Confessing to The Night: LAST PART completed- pg 23 (manveer finally!) - Page 5

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Inkpen4877

This was beautiful, gut wrenching and practically flawless, There are no words for how much I loved this!


And I too cant find words to thank you! :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Grenade

uh I would like to confess, it took me a real lot of efforts to produce this. Not to mention the tiny compromises i had to make with my study time. And it matters because my parents expect a lot from me and I too wanna do my best this year given its my boards.
I dont understand why I'm blabbering these irrelevant things. Guess thats what happens on imagining manveer whole night!
Anyway, what i really wanna know is that: did my efforts pay? Did u like it? Really expecting your feedback. Critisism (constructive) is most welcomed.
p.s. Can you kindly point out if there are any spelling/other mistakes? I didnt get to proofread it. :(


Yes your efforts did pay...ur a gr8 writer and really talented as well as big Manveer fan..!!!!⭐️ So u r giving ur boards this time...dis yr i too gave my boards and I hve got my results tooo..!!!!😊😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: Gowri05

U call that a os !!! it was a live scene!!! wat the hell was that!!it was just vry good !! friggin good!! u are a very gifted writer!!


God, I didnt see that coming.! Live scence? I really dunno how to thank you..my writing has never been appreciated so much! :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: AKlover-16



<font color="#3399FF">Yes your efforts did pay...ur a gr8 writer and really talented as well as big Manveer fan..!!!!⭐️So u r giving ur boards this time...dis yr i too gave my boards and I hve got my results tooo..!!!!😊😃</font>


I'm currently in twelfth, will give boards next year..By the sound of it i guess your results are good! Congo! :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice on grenade.just loved it .n thanks for the pm.cont soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#46
It was utterly fabulous. You are amazing writer!! Awesome!

Pls add me in on list
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Posted: 13 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: Shals9

It was utterly fabulous. You are amazing writer!! Awesome!

Pls add me in on list


Thank you so much! :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#48
really wonderful part..loved reading it!
manyata's emotions were described beautifully..
hope she tries to win back uday now!
do continue..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow amazing chapter 👏
I love the way you describe a character's feelings. It's so beautifully written.
Hoping to read some ManVeer scenes in the next chapter 😊
Update soon. Would be eagerly waiting!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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that was awesome...loved the way u wrote her feeling...i got goosebumps...
omg it was amazing...dear countinue soon and plz add me in ur PM list plzz...and espeacilly for chap 2..really i wanna see this in serial too...loved it...i hope i will soon see this scene in serial as well...

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