The Player Manveer SS part7 updated pg 22

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@-The_Tomboy-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#71

wow that was incredible dear loved it!!!!!!!!!!!

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princess_T

@princess_T

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Posted: 13 years ago

#72

That was amazing Cham...!!! No words to say really...!! But hope Uday does not do something silly... But ur great yaaar seriously... Just love you for writting Checkmate and The player... Reallly very well written

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fia21

@fia21

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Posted: 13 years ago

#73

Omg omg this was freaking brilliant. And the precap was WOW!!
Eeep. I am dying to know what happened between them in the past that he hates her so much. You are one heck of an amazing writer honestly. Love both your stories. They are so different, interesting and full of suspense. Please please update the next part soon. Thanks for the PM!

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Zainab

@--Zenu--

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#74

Wow Cham great update...nandu bhai ..:D haha loved this update 2 d core...thnks 4 d pm!! N update as soon as possible:)😃

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Anny

@SyedAinah

Inactive

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Posted: 13 years ago

#75

As usual fantastic update,all praising words r nthng in front of u, seriously cvs of dek shld need inspiration from u, i m soo much addicted to ur both stories ,dey r jus like a drug whom i m addicted,:):):):):):)...i like jay and manyata's sisterly bond in story ,d whole coversation between jay and mayata was awesome,awww monu and nandu dat was soo cute...hm excited for party, so plzzz update fast ,wat abt ur todayz update of checkmatte

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@wendy25

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#76

Cham, update now now , now

you left me dying over the suspense now like cvs,

I can't wait. It was totally fun, hilarious. I knew you excel in writing, tragic and romantic story but you are so good at comic too. you are Amazing writer. I love J and VB so much in your SS. Please cham make manyata a bit funny and mischievous too like one in show, she is too much serious and reserved in your both SS's. Bring a slight change in her but yes of course she should be sensible too. Loved it so much and now you will kill me by keep waiting for next update.

ps: update you SS:checkmate soon, soon. I hope you'll update that one today

can't wait

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Sakura24

@Sakura24

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#77

Originally posted by: wendy25
Cham, update now now , now
you left me dying over the suspense now like cvs,
I can't wait. It was totally fun, hilarious. I knew you excel in writing, tragic and romantic story but you are so good at comic too. you are Amazing writer. I love J and VB so much in your SS. Please cham make manyata a bit funny and mischievous too like one in show, she is too much serious and reserved in your both SS's. Bring a slight change in her but yes of course she should be sensible too. Loved it so much and now you will kill me by keep waiting for next update.

ps: update you SS:checkmate soon, soon. I hope you'll update that one today
can't wait

U'll see her fun side in this SS I can promise that but it'll be the past flashbacks of UV and Monya both were mischievous then,
but the current track will be more serious between the two because it is the gist of the story
Thanks for reading😃

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Sakura24

@Sakura24

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: fia21
Omg omg this was freaking brilliant. And the precap was WOW!!
Eeep. I am dying to know what happened between them in the past that he hates her so much. You are one heck of an amazing writer honestly. Love both your stories. They are so different, interesting and full of suspense. Please please update the next part soon. Thanks for the PM!

Their past is the whole story called the player
you'll know everything soon
as this isn't going to be a long SS like the checkmate
Thanks for reading😃

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Sakura24

@Sakura24

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#79

Originally posted by: ashukapoor007
Wow Cham great update...nandu bhai ..:D haha loved this update 2 d core...thnks 4 d pm!! N update as soon as possible:)😃

I wanted to call her something other than Jay that's why😆
Then I thought Nandu was sweet😊
Thanks for reading😃