love changes the world{ff}CHAP-5 PG 8 UPDATED - Page 2

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Posted: 13 years ago
#11
waoo really lukin 4ward to da chapters...but one thing...i always read is yyy everyone makes akash driver in dere OS...hahahahah...n chikki akash gf...hahahaah
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Posted: 13 years ago
#12
Nice concept ...update soon because I can't wait to see Aryan as a cook n of course our manveer❤️
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Posted: 13 years ago
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U really should continue!! Loved the character sketch!! Plzzz add me to ur pm.list!! Thanks:D
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I'm so happy that u all liked my concept...sorry 4 the late...actually I wanted to update the chapter 1 yesterday...due to lack of time..couldn't...
so here goes the chapter 1
CHAPTER-1
Uv entered the Devgarh palace in a very tensed mood.He found out inside that other family members were upset too.He went forward and asked to Maharani Komal;
UV: Aunty Komal, Manyata kahan hai...??? Is she alright..?? kaya hua usse?😕
K: Beta...she's suffering from fever..abb senseless bhi hai..??pata nehi kal kaya hua tha...per kal bho boht hi tensed ho kar kahin bahar gaye thi..?? I don't kno where...but bahar se atee hi she was crying so much nd fainted...abb bhi bho senseless hai...
UV: bahr kahan gaya tha..?? oor bahar aisa bhi kaya hua jo bho roo rahi thi..??
K: I don't know beta..but I'm very worried abt her
UV: relax aunty komal...Manyata ko kuch bhi nehi hoga..anyways hum M se mill ke aateee hai...
UV left the hall nd went to M's room...M was lying down on the bed...UV was looking at her innocent face...though he never expressed his emotions but he was really very worried inside...he sat beside her;hold her hands tightly nd kissed on those..
UV: oh my princess...I can't see u in this condition...kal kaya hua tha or tum kahan gaye thi..aisa bhi kaya hua tha that made u cry..??..!!😭who dared to make my future maharani cry..anyways I don't want to think abt a stupid nd bakwaas personality...plz princess jaldi thik ho jao..hum tumse iss halat mein nehi dekh sakte...
Saying this he kissed M on her cheek nd looked at her beautiful face...

In Jagad's house, in the servent's ward the largest room was for Aryaan as Jagad treats him as his best friend😆Jagad gave him all the comforts but kept him in the servent's ward because he knows that Aryaan deserves it😆...in his room Aryaan was sitting on a half broken chair when suddenly someones hand covered his eyes;
Ar: oh my Chikki darling.. stop surprising me..mein jaanti hoon jan ke yea tum hi ho...oh sweetheart kaya kar rahe hoon...???😆😉
Tara: What...??Chikki kaun...mein toh tara hoon😭😭tum...tum..I don't believe this😭
Ar: aaa...Taaaraaa daaarrrllliiinnnggg tutututuuum..?? iisss waqt???😲😲
T: u looser yehan anee ke liye kaya mujhhe tum se permissio leni paregi...???😭ooh sorry lagta hai ki mein tumhari or tumhari kisi bakwaas lover ke beech aa gaye..!! mein jaa rahe hoon
Ar: no sweetheart...plz don't do this to me...Chikki toh yahan ki kamwali hai...usski or meri beech kabhi kuch nehi hoo sakta...yea toh usski aadaat hai kissi ko bhi kabhi bhi surprise karna..timhare liye toh mein kuch bhi kar sakta hoon
Tara:{to herself:wow kaam kara ne ka bahana mill gaya} OK toh tumhe mere liye kaam karna hoga...kam ki list bata ti hoon...1)mere liye cakes, pizza, coffee etc. etc. banaoo
2)mere legs message karo
3)mere liye costly gifft le aao
OK..look sirf teen(3) cheeze mang rahe hoon..done..???
Ar:{to himself:mmar gaya...aab Jagad se paisa mangna parega..!!} done sweety

In M's room Uv was still sitting beside her;waiting 4 her sense...suddenly M moved i.e. she gained her sense back...seeing UV infront of her she jumped nd sat on the bed...
UV: kaya hua princess...r u ok???
Without saying anything she hugged UV so tightly...cried nd cried😭😭
UV: oh princess aab roo kyun rahe hoon..??
M: Uday plz mujhe maaf kar de...mein ne tere saath hamesha galad kiya...tu mera itnaa khayal rakhta tha..per meinee tujhe deceive kiya...I'm extremly sorry 4 that..plzz forgive me😭
UV:princess yea kaya keh rahe ho tum..? relax!! everything iss fine😊I think tumhe rest ki zaruraat hai..u just lay down
M:ok but will u forgive me..plzzz😕
UV:tumne koi galti kiya hai kaya jo u need forgiveness...now lay down..otherwise I'm not gonna forgive
M laid down nd soon fall asleep...when UV was abt to leave he realized that M was holding his hands while sleeping..he didn't want to disturb M so he sat very closely to her...soon he fell asleep too...😉


this is my chapter 1..may b it was not so good...ur all comments r welcomed...
love u all- Aditi😃


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Posted: 13 years ago
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waohhh dats awsum...manveer sleeping together,...ahemmm ahemmm...hahahahahhaha...doo continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#16
Wow aditi so cute update ! Loved it to d core ..thnks 4 d pm& update soon 😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
#17
Wow Aditi nice one yaar.loved it.but sweetheart pliz next time make it a bit long if u can.anyways cont soon yaar n thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#18
Nice update!! ManVeer sleeping together= ADORABLE!! Can't wait to read the next part so continue soon n thanks for the pm!!:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#19
yeah of course u shud continue!!!!!!!!!!!!😛
What made u ask??!!!!!!!!!😆
I can't wait for the ff, can't wait!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
#20
I'm sooo happy that u liked it...!!!!😲I know the update was too short...but as I said before due to lack of time...I'll try to make the chapter more long...may b I'll update next thursday😃😆

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