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Uday: much better'. Dance with me.

Manyata: WHAT? she kept her voice down realising she is still in the party'.. dance and that with u' r u crazy

Uday: oh come on princess if I don't have any effect on you then y do u have a problem dancing with me..

Manyata:Yuvraj udayveer singh I have no problem dancing with you its just that I didn't expect you to say this.

Uday: y did u think of something else'.. were it is only us two' well I don't think that's a bad idea he said coming close' manyata put her hand on his chest to stop him.

Manyata: chiii uday'u and ur weird thoughts.

Uday: we will see about that... so now princess shall we go to the dance floor

Manyata: sure'. Because I want to finish this prove it to me game ASAP

Uday forwarded his hand and manyata slid her hands into his'. Both walked towards the dance floor' their family member stopped talking and looked at them'..(sorry not good at these dancing scenes but will try my best)'.. once reaching to the dance floor uday pulled manyata close to him... he slid his one hands around her waist making her slightly shiver and held her other hand'. While manyata put one of her hand on his shoulder and collapsed her other free hand to his' both looked into each other eyes and started their moves'.. slowly the music was sinking in their heads along with their dance burning the dance floor... even though uday twirled and twisted manyata around few times their eyes contact didn't break they were so lost into staring at each other that they didn't notice everyone was now watching them dance'.. manyata and uday completed forgot about their prove it to me and were lost in each other'. All manyata can feel is uday pulling her closer to him and on the other hand uday could feel her heartbeat close to his'.. both came back to reality when everyone clapped' manyata looked around and saw everyone clapping for them.

Manyata in her mind: what the hell happened'. how didn't I realise anything'. I was so lost that I even forgot about what I said to uday... she looked at uday and saw him giving her a victorious look with a smirk' but there was also something else'. And that creped her out... she turned her gaze away from him and located it on to someone else'. Her eyes twinkled forgetting about the awkwardness she ran and hugged that person'

Manyata: OMG sia jiji when did u come' and u were meant to be having ur vacation right now...

Sia: how can I not come when I know that my sister is back I missed u so much and congracts for passing ur exams '.

Manyata: I missed u too jiji and thank you so much did u meet unnati as she passed too'.

Sia: yes dear I did she was the first one to locate me and told me about u two passing'.manyata smiled and both hugged again'.. breaking the hug manyata went and hugged her jiju sa who was standing next to sia.

Manyata: so jiju sa how was ur vacation'.

Daksh: it was fine manyata and congrats for passing ur medical exams'. So u finally become a doctor.

Manyata: thank u jiju sa' and yes finally I do.

Daksh: great so please do me a favour cure ur sia jiji for me.. sia gave him a angry look while manyata was puzzled.

Manyata: what do u mean.

Daksh: what I mean is that ur sister has got this illness about caring for others on her vacation but doesn't even look at her poor husband at all'manyata laughed whiled sia glared at him even more.

Manyata: sure jiju sa first let a hospital accept me and then you bring jiji there she said laughing.

Sia: oh so now you joined ur jiju team dont worry if you got ur jiju then I have got my sweet uday' right uday?'. Manyata looked towards where sia was looking and found uday right next to her' he was still giving her that creeping look'.

Manyata: god I would rather prefer the smirk on his face because this crepy look in his eyes is actually scaring me'.. manyata came out of thoughts when sia shook her.

Sia: oh madam where were u lost.

Manayat: nothing jiji so when r u going to stay here till' she said completely ignoring udays gaze on her.

Sia: y don't u ask ur jiju she said walking away'.

Daksh: Sali saiba I will let u know later for now let me go and convince ur sister who is still angry on me' before manyata could reply he had gone' she then realized uday was still there and made a quick exit however where ever she went she could either feels udays gaze on her or his presence near her.soon DS called her and called her to meet some people.

Manyata: jee DS

DS: beta this is'.. and she started to introduce different people to her, manyata was getting bored now. Once manyata was alone with DS

Manyata: DS can I go now. Ds thought she was talking about going home.

DS: beta y go home early ur habit'.. she was not able to complete her sentence as manyata interrupted her.

Manyata: no DS I mean that if this introduction has finished can I go and talk to other people' DS was first surprised as manyata didn't leave the party yet but she smiled somehow and nodded. Infect most of the family members were shocked to see manyata still being at the party

Komal and vasundra went up to her to check if she is ok.

Komal: manyata beta r u feeling k.

Manyata: haan ma y what happened.

komal: beta everyone is surprised to see u still at the party so we just wanted to make sure u r ok.

Manyata: my lovely ma I am absolutely fine its just that I need to win as I challenged j and vijay bhai that I will stay at the party till it end and especially that uday.

Seema: beta u know when u were young uday use to stay with u and unnati all the time but mostly it was u'. and now its just the different as uday seems to annoy u so much that u r running away from him.

Manyata: seriously vasundra aunty uday seems to be so different now like it seems like its his hobby to annoy me. She said slightly smiling.

Uday: so cuties wt up he said coming between komal and vasundra and then looked at manyata.

Manyata: seriously uday at least spare ma and vasundra aunty.

Uday: y r u jealous that I am giving both of them my attention and not you. Manyata could feel her cheeks burning when he was scanning her from top to the bottom and tried to ignore it.

Manyata: please uday me and jealous' keep dreaming. The two mothers laughed seeing their kids arguing and left them alone'

Uday: so now since my lovely cuties have gone u have got all my attention princess. He said in a mischievous tone.

Manyata: whatever go and find someone else. She was about to walk away when uday held her hand.

Uday: I have princess I have already found someone. Manyata stood their somehow she didn't like it when he said that and turned around slowly to see uday looking into her eyes deeply' but the moment had to get destroyed by j, Vijay and unnati.

Vijay: m bhai u r still here'' oh god j seriously we r gone lose the bet m bhai has not gone yet which means that she is going to stay here till the party ends.

Manyata: aww so sorry vijay bhai but u know that I don't let anyone win easily

J: jiji just forget about this bet thing DS has been calling u she wants you to meet someone.

Manyata: but I just met DS few minutes ago.

J well she just told me to bring u' uday she wants u to come to'. And they all left to meet ds.

Precap: manyata reminded about her engagement with uday' what will be her and udays reaction to this.

Hey guys posted part 10. Wow im shocked this time there is more like for part 9 and also more comments im glad u all liked it and hope u guys like this part too, don't forget to press the like button and do leave a comment as it really motivated me love u guys tc xxx

Edited by preya_radev - 12 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved the update n dun worry bout the dance sequence!! It was really nice, in fact it was very beautifully written!! Plzzz do continue soon n thanks for the pm!:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice one dear...can't wait for next part...please update soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
dialogues were amazing.
update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice one.cont soon n thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing...!! Im sure Uday will be happy and Manyata will be shocked...!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Fabulous update. Thanks for the pm. Pls do continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved it...awsomee...thanks for the pm...and continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
love the update thanks for pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
Cute n short update...don't tell me that ur dance moves were bad ! They were so good I jus loved d manveer moments ...thnx 4 d pm.. awaited 2 see the m n uv reaction abt their enagement😲

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