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Never letting go



Index
Chapter 1 - page 1
Chapter 2 - page 2
Chapter 3 - page 3
Chapter 4 - page 4
Chapter 5 - page 5
Ch6- page 7


Hi guys I hope you like this. It's my First ff.

Chapter 1

It had been four months since rajkumari manyata had returned to her rightful position in the devgarh palace to her family. Four months it had been but the princess had learnt what she should have in the last 16 years within this short span of time.

She had not only transformed into a very intelligent princess with the occasional outburst within the presence of jay,unatti,vijay,uday of her old self but also a dark-haired beauty. Her eyes were the colour of chocolate with a ring of amber. Black hair swayed ever so slightly with her elegant motion of movement reaching the centre of her back. Her skin fair and flawless with cute dimples. When her face shone with a smile it not lit her but the entire room and whoever was present could not help but smile back.

It was after dinner and manyata was sat in the parlour with family having coffee. Her mind wandered over everything that had happened over the past few months. How everything had changed. How she had come to see akash's true colours. She flaskbacked to that memory where he rang her earlier that day to meet her near the lake which was pretty much always deserted.

It was 3pm and she had managed to sneak out without anyone following her or so she thought. She was unaware that Jay was nearby hoping to stir some trouble when they got back to the palace.
Akash finally arrived five minutes later.

"Akash what's the matter when you rang me you sounded very troubled. Is everything ok?"

"Don't worry monia everything will be ok once you hear me out."

"Ok what's on your mind?"

"Monia, I want you to run away with."

"Are you insane akash. I don't want to run away. Why would I do that when I finally started to receive the love of my mother, my father and the rest of my family."

"And by the rest of family do you mean uday too?"

"Whether you like it or not, yes uday too. Because we still have the same tie that we had since we were young children. I saw pictures but I also remembered the memories that I thought were lost."

"So does that mean you don't love me anymore?"

"Of course I love you but I love everyone else too."

"You can't do this to me Monia. I'm not going to let you be anyones but mine. Do you understand?"

He grabbed her shoulders and shook her so hard that she knew that she would have bruises by tomorrow. He pushed her back. She fell back hitting her head on a tree and felt blood trickling down her the back of her head.Suddenly, akash had pulled out a army knife.

"Nobody's but mine do you get that?"

And with that he was about to stab her in the chest when all of a sudden a shout came.

"Jiji!" Jay's scared voiced interrupted akash's thought and his action was slightly slower than it should have been. Manyata turned to her left and saw jay approaching. The blade hit her skin and she had a deep cut running across her upper arm. She winced but quickly tried to control her pain as she remembered her sister was her here too. She took a long breath and said,
"Jay he's got a knife go back."

Either jay was ignoring her or she want to get killed. At least this was what manyata thought. Akash was surprised by jay's presence and just stood there rooted to the ground a second to long. Jay kicked him in the stomach and he landed on the floor in pain but only for a second before he got up again. Manyata by now was almost unconscious but saw fighting Akash and him repeatedly landing on the ground that was when she remembered seeing all those trophies in her room for tae-kwondo. Her baby sister kicked some serious butt and she was so happy she was dressed in skinny trousers and not in her designer dresses or she would be able to make any of these moves .

Manyata saw somebody run towards jay but here vision was so blurry by this time she was unable to see who he was. He came and punched akash in the face a few times and akash collapsed to the ground with a loud thud. Several men came running now with rifles, dressed like the guards outside the palace and dragged akash with them.
The man came to manyata as did jay.

"Uday, Jiji bleeding from her head & arm and she's unconscious. We've got to get her back home and get doctor uncle to check her over. Lets hurry please." Jay's voice started to break.

"Is jay crying for me?" manyata thought.

Uday scooped manyata up into arm, looked at her for a second, kissed her forehead and said, "I'm not going to let anything happen to you, princess. Look even jay's worried." The last part he said with a small smirk.

Whilst briskly walking toward the car uday was talking to jay whilst holding manyata and walking.

"Jay, thank you for calling me but it did look like you had everything under control down there."

"You know this is the first time I found it useful that I am a black belt in tae-kwondo. And I know this is going to sound really weird coming from but I were so scared that I were going to lose my recently found Jiji. I never wanted her to come back because I wanted to be the yuvrani of devgarh but fear of dying ... ." Jay didn't know what say instead a tear ran down her face.

"Jay, stop crying. I'm glad princess is ok and the only reason she is ok is because you saved. I don't know what I would do without her. But why exactly were you here?"

"Well i wanted to find out something about jiji that I could use to get her into trouble." She said with a cheeky grin. "Forget that. Do you remember when you broke our roka for Jiji. I were so mad. But now I think about it you are Jiji's other half. Two sides of a coin. And nobody including me has the right to change that. I guessing your going to be my jijou soon,right?"

"I hope so my future sali. You know I have never heard you talk so maturely jay and right now I actually respect you for what you have done and what you are saying."

By now they had approached the car. Manyata was sat at the back between jay and uday. Uday tell the driver to drive quickly to devgarh palace.

"Jay?"

"Yes uday."

"I know you hate everybody giving manyata attention but you are aware that they all love you and by that I mean manyata to."

"I know that. When I was walking toward Jiji I saw that she wasn't worried for herself she was worried for me. And that's when I truly realized that she loves me too." at this jay ways smiling.

The gates of the palace were opened and they parked quickly.

Please give constructive criticism
And don't worry about my feelings
😊 please tell if I should continue 😛

P.S. I know there aren't any man veer moment but if I continue there will be
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Very nice. Pls do continue. It is different from the show's story line. 👍🏼
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Never letting go

Chapter 2

The gates of the palace were opened and they parked quickly.

Uday gently picked up manyata and carried her to her room and jay tried to find doctor uncle. She found him discussing some issue with rajmata in the study.

"Doctor uncle manyata jiji is hurt please come quickly."

"Jaynandini, how did she get hurt?" DS asked her.

"DS, i will explain what happened to you but manyata jiji needs to be given medical attention first. Uday has taken her to her room.please hurry"

DS called on of the servants and told them to inform maharani komal, maharaj brijraj, menaka and vijay, mahraj giriraj, mahrani anjali(uday's mother) and unatti. After giving that order they started to move make their way towards manyata's room.

As they entered they saw a unconcious, fragile looking girl lying on the bed with uday moving her hair back and with his other hand he her hand.

"Uday beta please move back do I can examine manyata."

Uday slowly moved outside the room towardswhere DS and jay were stood. A tear fell down his cheek; DS saw this and said,"uday beta, she is going to fine. Just believe in god."

She gently squeezed his shoulder and he nodded.

"This isn't like me I haven't cried since I hit manyata with the sword when we were young children. What's wrong with me?"

"What happened to my daughter?" Komal asked worriedly.

"Who this to my daughter?" Brijraj voice boomed with anger.

"Everyone calm done. We will discuss this matter one we know what manyata's health is like."

Doctor saab finished examining manyata and came out.

"Doctor Saab, how is manyata?" Rajmata questioned.

"Rajmata, the cut on the head wasn't very deep so we can rule out any head injuries. However she had a very deep laceration to he upper left arm and a lot of bruising. And whatever event occurred it has troubled her so I gave her some sedatives so she would sleep." He explained.

Rajmata turned jay and uday.

"I think it's time both of you explained what happened."

"DS with your permission may I stay with manyata for a while please," uday asked.

DS was about to refuse when jay said "DS I shall start to explain to you what happened. You should let uday stay with manyata."

"Of course uday may stay with manyata for a while and everybody else should come to my study immediately."

With that they all followed Rajmata's orders.

Uday entered manyata's room and sat next to manyata. he kissed her hand gently and spoke to her.

" Princess I don't know what you feel for me but i feel something strong and powerful for you and I can't see you like this because it feels like someone is pulling out my heart and pricking it with pins. Please don't do anything like this again. Just the thought of you going away from me hurts so much. I will do everything in my power never to let you go. I guess this is what it feels like to be in love." He kissed her forehead and then her hands.

After a few minutes a nurse came in told him she needed to change manyata's dressing & IV drip and he was being called to Rajmata's study.

Whilst he was coming down the stairs he saw his mother, father and sister enter the house with worried expression. They asked them if manyata was fine and he replied she's fine and told them everyone was in the study. They all walked into the study.

Once uday had entered the room everybody settled down in their respective seats, Rajmata asked jay to tell her what happened. She told them everything from the beginning to the end (except for the conversation between uday and her).

"How dare he have the courage not only touch my daughter but to hurt. Doctor saab was saying there were bruises on arms I'm guessing he gave them to her. I am going to turn him into pulp when I get my hands on him? I'm going to go get my rifle. Where is he uday?"

"Calm down, Brijraj. You will do nothing of this sort."

"But masaheb-"

"I have said what I needed to say." she turns to uday asks him "Where is this man, uday beta."

"DS, he is the custody of my men and uncle brij don't worry they are doing exactly what you are saying. I got to give him a few punches too. Once they are done with him he will go into police custody until trial. and the punishment for those trying to murder royals is the death penalty."

"well done uday beta that is exactly what I would have done but I would like you to put him in police custody now so that you can't be blamed for anything other saving manyata."

"Of course DS," uday replied.

That evening uday got permission from DS to stay with manyata. Uday sat besides manyata on the recliner sofa and dozed off after 1 in the morning.
Manyata woke up thirsty an hour later. She tried to reach for the jug of water on her bedside table instead the glass fell and broke. Uday woke up when he heard the glass shatter into pieces. He startled manyata since she did not realise that he was the one who was sleeping in the recliner.

"Princess, are you ok? What do you need?

"Water." She croaked.

He got the second glass, fill it with water, gently made her sit up and made her drink the water. She began to choke on the water . He placed the glass down and tapped her on her back to stop her from choking. Once she stopped choking she looked at him and said,

"I was so scared today. I was all alone. He hurt me and he succeeded. If he can how do I know no-one else will try to hurt me again."

A tear rolled down her cheek and he wiped it away. He hugged her and surprisingly she hugged him back. He kissed her head and said,

"Because I won't let them. I promise. Seeing you in the state you were in scared me more than I ever have been and I don't want to lose you."

"Why do I mean so much to you, udayveer?" This question shocked him and so did his answer.

"Because I think I'm falling in love with you, manyata."

This is it for now.
It's after one here and I need to get sleep
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Thank you for reading 😊
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Edited by jav101 - 13 years ago
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Loved the update!!! Do continue soon n thanks sooo much for the pm!!:)

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