ki images ghumne lgti h
Nd same akash k 7th bi yhi hota h...

Manyata stand lyk a stone nd akash also..
Both r hate eyecntct..

Br'akash beta.
Akash 'break eye cntct ah dad,
Br'ye h aapki bhabhi..
Manyata ki njre bs akash ko dekh ri h,uski njro me wo chubh rha h.,.

Uday'jay ye sb tumne jan bujh k kiya h na,tumhare jeise..
Akash'bhai,jay meri patni h ab,aap ne jo iski insult ki,wo respct wapis di h maine ise..
Uday'akash,jay ki koi chal h isme kisi ko bina btaye shadi.
Akash'meri shadi k baare me dad,buag ko pta h..
q aapne kisi ko btai thi ki aap ek rapi.
Uday shout nd pic akash coller'tune jo kiya so kiya,lekin yha sbko pta h manyata k baare me bolna mtlb apni insult krwana.jitni meri izazat krta h usse jyada izazat tujhe manyata ki krni pdegi,or agar respct ni de skta to use kuch bolne ki jrurt ni..wrna main bhul jayega ki tu mera chota bhai h..

Br'wah uday,hmne socha tha apne chote bhai ko dekh k khush ho ge aap,or aaj tk akash ko aapne gusa tk ni kiya or aaj is ldki k liye...chii

Uday again shout'mere liye meri zindgi me sbse phle manyata aati h,uske bad koi or,ye bat aap sb yad rkhna.or akash ki aane khushi mujhe jitni h utni kisi ko ni,lekin jo ye krke aaye h,wo iski glti h.
Akash manyata se njre ni mila rha h...
Lekin manyata use pather ki trh khadi hoke dekh ri h...

Akash thout'manyata yha or wo bi meri bhabhi,ye bhai ko pure saher me yhi raping grl mili thi'

Manyata thout'ye aku h,ye yha,main uday ko btati hu,wo jan se mar dega use...ha ye jaladh jinda rhne layek ni h'
Uske pas jay aati h
'manyata,shocked lga na mujhe dulhan k rup me dekh k,chalo main btati hu aapka or mera rishta..
Wo kya h na,ye h akash singh,singh family ka chota beta,or aapke pati ka chota bhai,in shrt aapka iklauta dever,or main aapki iklauti devrani..
Manyata phr or shockd ho jati h'or jay ki trf dekhti h.
Jay dhire se bolti h'tumhari zindgi ab bd se btar hogi..

Manyata faint hone lgti h,
Uday'manyata kya hua?
Uday manyata ko phr aake pkdta h...
Or apne arm pe catch krta h...
Jay'ho gya iska drama shuru...
Uday phr use gusse me dekhta h...
Jay muh bnake chali jati h...

Uday manyata ko apne arm me pick up krke bahr le jata h,car me carefuly bethata h..
Unanti'bhai main bi aapke 7th chalti hu,akash bhai ne khushi k 7th 7th dukh bi de diya..
Wo bi uday k 7th hi jati h..

Vijay'jay bhai,hmein bi btana jruri ni smjha.
Jay evil smile'aapko bta k bi fayeda vijay bhai,aap to manyata k chamche bn gye the.
Vijay fake smile'tumhara bhai hone se aacha wahi h jay...
Wo bi chala jata h.
Jay gusa ho jati h.
Br'chalo akash or jay ghr chalo,wha saari taiyari ki h aapki welcum ki..
'or ha,manyata ko na jante huye aaplogo ne uska swagat kiya tha.
Jay to apni h..

Komal or ds chup h...

Manyata faint h,uske Dream me wo sb aata h jo party me akash k aane k...
Nd suddn wo chilati h
Ni..
Uday unanti dar jate h.
Uday stop d car
'manyata kya hua?manyata meri trf dekho,kyn dari ho itna.
Manyata cryng or wo uday ki shrt tightly pkad leti h
'wo..wo..
Phr wo uday ki trf dekhti h she thout'ni..abi ni.abi ye khud guse me..
Uday pick hr chick 'manyata tum mt daro main tumhein kuch ni hone duga'
Unanti'ye sb us jay ki wjh se hua h...

Continues

Pari
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Posted: 13 years ago
ohh awesome
kia sabak dia akash or jay ke
hope akash ki achi khasi pitai ho future me :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey Pari 🤗, Kar hi diya kachara inke confession ka,yeh kya golmal ho gaya, J and akash are married🤣, What a plan J has sketched, this marriage is a farce, but shocking twist tha yeh.

And I kind of expected Manyata's stone reaction and her keeping mum over akash being Akku😡. Par kab tak chupa payegi, gosh feel super sorry for manyata😭, ek hi ghar me use apne rapist ke sath rehna padega, now she will be more scared even in her own house because of Akaash😡 , hope Uday sees her fear and tries to investigate on his own.
Edited by chitra_rao - 13 years ago

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