love changes the world{ff}CHAP-5 PG 8 UPDATED - Page 6

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Posted: 12 years ago
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hi every1...here goes chapter 5

CHAPTER-5

both manyata nd Uday walked through the living room towards his jeep...UV was very happy...nd 4 an unknown reason Manyata was happy too😉...she was feeling as if she was near the seventh heaven😉...they came near the jeep...

UV: so princess...lets go on a long drive...what do u think..?😉

M: mein kisi long drive mein nehi ja rahi hoon...mujhe na...hmmm...mujhe shopping jana hai...

UV:shopping...hmmm...shopping toh baad mein bhi jaa sakti ho...why spoil this special day..?😕

M:spoil..??mmm...shopping is like my hobby...mera entertainment bhi shopping se hota hai...

UV:seriously...tum J ki hi bari behen ho...one can understand ur relation with her without even any DNA test...!! botn r shopping addicted...!!

M:hum toh sirf shopping addicted hai...tu toh flirt addicted hai na...😡
UV:i think something is barning...kuch jall raha hai na...may b the smell is coming from my left..

M:shut up...pagal kahin ka..abb chalo...

UV: yeah...hum tumhe bohot acche shopping mall per lajate hai..😉

.they both sat on the jeep...UV started driving the jeep..he took a left turn though he was abt 2 go on right side.

M:oh teri...tu left kyun ja raha hai...hum toh right jane wale the na..??😕

UV:iss duniyaa mein bohot saree shopping mall hai sweetie..😉

M:haan but...

UV:yeah...i'm going 2 a shopping mall a little far from here...it will take almost 2 hrs.

M:whaaattt..???but why..?

UV:hum dono ki wish fulfill karne ki liye...2 hours in a drive with u...nd then shopping...

M:oh god...2 hours...bho bhi yahan...mujhe toh neend aa jaye gi...

UV:koi baat nehi...u can sleep...waise bhi i'm ever ready 4 u...

M:oye kutte kamine khashmanu khane...{looking above} hey bhagwan...kiss musipaat mein daal diya...iss khashmanukhane ko mere saath bhejna tha kaya.??🤢

UV:tumhare saath bhi or tumhare liye bhi bheja hume...thanks 2 the uparwala...

M:teri toh..😡meri toh ksmaat hi phooti hai...

U V:or hamari kismaat hamari tarah hot hai..

M:kismaat...nd hott...😕pagal hai kaya..?

without any reply Uday drove the jeep nd finally they reached the shopping mall...

M:yea itnaa bara shopping mall...bho bhi sheher se itnee door...???

UV:hota hai...nd from now this will b my most favorite...

M:kyun...?

UV:2 hrs...iss ki liye...so cute...😉

they went inside the mall...Manyata was looking the mall nd staring at the shops there...

M:uday...mein na bho wala shop mein chalti hoon...wahan ka dresses bohot cute hai...i think they have the better collections...

UV:ok..princess tum jao...hum abhi aate hai...😉

M:oh teri...mein akele kaise jaoon...??

UV:don't worry..i'll b back soon...

M:ok...

she went inside the shop nd started looking 4 a dress...while Uday walked inside a jewellery shop nd started looking 4 the best nd gorgious diamond ring 4 her...M was looking 4 a nice dress when she was pushed by Akash from the back...M fall on the floor nd aryaan on the safaiwali who was standing on the back...they botn got up nd was shocked 2 see each other...

M:tum...u stupid..loser...jerk..kaya kar rahe ho yahan..

A:ur highness..tumne yea mall buy nehi kiya jo mein yahan aa nehi sakya😕so mujhe order maat do...moniya mein tumhe dobara soonch ne ki liye kehrahi hoon...tum mujhe wapase accept kar lo...

M:mein pagal hoon kaya jo mein tumhe accept karungi...NEVER...mujhe toh yea soonch ne sharam ataa hai ki mein ne kabhi tum jaise characterless ko pyaar kiya tha,...🤢i don't believe tumhare liye mein ne apni parivaar ki khilaaf gaya tha..uday ko jail bhej waya tha...ajj toh mein wish karti hoon ki kash tum usse din maar jate jis din uday ne tumhe phek diya tha...😡

A: jiss uday ki baare mein tum bol rahi hoo na bho bhi ek nimber ka characterless hai...

by this time uday entered the shop nd he was really angry at the words spoke by Aryaan..

A:najane kitnii ladkioon pe flirt kiya hoga..kitne ladkiyoon ko dhoka diya hoga...kitneee...

b4 he could finish Manyata slapped on his face...she was soo angry now...

M:don't u dare...bho jaisa bhi haina tum se trillion times better hai...

A:ohh...toh usski saath rehte rehte tum bhi aise hi ho gaya...pehle mujhe pyaar karne ka natak...nd now uday...characterless toh tumbhi ho...

this time uday was too angry...he punched aryaan which made A fall...UV kicked him...nd they were fighting...after fighting for sometime he ran away like a coward...

tears was rolling down from M's face...she was crying much...not 4 Akash...bcauz of her anger nd guilt 4 misunderstanding uday a few days ago...

M nd U left the mall nd sat on the jeep...both of them were silent...uday was driving the jeep fast...but suddenly the jeep stopped moving more...nd it stopped infront of a jungle in the middle of the road😉

so this was chapter 5...don't beat me 4 bringing Aryaan between the manveer part...sprry 4 dat...may b it was not so good...do leave ur comments nde hit on the like button if u liked it...
love u all
Aditi😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
#52
m slapped akash for uday!!!!!!!!! how sweett!!!!!!! update soon the nxt part 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#53
it was soo good.. no we ll not beat u.. problems are a very important part in everybody's life.. and in this case it is bringing manveer closer. continue soon 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#54
awesum plzz p[lzz plzz pm me wen u update.. :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#55
THANX 4 UR COMMENTS...GLAD U LIKED IT...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#56
great update..thnx for the pm!

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