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Posted: 13 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: Amibaiju

Very nice...loved it...please update soon...


ok done and thanks for reading glad you liked it
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: annysyed

Awesome update...uday was too funny,lol i was laughnh lke hell ...update soon n add me in ur pm list



thank you dear and yes in my FF uday is hella funny will update soon :)
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glad u liked it thanks for reading
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Originally posted by: janeniroopa

very interesting and plz do cont soon😊



i'll update soon dear thanks for reading my FF
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: jazzthakur

hey it was hilarious🤣🤣🤣

especially uday,he was too funny yaar🤣🤣
i just got fall of my chair while reading it😆😆
plz do cont
i beg in front of u plz plz cont soon



i will and its just begining wait and watch what happens that was a trailer of uday he's ver funny here
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Originally posted by: -JEHAN-

i loved it...awesome...👏

dear continue soon
and add me in ur PM list...😳
i would love to read ur story...



awww thank you even i would like to write for you all
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Originally posted by: AKlover101

Hey Lipika can u plzzz make the video available on cell phones? Thanks in advance:D



i will sweetheart actually it is available on phones too will check again though
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Originally posted by: Inkpen4877

Super cute! I love the music choice!



thanks and i love that song too and honestly i got inspired to write this FF by hearing this song too i love taylor swift she's awesome
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Originally posted by: ilvuday

it iz reali awesum but u shld write instead of making video i mean it must be reali tym consuming na?...but nonetheless it was awesomely written...thanks for pm n plz continue soon



thanks for liking my FF and thanks for suggestion keep giving suggestion love ya dear :)
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AT DONUTS SHOP

Uday : so princees what do you want to have
MaY : well we came here for coffee and donuts right
Uday : okk as you say shawty *he calls waiter*
WAiter : yes sir how can i help you
Uday : Bring us 2 cup of -*get cut off*
May : cold coffee with ice cream and chocolate donuts
waiter : sure ma'am anything else
Uday : no thank you
WAiter : ok sir by this waiter leaves
Uday : god manyata you know me so well how come you know i like chocolate donuts and cold coffee
May : uday what happened to you i have known you since childhood how come i won't know huh silly *punches his playfully *
uday : than how come i don't know what you like
May : well tumhe dusre chicks se fursat mile to na
Uday : yeah right
Waiter : here's your cold coffee and chocolate donuts enjoy the meal *smiles and leaves*
MAy : *takes the choco donut* i love it damn it so tasty
Uday : It is And why it wouldn't be afterall its StarBuvks
May : yeah right *checks the time * uday its getting late only 1 hour is left for our college to end bug up
Uday : WHAT ONLY 1 HOUR manyata 1 hour ja ke kya karoge we bunked a class so why not we bunk the college today common on 1 hour is left only a idoit stupid insane moron person will join college
*says it delebratley*
May : accha uday mujhe bunk karwane ka kya tarika nikala hai maan gayi yujhe aaj to tujhse bada kamina maine aaj tak nahi dekha
Uday : MANYATA mujhe lagta tha tum mujhe samjti ho but i was wrong
May : uday senti kyu ho raha hai
Uday : kyuki TUMHE AB PATA CHALA KI MEIN sabse bada KAMINA HUIN i depressed *laughs*
May : *laughs too*uday tu bhi na vaise ab kya irada hai
*uday don't respond* manyata looks at uday and he's flirting with the waitress
Uday : Damn that waitress is HOT
Waitress : sir anything else you want
Uday : You
Waitress : *flirty way* excuse me
Uday : i mean you please get the bill *winks at her sexily*
Waitress: oh sure sir *in a sexy voice*
May : WHAT THE HELL uday you flirt 24/7
uday : No i flirt 24/24
maY : Uday thats impossible you sleep right
Uday : yes i do sleep
may ; WAIT do you flirt with girls IN YOUR DREAM TOO
Uday : you know me so well infact mujhe to guinness world book ka record milna chahiye for "THe MoST FliRty Man FouNd In UnivErsE"
May : yah right well i agree to this uday *laughs*
Wiatress : here's you bill sir
Uday : oh sure sundari
waitress : SUNDARI *confused as they are i london right so no hindi*
Uday ; ahh I mean beautiful *open the bill file and sees a number*
waitress: OH *says in his ears* call me *again sexy voice*
Uday : keeps the money in that small bill file and *winks at her * sure
May : *gets jealous snaps finger infront of uday * lets go its getting late we should leave college is almost about to get finish we should go home
direct
Uday : ahh okk fine bye sunadri ahh *remembers hindi again* ahh bye beautiful *smiles sexily*
Manyata grabs uday hand and walks out they were goin to the parking lot and suddenly manyata bumps into sum1

MEANWHILE WITH JAY AN UNNATI

Jay : where is My uday baby *classs him* huh mera phone cut kar diye
Uday : he bagwaan yeh chudhal phir se piche pad agyi ab mera dimag karab karege phone switch off kar deta hu *switches of his phone*
Jay : *calls again and* ...
Unnati : kya hua Jay waasup *fake sympathy*
Jay : you bro
Unnati : oHH
jay: dekho na kitne der se phone try kar rahe hu pehele phone cut kar diya but now THE NUMBER YOUR'E DIALING IS CURRENTLY SWITCHED OFF" the hell i tell you
Unnati : *thinks is the time to make her jealous* oh don't worrry jay dada manyata ke saath aaj university bumk kar rahe hai imean kar rahe the college is over
JaY : WHAT uday manyata ke saath hai *funnily tensed*
Unnati : *in a chucking way* abb Jay uday dada ko manyata ke saath bahot pasand hai na isiliye USKE SAATH GAYE THE
jay : OH enough unnati tumse baat karna is like killing urself i'm going home BYE
Unnati ; aree jay tum to abhi se chid gayi this was a trailer sweetheart just wait and watch how i make u and dada break up *to herself and also leaves for her home btw they all live in same home*

With Manyata and MR ????

Manyata : oh you how are you *hugs him*
??? : i 'm fine beautiful but i am upset
Manyata : why
??? : why ki bacchi no phone calls no emails no chatting mere to yaad hi nahi aata tereko
Manyata : nahi yaar aisa kuch nahi hai *sees uday coming * ohh woh aagaya
???? : who
manyata : uday
Uday : *get off the car didn't notices Mr ??* manyata chalo we are getting la- *get cut off notices Mr ??*
??? : Hi uday
Uday : Hii but do i know you
Manyata : no you don't i know him let me introduce you 2 Mr ???? this is uday and uday This Is ????
???? : nnice to meet you uday
Uday : me too bro manyat chale we are getting late
Manyata : yah ofcourse
???? : manyata wait give me your number atleast
Manyata : oh yeah here it is 4455674518 call me okk
?? : sure *kisses her hand* bye manyata
manyata :*dosen't mind * bye
uday sees this and get jealous well for him he just disliked it but in better word he was jealous and he himself dunno why manyata and uday in car

Manyata : god i missed him he's my best friend
Uday : better than me too
Manyata : what kind of a question is this uday *little shocked*
Uday : relax just kidding but if u had to choose who it would be
Manyata : no comparison uday i can't choose 1 i love you both *smiles*
Uday : *a little hurt but dunno why* we are home lets go
manyata : ok

Both gets out of the car

their house
AT DONUTS SHOP

Uday : so princees what do you want to have
MaY : well we came here for coffee and donuts right
Uday : okk as you say shawty *he calls waiter*
WAiter : yes sir how can i help you
Uday : Bring us 2 cup of -*get cut off*
May : cold coffee with ice cream and chocolate donuts
waiter : sure ma'am anything else
Uday : no thank you
WAiter : ok sir by this waiter leaves
Uday : god manyata you know me so well how come you know i like chocolate donuts and cold coffee
May : uday what happened to you i have known you since childhood how come i won't know huh silly *punches his playfully *
uday : than how come i don't know what you like
May : well tumhe dusre chicks se fursat mile to na
Uday : yeah right
Waiter : here's your cold coffee and chocolate donuts enjoy the meal *smiles and leaves*
MAy : *takes the choco donut* i love it damn it so tasty
Uday : It is And why it wouldn't be afterall its StarBuvks
May : yeah right *checks the time * uday its getting late only 1 hour is left for our college to end bug up
Uday : WHAT ONLY 1 HOUR manyata 1 hour ja ke kya karoge we bunked a class so why not we bunk the college today common on 1 hour is left only a idoit stupid insane moron person will join college
*says it delebratley*
May : accha uday mujhe bunk karwane ka kya tarika nikala hai maan gayi yujhe aaj to tujhse bada kamina maine aaj tak nahi dekha
Uday : MANYATA mujhe lagta tha tum mujhe samjti ho but i was wrong
May : uday senti kyu ho raha hai
Uday : kyuki TUMHE AB PATA CHALA KI MEIN sabse bada KAMINA HUIN i depressed *laughs*
May : *laughs too*uday tu bhi na vaise ab kya irada hai
*uday don't respond* manyata looks at uday and he's flirting with the waitress
Uday : Damn that waitress is HOT
Waitress : sir anything else you want
Uday : You
Waitress : *flirty way* excuse me
Uday : i mean you please get the bill *winks at her sexily*
Waitress: oh sure sir *in a sexy voice*
May : WHAT THE HELL uday you flirt 24/7
uday : No i flirt 24/24
maY : Uday thats impossible you sleep right
Uday : yes i do sleep
may ; WAIT do you flirt with girls IN YOUR DREAM TOO
Uday : you know me so well infact mujhe to guinness world book ka record milna chahiye for "THe MoST FliRty Man FouNd In UnivErsE"
May : yah right well i agree to this uday *laughs*
Wiatress : here's you bill sir
Uday : oh sure sundari
waitress : SUNDARI *confused as they are i london right so no hindi*
Uday ; ahh I mean beautiful *open the bill file and sees a number*
waitress: OH *says in his ears* call me *again sexy voice*
Uday : keeps the money in that small bill file and *winks at her * sure
May : *gets jealous snaps finger infront of uday * lets go its getting late we should leave college is almost about to get finish we should go home
direct
Uday : ahh okk fine bye sunadri ahh *remembers hindi again* ahh bye beautiful *smiles sexily*
Manyata grabs uday hand and walks out they were goin to the parking lot and suddenly manyata bumps into sum1

MEANWHILE WITH JAY AN UNNATI

Jay : where is My uday baby *classs him* huh mera phone cut kar diye
Uday : he bagwaan yeh chudhal phir se piche pad agyi ab mera dimag karab karege phone switch off kar deta hu *switches of his phone*
Jay : *calls again and* ...
Unnati : kya hua Jay waasup *fake sympathy*
Jay : you bro
Unnati : oHH
jay: dekho na kitne der se phone try kar rahe hu pehele phone cut kar diya but now THE NUMBER YOUR'E DIALING IS CURRENTLY SWITCHED OFF" the hell i tell you
Unnati : *thinks is the time to make her jealous* oh don't worrry jay dada manyata ke saath aaj university bumk kar rahe hai imean kar rahe the college is over
JaY : WHAT uday manyata ke saath hai *funnily tensed*
Unnati : *in a chucking way* abb Jay uday dada ko manyata ke saath bahot pasand hai na isiliye USKE SAATH GAYE THE
jay : OH enough unnati tumse baat karna is like killing urself i'm going home BYE
Unnati ; aree jay tum to abhi se chid gayi this was a trailer sweetheart just wait and watch how i make u and dada break up *to herself and also leaves for her home btw they all live in same home*

With Manyata and MR ????

Manyata : oh you how are you *hugs him*
??? : i 'm fine beautiful but i am upset
Manyata : why
??? : why ki bacchi no phone calls no emails no chatting mere to yaad hi nahi aata tereko
Manyata : nahi yaar aisa kuch nahi hai *sees uday coming * ohh woh aagaya
???? : who
manyata : uday
Uday : *get off the car didn't notives Mr ??* manyata chalo we are getting la- *get cut off notices Mr ??*
??? : Hi uday
Uday : Hii but do i know you
Manyata : no you don't i know him let me i ntroduce you 2 Mr ???? this is uday and uday This Is ????
???? : nnice to meet you uday
Uday : me too bro manyat chale we are getting late
Manyata : yah ofcourse
???? : manyata wait give me your number atleast
Manyata : oh yeah here it is 4455674518 call me okk
?? : sure *kisses her hand* bye manyata
manyata :*dosen't mind * bye
uday sees this and get jealous well for him he just disliked it but in better word he was jealous and he himself dunno why manyata and uday in car

Manyata : god i missed him he's my best friend
Uday : better than me too
Manyata : what kind of a question is this uday *little shocked*
Uday : relax just kiding bbut if u had to choose who it would be
Manyata : no comparison uday i can't choose 1 i love you both *smiles*
Uday : *a little hurt but dunno why* we are home lets go
manyata : ok

Both gets out of the car

AT DONUTS SHOP

Uday : so princees what do you want to have
MaY : well we came here for coffee and donuts right
Uday : okk as you say shawty *he calls waiter*
WAiter : yes sir how can i help you
Uday : Bring us 2 cup of -*get cut off*
May : cold coffee with ice cream and chocolate donuts
waiter : sure ma'am anything else
Uday : no thank you
WAiter : ok sir by this waiter leaves
Uday : god manyata you know me so well how come you know i like chocolate donuts and cold coffee
May : uday what happened to you i have known you since childhood how come i won't know huh silly *punches his playfully *
uday : than how come i don't know what you like
May : well tumhe dusre chicks se fursat mile to na
Uday : yeah right
Waiter : here's your cold coffee and chocolate donuts enjoy the meal *smiles and leaves*
MAy : *takes the choco donut* i love it damn it so tasty
Uday : It is And why it wouldn't be afterall its StarBuvks
May : yeah right *checks the time * uday its getting late only 1 hour is left for our college to end bug up
Uday : WHAT ONLY 1 HOUR manyata 1 hour ja ke kya karoge we bunked a class so why not we bunk the college today common on 1 hour is left only a idoit stupid insane moron person will join college
*says it delebratley*
May : accha uday mujhe bunk karwane ka kya tarika nikala hai maan gayi yujhe aaj to tujhse bada kamina maine aaj tak nahi dekha
Uday : MANYATA mujhe lagta tha tum mujhe samjti ho but i was wrong
May : uday senti kyu ho raha hai
Uday : kyuki TUMHE AB PATA CHALA KI MEIN sabse bada KAMINA HUIN i depressed *laughs*
May : *laughs too*uday tu bhi na vaise ab kya irada hai
*uday don't respond* manyata looks at uday and he's flirting with the waitress
Uday : Damn that waitress is HOT
Waitress : sir anything else you want
Uday : You
Waitress : *flirty way* excuse me
Uday : i mean you please get the bill *winks at her sexily*
Waitress: oh sure sir *in a sexy voice*
May : WHAT THE HELL uday you flirt 24/7
uday : No i flirt 24/24
maY : Uday thats impossible you sleep right
Uday : yes i do sleep
may ; WAIT do you flirt with girls IN YOUR DREAM TOO
Uday : you know me so well infact mujhe to guinness world book ka record milna chahiye for "THe MoST FliRty Man FouNd In UnivErsE"
May : yah right well i agree to this uday *laughs*
Wiatress : here's you bill sir
Uday : oh sure sundari
waitress : SUNDARI *confused as they are i london right so no hindi*
Uday ; ahh I mean beautiful *open the bill file and sees a number*
waitress: OH *says in his ears* call me *again sexy voice*
Uday : keeps the money in that small bill file and *winks at her * sure
May : *gets jealous snaps finger infront of uday * lets go its getting late we should leave college is almost about to get finish we should go home
direct
Uday : ahh okk fine bye sunadri ahh *remembers hindi again* ahh bye beautiful *smiles sexily*
Manyata grabs uday hand and walks out they were goin to the parking lot and suddenly manyata bumps into sum1

MEANWHILE WITH JAY AN UNNATI

Jay : where is My uday baby *classs him* huh mera phone cut kar diye
Uday : he bagwaan yeh chudhal phir se piche pad agyi ab mera dimag karab karege phone switch off kar deta hu *switches of his phone*
Jay : *calls again and* ...
Unnati : kya hua Jay waasup *fake sympathy*
Jay : you bro
Unnati : oHH
jay: dekho na kitne der se phone try kar rahe hu pehele phone cut kar diya but now THE NUMBER YOUR'E DIALING IS CURRENTLY SWITCHED OFF" the hell i tell you
Unnati : *thinks is the time to make her jealous* oh don't worrry jay dada manyata ke saath aaj university bumk kar rahe hai imean kar rahe the college is over
JaY : WHAT uday manyata ke saath hai *funnily tensed*
Unnati : *in a chucking way* abb Jay uday dada ko manyata ke saath bahot pasand hai na isiliye USKE SAATH GAYE THE
jay : OH enough unnati tumse baat karna is like killing urself i'm going home BYE
Unnati ; aree jay tum to abhi se chid gayi this was a trailer sweetheart just wait and watch how i make u and dada break up *to herself and also leaves for her home btw they all live in same home*

With Manyata and MR ????

Manyata : oh you how are you *hugs him*
??? : i 'm fine beautiful but i am upset
Manyata : why
??? : why ki bacchi no phone calls no emails no chatting mere to yaad hi nahi aata tereko
Manyata : nahi yaar aisa kuch nahi hai *sees uday coming * ohh woh aagaya
???? : who
manyata : uday
Uday : *get off the car didn't notives Mr ??* manyata chalo we are getting la- *get cut off notices Mr ??*
??? : Hi uday
Uday : Hii but do i know you
Manyata : no you don't i know him let me i ntroduce you 2 Mr ???? this is uday and uday This Is ????
???? : nnice to meet you uday
Uday : me too bro manyat chale we are getting late
Manyata : yah ofcourse
???? : manyata wait give me your number atleast
Manyata : oh yeah here it is 4455674518 call me okk
?? : sure *kisses her hand* bye manyata
manyata :*dosen't mind * bye
uday sees this and get jealous well for him he just disliked it but in better word he was jealous and he himself dunno why manyata and uday in car

Manyata : god i missed him he's my best friend
Uday : better than me too
Manyata : what kind of a question is this uday *little shocked*
Uday : relax just kiding bbut if u had to choose who it would be
Manyata : no comparison uday i can't choose 1 i love you both *smiles*
Uday : *a little hurt but dunno why* we are home lets go
manyata : ok

Both gets out of the car



uday's room



Jay's room



Unnati's room


Manyata's room





so we have reached the end hope you liked it 10 + for next chappy :)



Edited by -Lipika- - 13 years ago

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