love changes the world{ff}CHAP-5 PG 8 UPDATED

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Zainab

@--Zenu--

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#31

Superb update! Loved it...Vijay was soo funny ! Manveer nokjhok was cutee ..TY 4 d pm& update soon😃

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-JEHAN-

@-JEHAN-

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#32

that was soo cute...i think vijay likes unnati..right taht's he is scard of uday!!!😆but loved that part...

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Nityah

@-StarlitFire-

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#33

superb yaar...

just read all the part in a go...

awesome parts...

very well written...

do continue soon...

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ADITI

@ultravioletray

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#34

xtremly sry 4 late update...here goes chapter 3

CHAPTER 3

UV:aaj tak koi bhi ladki hamari saath bore nehi hue...toh hum tumhe kaise bore hone denge...har second tumhe entertain karenge nd u will b njoying😉😉

saying this he started coming close 2 Manyata...he was soo close 2 M dat she was unable 2 move...she wanted but couldn't resist him😳...she had a strong feelings in her heart 4 him...she almost close her eyes nd their lips were touching each others...😳😳 but suddenly M realized what she was doing...so she pushed UV backward...she was sooo embarressed😳😳😳😳

M:oye halkat vede khasmanukhana kaya kar raha hai tu...irada kaya hai...?😡😕😕😳

UV:tumhe entertain kar rahe hai...or kaya..???😉😉😉

M:chiii!!! tu ladkiyoon ko aise entertain kar ta hai...chiii...isse entertainment kehte hai..?? yea kar ke tu mujhe double bore kar raha hai...chiii😡😡😡😕😕😕😕

UV:or tum enjoy bhi kar rahi thi...right..??😉😉😉

M:nehi...kabhi nehi...mein toh baas...{confused}

she had no clue why she was doing so...😆😆😕😕😕😕😕😳😳😳

UV:oh come on princess...confess it sweetheart...!!!

M:confess..?...confess what..?

M:woh hi jo tumhare dil mein hai...😉abb bata bhi do...

M:mere dil mein...???..!!!!...mere dilll😕...oh mere dil mein kaya hai yea tu janna chata hai...??😃

UV:yeah...those 3 words...😍

M:those 3 words..ok then I...I...

UV:aage bhi bolo

M:yeah..actually I ...I HATE U...abb yahan se nikalll

UV:tum bachpan mein kuch sikha hga yea na hoga but opposite words bohot acche tarah se memorise kiya...right..?

M:matlab...????

UV:love ka opposite hate...hate ka opposite love...like this..😉😉

M:uncle Giri ko puch na hoga ki bachpan tu kab gir gaya tha...tabhi tera dimaag mein mein serious chot aye hai...tu toh pagal hai...mujhe bhi pagal kar dega..jaa yahan se..

UV:think abt what i said...tum bhi samaj jao gi what u feel 4 me...abb hum chalte hai...😉😊

In jagad's house aryaan was still sitting in hi favourite broken chair...thinking...lost in deep thought😆

A:{in mind}tara ka kitnaa demand hai...saree paise khatam ho gaya...Jagad se phir bhik mangna hoga...

suddenly chikki appears nd kicks the chair nd Akash falls...😆

A:aaa...aaa...maaar gaya...bachaooo daiyan ayaa hai😆😆😆😆

C:oye raste ka kutta yea mein hoon...khwaab mujhe dikhata hai..or romance uss tara ki saath...or uss ki liye shopping...yea dekh ne se pehle mein maar kuyn nehi gaye...

A:ohhh darling...samjho na...tara babe..imean tara toh bewakoov hai but tum to samajdar ho na...ok ok...mein shopping mall se tumhare liye ek acche mob lekar aunga...happy..??

C:yeah...bhool na mat darling😆😆😆

Aryaan ran to jagad's room nd fall on his legs...

A:plzzz...mujhe 200 rupees de na...bachale mujhe...😭😭

J:whaaat????kal hi toh salary diya tha pura 5000 rupee...

A:haan...but 2000 tara or chikki pe waste hua...or 3000 mere khanee se...

J:khana 3000..!!but khana toh ghar se bhi khaya tha naa...

A:bhook thori mit ta hai...pura din tujhe or j ko ek karne ki ideas sooch ta hoon...bhookh toh laga ga hi na..???abb kh ane k sawal mat kar...paisa de na...waise bhi mere pass ek idea hai...iss bar toh tu pass hohi jaye ga...jab ho aryaan toh kaya darr

J:tu saath hai tabhi toh darr lagta hai...

saying this he threw 200 rupeess on A's face...😆😆😆

in the palace:

Servent:rajkumari ji plzzz dawayee lijiye..

M:chiii...I'm not going 2 have this bitter medicines...chiii🤢🤢🤢

UV:toh injection kaisa hoga...i think dat's perfect...

M:aaa...nooo...🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢uday plzzz aisa mat kar...

UV:ok...toh take this medicines

He took those medicines nd gave those 2 M very sweetly...he caressed her cheeks nd said very cutely 2 take those...she was soo lost dat she didn't even notice dat being lost she took those medicines...

UV:that's great...dekha...u finally had these bitter medicines..

Mwhaaat..??kaaabbb..??..hmmm...😕😕😕ok abb toh mein thik hoon...mujhe bahar jana hai..plzzz

UV:hamare saath...great..😉😉😉fine hum kal bahar jaenge...ok..!!

saying this he left the room nd M got again lost thinking abt him

plzzz do comment nd let me know whether u like it or not

love u all

Aditi 😃😃

Edited by ultravioletray - 13 years ago

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LadySosostris

@LadySosostris

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#35

Wow Aditi nice one yaar.loved it n cont soon dear.

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ADITI

@ultravioletray

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#36

@ TheRazoQueen sirjee Surya.Ravi -Niha-

THANX A LOT SWEETIE...😃

@ princessnia

OK...i'LL TRY 2 UPDATE IN THIS WEEK😃

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kishmala babar

@kimybabar

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#37

awesome.. mene ek saaans me ek din me sab chapters parh diye..

haha,, hilarious + romantic 😆

update sooon,,,

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ADITI

@ultravioletray

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#38

hi everyone...here goes chapter 4...😊

CHAPTER- 4

the next morning Uday enters the palace...he was very happy as 4 the 1st time Manyata wants 2 go out with him...without even forcing her...he was smiling very cutely nd walking towards M's room through the hall...suddenly J appeared in front of him...

J:kaya baat hai Uday...aj intaa khush kyun ho?...zara hamare saath bhi toh aapna khusiyaan batoon...😉

UV:oh...J u know aaj hum itnaaa khush kyun hai..?..kyun ki aaj hum aapne honewali biwi ki saath bahar ja rahe hai...soo romantic right..??😉

J:seriously...try kar ke dekho...M jiji kabhi tumhare saath bahar nehi jayengi...upar se tumhe insult bhi karegi...tumhare pass toh or bhi option hai...kitnee saree hot ladkiyaan tumhare saath jane ki liye ever-ready hai...toh tum uss chawl-kumari ko chorke aapni barabar ki koi princess ke saath kyun nehi jaate...

UV:actually u know what...humee bho saree ladkiyaan bilkul pasand nehi jo ever ready hai...bohot boring hote hai...4 xample tum...😛

J:...hum...or boring...😆..abb bhi bohot ladkoon ko sirf moka chahiyee hamare saath bahar jane ke liye...

UV:toh unn ladkon ke saath hi date pe jaoo...bho saree PAPPU kaafi cute hai...tumhare saath bohot suit karega..imagine...MR nd MRS.pappu...😉

J:😡😡😡

UV:now excuse me my dear saali😉hume apne honewali maharani ki saath bahar jana hai...

J:😡😉oh...waise tum jaa kahan rahe hoon..??

UV:as if hum tumhe nehi jaante...hum tumhe batayenge or tum bhaag ke ajaao gi kabab mein haddi banne...😉

saying this he leaves the hall nd walks towards M's room

J:{in mind:tumhari date toh hum barbaad karke hi rehenge}

she calls L...

In phone...J:dekho babes...uday ki jeep abhi kharaab kar do...date pe jaane ki cute saa sapna spoil...😉

L:ok J...but...

J:aab dekh na jeep kharab hone ki baad becharee kisi garage mein bore honge...ya koi third class taxi se ghar lotenge...bechaare..😉{she cuts the call}

In M's room:

Manyata was sleeping in her bed...VV enters the room...

VV:{pushing M} M bhai utho...WAKE UP M BHAI...

M:oh...VV sonee do na...kaya super dream aa raha hai...😍

VV:M bhai...yahan hum dard ki waje se marr rahe hai..or tum so rahi hoo...uthoo nd hamari madat karo...intee der tak sonaa acchi baat nehi hai...UTHOOO...

M:go VV...mujhe bohot neend aa raha hai...leave me alone...

VV:utho..warna...warna hum...{interrupted}

M:warna kaya...?

VV without saying anything went outside nd after 1 min came back with a bucket full of water...he poured the whole water on M...at this, M jumped over the bed...

M:aaa...mmm...VV yea kaya kar diya...agar meine aaj tumhe khun nehi kiya na toh mein bhi yuvrani manyata nehi hoon...HAAN NEHI TOH...😡

she was completely wet...nd was burning in anger...

VV:manyata bhai...baat bohot important hai...DO U GET IT..??hamare zindegi barbad ho raha hai or tum sapne dekh rahe thi...

M:hayeee..!!kaya sapnaa tha...ek cute saa rajkumar or mein kitnaaa closely dance kar rahe the...he was sooo cute😳bilkul mere most wanted rajkumaar...😳awww...

UV:really princess..tum hume apne khwaaboon mein dekh rahi thi...gr8...😉

{he entered the room very silently nd was listening their conversation...}

M: oye...salee kaminee...darwaja knock karna tu ne sikhaa hi nahi...khasmanukhana...😡

UV:so princess tumne toh hamari sawal ka jawab hi nehi diya...tumhare khwaaboon mein hum theee na..???😉

M:haan..tu mere sapno mein toh tha...mera sapnoo ka villain...halkat kahin ka...😡😡

UV:wow...matlab hum tumhare khwaaboon mein bhi atee hai...😉

VV:oor bilkul galad waqt per entry mante hoon...😡

UV:aapko kaya hogaya...!!!

VV:kaya uday banna...hume M bhai se secret kehne aye thee..itnaa taklif karke isse neend se jagaya...or app hamare saree mehnaat pe paani phek diya..😭 ...not fair...😭

saying this he leaves the room...

UV:tumhe kisi ne bataya kaya ki jab tum wet hoti ho tab tum jiadaa hot lagti hoo..😉...

M:salee...teri toh mein abbhi band baja ti hoon..

UV:oh baby...tumhe yea karne ki koi jaruraat nehi hai...hamare saadi ka band baja ne ke liye bohot log hai..actually saadi ki din dulhan ko baand baja na shobha nehi deta😉

M:kaya..???.whatever..itnee subhe koi ataaa hai kaya...abhi saat {7 } baj rahe hai...😡

UV:but date...mmm..I mean bahar jane ka idea toh tumhara tha...

M:per intee subha kyun aagaye...

UV:kyun...?raat ko anna chahiyee tha sweetheart...😉

M:oh teri...kitnaa ghatiya sooch hai tera...aab tu aagaya toh chal...

plzzz comment...may b it was not so good...if u like it plzzz hit the LIKE button...plzzz don't hesitate 2 tell me if u don't like it...

LOVE U ALL

ADITI😊

Edited by ultravioletray - 13 years ago