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cont soon pliz.egarly waiting 4 the next update.
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thanx alot al of u.
I m realy glad 4 u al lyk my stry...
Ya,nxt part main mrng tk update krdungi.i promise...

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Love feeling-give new birth
Part-V


Uday:jagat,tum tb tk usi ofice me kam kroge,or mr.sexsena k 7th deal sign krke hi wapas aaoge...
Jagat:ok,bt mujhe kal ki half day ka holiday chahiye..
Uday:phle,aaj ka din to nikalo..phr kal ki sochna..cal cut..

Ye jagat bi na suddn wo bahar dekhta hai,manyata apne desk pe kam kr ri hai..
Uday continues manyata ko dekh rha h...
Manyata cum uday's cabin bt uday bahr dekh rha hai..
Manyata:ye na ab bulaugi,to gusa krge..uff..sir,may i cumin-2
Manyata vry lound shouting-may i cuming sir
Uday break d cncentration-yes cuming,ye ofice h,tumhara ghr ni...

M:sry,sir pr maine aram se bi bola,pr aapko tej sune ki aadat hai.
U:wht d,wel,kya kam hai?
M:sir,USA me koi mr.frankin h,unhe aapke 7th kam krna h,means ek big deal krna hai.. To unhone aapka rply maanga hai.
U:wht,r u serious?mr.frankin mere 7th,its my dream project...uday is out of cntrl happy..
Manyata also happy,
U:tumhein pta h main isi liye USA gya tha,or aaj main mera dream pura ho gya..wow,nd uday exictment me manyata ko tigtly hug krleta hai,he s said'i m vry happy'
Manyata surprised ki ye whi rude uday sir h..bt ek trf wo uncnfortble feel kr ri hai..

Uday hugs d manyata tightly n kept
rubbing on her back n d uday feels
d manyata's soft breast touch in my chest..he s totaly lost...
Manyata nt hug uday bt she s lost in uday arms...both eyes close with cute shy smile...
Bt sudden manyata realize wht,ye kya ho rha hai?nd wo uday ko push krti h,wo bhut dari h,sir..
Uday relize wo chup h,manyata ki trf dekhta hai,manyata dari h,ghabrai hai..uday khta h ye keise ho gya,tum jao,tum bahr jao...
Manyata chali jati hai...

Other side..
Komal:manyata ab khush h,uski aankho me wo drd ni dikhta..jo dikhta tha..
Br:g maine dekha,job krne ka decision uska shi tha..ab kam se apne past ko to bhul jayegi...
Jay ye baatein sunti hai,nd sudden she s say kaun sa past papa..manyata di ka kaun sa past hai..
Komal:kuch ni beta wo,bs aise hi..
Jay:maa,maine apki or papa ki saari baatein sun li h plz btaiye..kya bat h jo mujhe ni pta...

Br:beta,aap rohan ko jante ho..manyata ne to btaya hoga..
J:rohan,ha manyata di ka frnd tha wo..main jb ahmdabad me study kr ri thi,tb btaya tha..to kya hua.?

Komal:ah,wo manyata k liye dost se jyada tha beta...
Or wo bi manyata se pyar krta tha,pr dhokha dene k liye..
Br:aacha pagal bnaya usne hm sbko or manyata ko bi...

Manyata se mariage ka wada kiya,hm sb se bat ki,hmara trust jeeta,or chutki me dhokha de diya..
Jay:dhoka,mtlb di k 7th kuch glt..
Dadi cum,chup jay hmesha tumhare dimag me ulti baatein kyn aati hai..
Manyata rohan se bhut pyar krti thi,or mariage ki bat bi chl ri thi...
Lekin rohan ne manyata se kha ki 'mujhe abi mariage ni krni'mujhe apna busines shuru krna,phle kuch bnna chahta hu..or busines strt krne k liye paise chahiye...
Manyata k khne pr hm sb ne uski problem smjhi,or tere papa ne 5lakh rs.use de diya...
Or uske agle din se na rohan ka pta h,na uski nisaani...usne to apna ghr bi rent pe liya tha...usi ghr me rhne walo ne 1 letter diya manyata ko jisme likha Tha'hi manyata,
I m sry main ja rha hu,mujhe tumme,tumhari family me koi interst ni tha,jisme interst tha,wo chiz mere pas hai'mariage ki date bi aagai thi,tumhari family ki insult hogi,log baatein bnayege,to meri maano,to ye sehr chod dena..
I hope ab tum apni zindgi naye sire se shuru krogi!!bst of luck Bye swtheart...

Dadi:bs jay beta,ye uska past,wo tuit chuki thi,brijraj puri trh karz me duba hai,or udhr log trh trh k swal ki ldke ne shadi kyn ni ki,aisa kya pta chl gya use?jitne muh utne swal..tb hm preshan hoke city change ki..
J:lekin glti to us rohan ki thi..
Komal:ldka keisa bi ho,chahe kuch bi kre glti hr trf se ldki ki btai jati hai..ye duniya aisi hi h or aisi hi rhegi...

In confrnce hall..
Uday nd all ofice member in hall..
U:mr.frakin,USA k grt businesman,wo hmese deal krne nxt weak aayenge..or mujhe unke welcum me koi kami ni chahiye...
Mujhe ye deal kisi bi hal me chahiye..
Mr.frakin k welcum k liye ek party di jayegi..
Or uska arrangment ms.manyata aap dekhegi...smjhi aap...
M:yes sir..
U:ok,now all of u go..
Sb chale jate hai..
M:mujhe ghr jaldi jana hai..wrna kal late ho gai thi main,sir se puch leti hu..weise bi vamp.ka mood aaj thik h..ha bol hi dega..ha ni to..

M nock d uday cabin
Uday:yes,cuming..
Sudden,jagat ka cal aata hai,
J:uday,yar ye mr.sexsena ka project mujhse hndle ni ho rha,tumhare bina.
U:angry mood,wht d hell?tumse 1 project,ok.tum whi rhke unko after 1weak k bad meeting fix kro mere 7th.cal cut.
M(apne aap se):ye insan se vamp.k role me aagya h.
U:ab bolo,bhoot kyn bni ho,o shit maine dad ko ye gud news keise ni di...
Uday apne dad ko cal krne wala hota hi h ki
M:sir,mujhe jaldi ghr jana h main jau..
Uday kyn?koi problem?
M:9 sir,bs jaldi jana hai..
U:ok...bt aage se ofice k tym pe hi jana.
M:ok,sir..sir ek bat apki zindgi ki itni bdi khushi h,aap apne papa ko cal krke ye gud news denge,to acha hai,bt face 2 face ye news denge to,aapko bi unki smile dekhne ko milegi or aapki khushi double ho jayegi...
Uday realiaz yes she s ryt..ye to maine socha hi ni..
M:sir dimag,
U:kya?
M:kuch ni sir.takecare..manyata chali jati hai.
Nd uday manyata ko dekhta rhta hai.
U:yes,main bi ghr ja rha hu,sbko face 2 face news dunga...

Precap:manyata ki phli meeting unanti k 7th,wo bi uday k ghr pe...


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Posted: 13 years ago
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loving ur ss...it's sooo cute...giri and M meeting omg...lol... 🤣.loved it...so unnati and M are going to become frnds...hmmm... 😛.soo looking fwd to it...plz update as soon as possible 😍
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Part-VI
Vijay,manyata nd j:
J:di,tumne mujhe rohan k baare me kyn ni btaya?
M shocked:tumhein kisne btaya?
J:kisi ne bi btaya ho,lekin aapne ne to,kya aapne dubara dudhne ki koshish ni ki..
V:kya j,manyata itni bewkuf ni h,ki dubara dhokha khane k liye use dhunde..
M:tum dono chup kro...wo sb mera past tha,main use future me ni lana chahti..main us insan ki izzat ni krti jo meri or meri family ki respect ni krta..
J:or agr future me tumhare saamne aa gya to..
M:tb main use yhi khugi,tu mere layak tha hi ni..
Ab tum dono jao,in sb baato ko yhi khtm kro,mujhe chid hoti h us aadmi ko yad krke.
J nd vijay chale jate h..manyata close d door nd cryng..
Uday's home
U:dad,where r u?dad
Gr:ha beta,kya hua,aap bhut khush lg rhe h.
U:dad,USA se mr.frakin ka letter aaya h,wo hmare 7th deal krne nxt weak aarhe h.
Gr:thats grt,u r dream project..
U:yes dad,i m vry hapy,mrng me ye news sunke to bs.
Gr:mrng me,lekin tum mujhe rat ko bta rhe ho..
U:dad,wo mujhe lga aapse milke btauga to jyada khushi hogi..
Unati cum:aap ne socha,jhuth..aap to hmesha apni khushi cal k thru share krte ho..
Shanti:unanti shi kh ri hai..kisi ne
U:of oh,aap 3no bi na,arey meri secrtary ne advice diya..thats it.
Unanti:sctary ne,wow,dada,aap tbi hmesha smile krte huye ghr aate ho.
U:unanti.
Un:of oh,gussa kyn hote ho,dada hm aapke liye,bhut khush h.congrats..dada aapki tbiyat to thik h,aapko fever h..
U:no,i m fyn.bs thoda tired hu..S:hto,main dekhu,she s touch d uday 4head nd ask'shaheb baba ko fever h,baba kam pe itna bi dhyan mt do ki tbiyet thik na rhe'
U:ni aunty sb kuch thik hai..bs
Gr:kya thik h,bs ab aap kal ofice ni jayenge...
U:pr,dad
Gr:pr wr kuch ni..ofice ka koi bi kam wo ghr se hi krwana..health phle imp.h.
U:ok dad..fyn..
Nxt mrng..
Unanti:dada,wake up..aapki tbiyet keisi h?
U:fyn..
Un:dada,aaj to aap ghr pe ho,chalo games khelege..u feel gud..
U:mujhe bhut kam h,ek kam kro wo file utha k do..
Un:of,oh dada..kam-3 ye lo file,file me manyata ki pic niche girti h..unanti wo pic uthati h,dada file..
Uday pick d file,
U:dada,ye ldki kaun h?
Uday kya ldki?
Un:let me guess,she s ur sectary..
U:yes,wo glti se ye pic is file me aa gai..
Un:dada she s vry pretty nd adorable..
U:tum jao,main kal use ye pic dedunga..jao tum.
Unanti:kya,dada,boaring ho aap...ok by..
Manyata in ofice:
M:maneger g,kal mehta company k 7th meeting h sir ki mujhe us company se related files chahiye,taki main sir k sign le lu...
M:mam,files sir k ofice me h,lekin sir aaj ofice ni ayege..
Manyata:kya,phr files pe sign..weise bi hr ek-2 file read krke sign krte h..
Kya kru?ni kuch kiya tb chilayege,chilane ka to mauqa chahiye.ha ni to.phone krti hu..
Manyata caling uday ,bt uday nt pick d cal...then she s calng uday'home
GR pick d cal.
Gr:hello,
M:hello sir,main uday sir ki scartary bol ri hu kya main unse bat kr skti hu..
Gr:boliye beta,hm unke father bol rhe h,wo aaj ofice ni ayenge.becoz he s nt well 2day..
M:actualy uncle mujhe kuch imp.files pe unke sign lene h..
Gr:ok,beta to aap yha ghr pe aajaiye..or sign krwalijiye..
M:ghr,main ni janti kha h?
Gr:main driver ko bhej rha hu,wo aapko pic krlega.
M:ok sir,cal cut..chalo ye kam to ho gya.
Uday apne rum me kam kr rha h,nd suddn uski njr manyata ki snap pe jati h.or wo use bde pyar se dekhta h..or phr se us snap ko drawl me rkh deta h.or wo manyata ko jo hug kiya tha,wo yad krta h.
U:wo feeling hi kuch ajeeb thi..mujhe mere man me ek shanti si mili.
Manyata nter d uday's home..
Gr:welcum beta..
M:nmeste uncle,keise h aap?
Gr:fyn,beta..
Unanti dad ye kaun?wait a sec.dada ki sectary i m ryt ya wrong.
ryt..manyata nam h mera..
Ok..chalo fyn tum aa gai,mera tym to ktega..wrna mere dada to boring hai.tbiyet thik ni h,lekin kam krna h.
M:main bi kam se hi aai hu,lekin kam hone k bad me khleungi..
U:dada ka rum wo h..
Gr:bye,beta,hm khin bahr ja rhe h.
M:g uncle.
Manyata nock d uday's rum
Bt koi bol ni rha h.
To manyata ander aa jati h,sir,aap kha h?mujhe file.
Bathrum se awaz aati h,jo h,wait kre.
Manyata uday k wall pohots dekhti h.
M:sir,to bhut nughty type the,kitne cute lgte h hste huye.
uday bathrum se bahr aata h
Kya h unanti always preshan..he s shocked!
Mnyta turn d face she s also shock..
Uday ki half body nude h,only trouser phna h..
Manyata again turn d face,sir aap aise-keise bahr aa gye..
U:wo guse se manyata ki trf aata h,
Ye mera rum h.Or mujhse puch ri ho,aise-keise..tum bina puche mere ghr me aai keise.

uday is behind to manyata...bt
manyata felt that he was vry
far to hr...In anger she turns
bck nd says sir i called...bt
whn she turn bck there is no
gap betwn both of them.as
she turn bck they both get
imbalance nd fallls on each
othr,uday falls on bed nd
manyata on uday...hr hands on
uday's chest nd hr ful hair s
on uday s face..as his face has
covered wid hr hair so he
adjustng her hair wid one hand
nd othr hand is on hr
hip..manyata breath gets
vry fast..nd she worried..uday
saw hr..she tryng to get up bt
agains she falls..uday saws her
continously..manyata hand again-2 slip on his chest.
Sudden uday realize,ruko,hlp krta hu..dro mt,aram se.Then .Uday jaldi se apni t-shrt phnta h.
M:sir wo,main file
U:tum mujhe bta k ni aa skti thi,cal to kr skti thi na. ulte kam kyn krti ho.mind h ki ni h..ye kya file utha k lai ho,kl bi to ye kam ho skta tha na.
She s cryng,wo
Rote-2 chali jati
h.
U:mnyata tum aa gai,chlo game..kya hua?ro kyn ri ho?
M:kuch ni unati main chalti hu,kbi or khlege by.
U:suno to..

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Loved the update especially ManVeer 😍 Do continue soon!!:)
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hayeee...M-UV scene was jst awesome...loved it...😳 ...omg...M cries a lot...😛...anyways...loved the update...can't wait for next one...cont. soon dear!!! 😍
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i loved both parts...loved it...sorry i didn't reply on ur msg...but i was lil busy...ans i just send PM to all...okay...and yes upate soon...loved it!!
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Love feeling-give new birth..
Part-VII
Uday vry angry..
Pta ni bina puche kyn aai,uski himmat ko slam..my foot...
Main cal krta hu,maneger k pas aakhir wo keise?
Uday cell uthata h,wo dekhta h manyata ki 2mis.cals thi.
U:M ki mis cal,oh shit phr mere se mistake ho gai..god..
Unanti:dada,aapne manyata ko kya bola,wo roti hui gai h.
U:wo mujhse glti ho gai..
Un:usne apke phone pe phone kiya tha,bt aapne pic ni kiya,to usne ghr pe cal kiya tha,to dad ne bula liya..kl aapki koi imp.meeting h to ye files pe aapke imp.sign.chahiye the..isliye aai thi wo,kya dada,aap bi na...
Uday feel guilty..nd check d files,yes,kal mehta's company k 7th imp.meeting h..o shit..
Uday calng manyata..
Manyata apna phone dekhti h lekin pick ni krti uday ki cal..
U:oh,god..maine use kitna bol diya..kal ofice me bat kruga..

M:krte rhe cal,mujhe inse bat hi ni krni..kal ofice me bi inse ek shabd ni bolugi..pta ni apne aap ko kya smjhte h.vampire..ha ni to..

Dusri trf
Jagat jay date pe aye h..
Jagat:so my swtheart..kya order kru?
J:jo tum loge,tumne kha tha,ki tum mujhe apne ghr lejaoge apni family se milaoge..
Jagata:awww..ha lejauga na,apni family se bi milauga..
J:tumhari family me se bs ek member se milu hu..wo aruna ki b'day party me..un..
Jagat:ha,main unanti k 7th aya tha..bt jaldi hi main tumhein sb se milauga.tumhare dad kya krte h?
J(thout):kya bolu,itne rich admi se..aa,dad,buisnesman h..
Jagat(thout):thats grt,rich to h..
J:kya hua?
Jagat:nthng,tym fix kr rha hu,ki kb meet krau apni family se tumhein..chle ab..
J:ya,
Jagat:lekin aise hi,ek gud nyt kis to bnti h.
She s blushng,nd wo jagat k chick pe kis krti h.bye..

In morng..
Manyata ofice ja ri h,wo auto rukwati h,lekin koi auto ya rikshwa ni rukta..

Usi tym uday ki car bi jati h,nd uday car k mirror me se dekh leta h manyata ko..
U:stop d car..piche ko..manyata k pas car rukti h..
U:manyata,
Manyata dekhti h.nd make a angry face..
U:chalo,main ofice chod deta hu,main bi..
Suddn,manyata bolti h rikshwa..
Stop rikshwa..
M:bhaiya,aapko jitne paise lene h le lena,lekin plz chalo..
R:g mam,chaliye.
Manyata chali jati h,
U:chalo,driver tumbi..gud mrng bi ni bola usne..thik se dekha bi ni..of sb meri glti h..

Ofice dono ek 7th phuchte h..
U:manyata suno to..dekho mujhe pta ni tha,ki tumne kal mere pas cal ki thi..
Ok dis my mistake soo...
Mayata chli jati h..
M:chahe kuch bi ho jaye main ni bolugi,ek sory ni bola ja rha h duniya bhar ki bkwas kralo. U:ye to bat hi ni sun ri,wel,meetng k bad bat kruga..


manyata nd Uday dono ek 7th entered in a lift as
both were in hurry to reach to a
office. Manyata ghabrai njro se uday ko dekhti h,nd uday usse bat krne ki koshish krta h 'manyata suno to'. Suddenly lift got
struk nd lite trund off.
Hawww...ye kya ho gya?She
scared so much as dark all side
nd in hr fearness she hugged hm
instantly.manyata closed her eyes.uday
feel vry awkward on hr
suddn action. Warmth of her
body makes him more
uncomfortable. Her curves
touched hm in vry aroused way..
Reluctantly his hands moved on
hr soft waist.he hugged hr too..U:calm down its okk.
M:mujhe andhere se darr lagta
h.
U:dont worry i m with u.
Her body is so soft against
him.her chest rubbed against
him.suddnly he had a strong urge
to kissed hr but some how he
control over him.
Suddn lift chalne lgti h,or manyata jhatke se uday se dur khadi ho jati h.
Both feel incomfortable in lift..both silent..
Lift khulti h,manyata jaldi-2 nikal k chli jati h..

Maneger:sir,mehta sir aa chuke h meeting k liye.ok.
U:hmmm..chalo,sbko prestation hall me bulao..
M:ryt sir..
U:sry everyone,mujhe thodi deir ho gai.!
Uday manyata ko dhund rha h,bt wo wha ni h..
Maneger g manyata kha h?sir yha beitha h,or secertary gayeb h!
M:sir,wo manyata..
Sudden manyata cum..wo uday k side jake stand ho jati h..
Uday ka pura concentration manyata pe h,pr manyata idhr-udhr dekh ri h..
Mr.mehta:mr.uday meeting strt kre..
Uday 'no response'wo continue manyata ki trf dekhta h..
Mr.mehta bar-2 bolte h..bt no response..
All members disturb uday's behaviour..
M:inko kya ho gya,aise dekh rhe h mujhe,jeise abi mar dalege,main to bolungi ni ,keise kya kru??
Hmmm...manyata k hath me jo file h use wo gira deti h,uday k leg pe,to uday ka concentration break hota h.
Manyata file utha leti h..
U:to meeting start kre..
Start d meeting 'bt uday ka cncentration pe km manyata pe jyada tha'he s vry worried'
Mr.mehta:mr.uday aapke 7th shayed hi koi aisa hoga jo deal na krna chahe..Hm aapke 7th ye deal krege.congrats
U:thank u mr.mehta..same 2 u.

All ofice members hall me se chale jate h,manyata bi..
U:mujhe manyata se sory bolna hi pdega..main jaldi se jata hu.khin wo chali na jaye..
Uday in cabin 'maneger g manyata ko bhejiye'
M:bt sir,wo ja chuki hai,or ghr jane ka tym bi ho gya tha..sir.
U:wht,wo ghr gai..okay.u go.
Uday feel vry bad,depress wo preshan h...

Precap:manyata locked uday's cabin nd uday say'sry manyata'

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Yuppy first one to comment.cute...update n pliz pm me na.anyways nice one.now i cant wait.pliz continue soon.pliz pliz pliz pliz pm me sweetheart.

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