~ Tell Me You love Me ~ FF *updted ch 5 pg 12* - Page 4

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Posted: 13 years ago
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why is it written 3 times but anyway it was fabulous
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice one.Loved it.Cont soon n pm me if u can.
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CHAPTER 3

IN HOME WITH UDAY MANYATA UNNATI AND JAY

Jay directly goes and hugs uday tightly

Jay : ohhh my babyy whre have you been i was missing you like crazy
Uday : *breaking the hug* yeah yeah jay i missed you too *makes a face*
Jay : uday why are you behaving like this you love me na
Uday : god jay yess i do *lieing ofc*
Manyata : *hurt* guyss i am going to my room
Unnati : yeah manyata i am comin too i need to talk to you

manyata and unnati leaves and uday is like ohh Jesus Christ mai is jay ke saath ab shuru kar dege appni chumachatti *jesus christ me with jay she'll starts ruining my lips and cheeks*

Uday : ahh jay i need to go you see i need to complete my homework
jay : what since when u do ur homework *says crossing her hands*
uday : arghh since today now bye *thinks god i need to break up with her fast*

uday leaves quickly and jay too leaves to her room

WITH UNNATI AND MANYATA

Unnati : manyata don't be hurt i swear tomorrow uday will see the most beautiful girl he has ever seen
Manyata: stop unnati beautiful and me from which angel do i look beautiful actually forget beautiful from which angel i look pretty
Unnati : from each and every angel sweetheart and you just see what i do to you
Manyata : i don't want to do anything and STOP SAYING I AM PRETTY
unnati ; you'll see tomorrow when uday ohh forget dada each and evry guy will run after you but i just need too *touches her hair* fix your hairs and your sweet and simple look
manyata : ohh really so what should i wear huh
Unnati: a dress in which you look hot not these tomboyish dresses WAER HOT CLOTHES
Manyata : ohh really and what about a BIKINI huh ??
unnati : ohh that would be awesome *laughs*
manyata : unnati stop teasing me okk *checks the time its 9:30* dinner time lets go
unnati : ok lets go sweety

evryone at dinner table

manyata and unnati calls the butler and says him to arrange things and keep severs when evryone arrives jay as usually matak matak kar and sits and finally uday arrives jay pats a chair beside her uday behave as if he didn't noticed and sits beside manyata and unnati beside Jay

Jay : *gives a look to uday* so whats up for dinner
manyata : well for you its boiled vegetables and for us its pancakes after all u r on diet
unnati and uday snigger's
Jay : ohh whatever butler pls serve fast
butler: ok madam and he serves the food as i said boiles veggies for jay and loads of pancakes for rest of them
unnati : ohh the pancakes are amazing
manyata: i agree they are very very veryyy tasty *says aloud to tease Jay*
uday : even me THEY ARE HELLS TASTY JOSH GREAT JOB *josh is butler's name*
Josh : thank you sir
Jay : looks at those pancakes and her mouth is watering inside

REST 3 JUST LAUGHS

DINNER FINISH ALL GOES TO HIT THE BED

*jay rooms is downstairs while uday and manyata's room is upstairs and unnati's also downstairs*

upstairs with uday and manyata

uday : manyata gud night
manyata : good night uday

they both share a tight hug uday always enjoys each and evry hug with manyata and same with manyata and suddenly manyata gets a message from her cell and she breaks the hug

uday : *with curiosity * itne raat ko tumhe kon message kar raha hai
manyata : lets check *she extracts her phone from her pocket* ohh its him
uday : who himm ohh that guy we meat today
manyata : yup him he's my good friend
uday : jo bhi manyata usse dur rahi samjhi mujhe woh kuch theek nahi laga
manyat : ohh hooo tum kabse mujhe leke possessive hone lage
uday : oh common manyata im givin advice rest its all on you but i don't like that guy *jealous ofc*
manyata : accha uday no debates will see you tomorrow gud nite
uday : gud nite chal sleep now

NEXT DAY ALL LEAVING FOR COLLEGE

uday : unnati manyata lets go
unnati : dada u go me and manyata will come later
uday : but why dekho unnati mujhe us jay ke saath akela mat chodo
unnati : dada woh apki GF hai agar itna hi dar lagta hai toh break up with her
uday : i want to but she's manyata's sis
Jay : hamare bare mein bbat kar rahe ho
Unnati : yes jay tum aur dada jao me and manyata will come later *fakes smiles at her*
uday : looks unnati with pleading eyes and says don't be that callous unnati
unnati : jay and dada go now

BY THIS UDAY AND JAY LEAVES

unnati : manyata now your makeover starts
*selects a dress for her and stars doing her makeup*
manyata : yaar no NO makeup chudal mat bana mujhe
unnati : relax manyata hum zada nahi makeup nahi kar rahe
manyata : phir theek hai chal lagja wapas apne kam par fastly unnati we are getting late jaldi kar na please
unnati : silly girl *after 15 min * ur ready now lets go sab ke hosh udane

AT SCHOOL

manyata's wearing this :http://www.polyvore.com/mays_dress/set?id=49797628

Jay's wearing this : http://www.polyvore.com/jays_dress/set?id=49774693

and unnati wearing this :http://www.polyvore.com/unnatis_dress/set?id=49774325

all boys staring at manyata and there she is walking with pride and unnati walking along her
there were two whistles made by boys and all girls also staring J-E-A-L-O-U-S you know right and

Betha *jays friend* : jay your sis is hells hot look
jay : what my sis *turns around and mouth drops* SIS
manyata : ohh hi jay
Jay : *still in shocked* hiii sis u look different
manyata: well for the best i guess
unnati : now excuse us we need to leave
manyata: bye
andrew : hey beautiful maybe we could go out somethime
manyata : sure if i get time now bye

they leave

manyata : LAUGHING GOD UNNATI THIS IS SO MUCH FUN
unnati : humne to kaha tha sab ke hosh ud jayege
manyat : now i'll leave bio class i tell you

In bio class

MS : class we have a trip related to assignment so here are ur partners

manyata and ???? *will tell you who he is in the end*
uday and jay
unnati with ronaldo *common friend*

??? : wow manyata you look so hot i tell you *smlies*
manyata : thanks for the compliment btw have you seen uday

meanwhile with uday *all random friends*

Drake : wow dude that chick is like damn SEXY
uday : yeah who's she
ANDREW : hotness she is man sexiest out of all i must say
uday : yeah but tell me who's she
rolando : damn didn't knew she was that hot right guys
boys : right
uday GOD TELL ME WHO SHE IS
rest boys : MANYATA
uday : WHAT *laughs * stop kidding guys she cute and all but not hot
boys : dude when u'll see u'll know

END OF PART TWO BY THE WAY UDAY BUNKED BIO CLASS WHAT WILL HAPPEN WHEN UDAY WILL SEE MANYATA AND WHOS ??? STAY TUNED

THANKS FOR READING












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Posted: 13 years ago
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Amazing update!!! Plzzz continue soon:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#35
😆 cool! plz update soon!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: AKlover101

Amazing update!!! Plzzz continue soon:)



awww thank you
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: vampire12345678

why is it written 3 times but anyway it was fabulous


thankiii and yes meri kartute instead of post reply i wrote it in new topic twice
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: princessnia

Nice one.Loved it.Cont soon n pm me if u can.



thankii for liking
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: DEK_girl

😆 cool! plz update soon!



i will surely update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#40
Loved it!!!!please update next part soon...

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