ss-PKHTNIK, LAST CHAP (All parts ) UPDATED pg-153

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Riyu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#351

when u will update ur next part???????????????

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patakaguddi

@patakaguddi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#352

Originally posted by: Archi02
I'm awefuly sorry for not replaying you. What to do? So many dhamaka is happening with me! You know what, you should become a romantic scene director because you're a P.h.d in it. It was just too beautiful. Amezing, superb! I'm happy that nelaxi isn't uday's enemy. You're doing a faboulus job with your romantic secne. Update the next part soo and thanks for the pm...my filmy friend.

i m so sorry fr replying this late...thnxxx yaar thnxxx alot fr this beautiful coment of urs...i m glad tht u liked the story😛

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patakaguddi

@patakaguddi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#353

Originally posted by: smiley12
when u will update ur next part???????????????

hey hi dear,,,,,,,,,,😛

actually, even i really dont know whn i m gonna update next part 😕 as i m really very sad nd depreseed tht dek is ending😭 so i dont fell like typing nd updating more...😭😭😭

so as of now i still havnt typed a word fr next part...😭

dont know whn i will get over with this heartbreaking news😊...but dont worry i will pm u if i update the next apsrt ...ok

thnxxx newys fr ur lovely comment,,,sweetie...😊

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kojagoryfan

@kojagoryfan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#354

i,m soo sorry 4 the late reply.eye lock scene is long😳😆.lov her caring attitude .wow now manyta is jealous?awesome.loved it.precape seems interesting.n plz don't stop writing .after dat heartbreaking nws we need our manveer dose.

Edited by a.anu - 13 years ago

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-JEHAN-

@-JEHAN-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#355

awww...that was all...NOOO...i wanna read more RIGHT NOW!!😭

oh dear amazing SS loved it!!👏👏

read it in on go...and thank god i read it in one go or else i don't know i would have died with ur suspense...

omg when i was reading first 3 chapter i was like oh man what r u doing why u r not clearing things up!!😲

and then i read the 4 part and believe me i danced while lying down in my bed...

and 6 chap is beautiful the way u wrote their dance sequence and the song selection oh my my perfect!!!👏👏👏

loved it!!awesome story...

lovely...

so here u go accept my hug for writing this beautiful story on manveer..🤗

story of passionate lovers...

and i love VB too in ur SS...he is so funny and understanding too...

and ur SS is supereb fantastic awesome amazing out of the world sooo romantic...and i loved it!!!

the way u created suspense in first chapters that's amazing i was literary saying that oh god plz don't tell that M was with akash that night that would be horrible...🤢but thank god oh i should say thank u it was uday..phewww...

and FB was too gud!!and all jealousy part is beautifully written...even i was feeling jealous at times..lolll😆 😉

keep up the gud work...and plz update soon...and plz add me in ur PM list plz...

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patakaguddi

@patakaguddi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#356

Originally posted by: a.anu
i,m soo sorry 4 the late reply.eye lock scene is long😳😆.lov her caring attitude .wow now manyta is jealous?awesome.loved it.precape seems interesting.n plz don't stop writing .after dat heartbreaking nws we need our manveer dose.

hey hi...dear...

thnzzz alot for ur comment sweetheart...koi gal nahi agar late ho gaye toh...evn mai bhi bahut late reply kar rahi hu😆

yeah...will see to it...coz frankly speaking...i wanna write more atlast till she confesses her feelings to him as i have a beautiful storyline in my mind of their confession...but just thought of dek ending really pisses me off tht i dont like typing furyehr...newys,,,,will pm u if i write further...ok...thnxxx newys fr ur comment sweetie...

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patakaguddi

@patakaguddi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#357

Originally posted by: -JEHAN-
awww...that was all...NOOO...i wanna read more RIGHT NOW!!😭
oh dear amazing SS loved it!!👏👏
read it in on go...and thank god i read it in one go or else i don't know i would have died with ur suspense...
omg when i was reading first 3 chapter i was like oh man what r u doing why u r not clearing things up!!😲
and then i read the 4 part and believe me i danced while lying down in my bed...
and 6 chap is beautiful the way u wrote their dance sequence and the song selection oh my my perfect!!!👏👏👏
loved it!!awesome story...
lovely...
so here u go accept my hug for writing this beautiful story on manveer..🤗
story of passionate lovers...
and i love VB too in ur SS...he is so funny and understanding too...
and ur SS is supereb fantastic awesome amazing out of the world sooo romantic...and i loved it!!!
the way u created suspense in first chapters that's amazing i was literary saying that oh god plz don't tell that M was with akash that night that would be horrible...🤢but thank god oh i should say thank u it was uday..phewww...
and FB was too gud!!and all jealousy part is beautifully written...even i was feeling jealous at times..lolll😆 😉
keep up the gud work...and plz update soon...and plz add me in ur PM list plz...

oh hi jehan...😃🤗

thanku...thnaku...thanku...so much...i m really glad tht u loved this story nd have given such a sweet beautiful lovely awesum nd amazing comment... ,,,,thnxx yaar...thnxxx alot 👏

really happy tht u loved the suspense ...of first 3 chapters nd aftermath of it also😉😳

u know what ????,,,,i have pmed u yaar...regarding updation of 5th nd 6th part but not this part ...coz i remeber tht u have once commented on the promo tht i had updated...i think its after 4th part...u have commented...so once u commented i did send u pm after tht ...😛

newys...i m real;ly happy tht,,,today u read the story in one go nd u really liked it...😳

about the next update... i m nt sure yaar,,,,whn i m gonna update next ...coz ..i m really very sad nd pissed of tht dek is ending...but i will try to update soon if possible...as rite now i havnt typed a single word of nezt update...

but will try to write ...😛

nd thnxxx once again fr ur comment sweetie...😛

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roshni101

@roshni101

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Posted: 13 years ago

#358

whn will u update the nxt part?

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livvy_11

@livvy_11

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Posted: 13 years ago

#359

I just luved it can u pleez pm 4 da nxt part

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patakaguddi

@patakaguddi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#360

Originally posted by: roshni101
whn will u update the nxt part?

hey hi ...miss roshni...😛

about the next update... i m nt sure yaar,,,,whn i m gonna update next .. really very sad nd pissed of tht dek is ending...but i will try to update soon if possible...

rite now i havnt typed a single word of nezt update...

but will try to write ...😛