manveer SS- Love feeling:give new birth parts-3rd to50th(page-1 to 58) - Page 5

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Posted: 13 years ago
#41
loved it...i knew unzie wud forget 😆...and tht's y M and UV will fyt agn...uff...😛...so UV is falling fr M ha?? 😳...waiting fr the next part eagerly...update soon!!!! 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#42
waooo really nyc...plzzz do continue...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#43
wow its getting more n more interesting yar...pls update soon...n thanks 4 the pm...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#44
Hey nice one Pari.Cute n funny.cont soon n thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#45
Love feeling-give new birth
Part-XI.
Uday surprize 'ye sapna ni ye real me h yha'then suddn jaldi se wo use uthata h,lekin chuni uday k gle me hi h..
U:wht d hell?tum such me idhr ho..itni rat ko yha kya kr ri ho..kb aai,hmesha mujhe bina-btaye kyn aa jati ho.
M ne apna neck apne hath se cover kiya h,she s feel uncomfortble.
Wo turn bck le leti h.
U:ye bhoot bnke kyn khadi ho,jwab do
Shanti cum
'baba,tum aagye,ye kya hal bnaya h'
U:mere hal ki chodiye,phle ye btaiye ye ldki yha kya kr ri h..
Manyta cryng..she s always shocked ki ofice me kha tha pta h,unanti ne bi bta diya h to aisa behave kyn?
Un:dada,aap aagye,dada wo main btana bhul gai thi ki
U:wht manyata ye kr kya ri h idhr,agr sbko pta h to mujhe kyn ni pta..tumhara man kam me lgta ni,tum srf chilana,ghr-2 gumna janti ho.
M shouted 'bs bhut ho gya,main idhr apki bkwas sunne ni aai hu,mujhe koi shok ni h apke is mahel me rhne ka smjhe aap'
Gr cum'ye kya ho rha h,
U:dad,ye ldki..
Gr:ye ldki kya..GR sari bat btate h.. unanti apko btana bhul gai thi.
Uday ko phr apne aap pe gusa ata h,wo manyata ki trf dekhta h,or uski trf jata h.
Tbi manyata rote huye bolti'aap apne ko smjhte kya h,ye apna gusa apne pas rkhiye,meri mjburi h job krna,wrna main aap jeiso ki baatein kbi ni sunti.' mujhe ni rhna idhr,main ja ri hu,main party ki taiyari apne ghr se krlungi..
U:manyata.
M:meri chuni dijiye.
U:manyata
M:mera duptta dijiye,main idhr ek sec.ni ruk skti.
Uday apne neck me se duptta utar k use deta h..
M use leke roti hui,apne rum me chali jati h,apna saamn pck krti h..

Gr:uday ye bilkul glt kiya h apne,uski kya glti..
Un:dada,plz manyata ko rok lijiye..glti meri h maine ni btai thi apko..
Shanti:baba manyata bdi pyari bachi h,apne ander itni nfrat ya gusa mt rkhiye ki rishte bigad jaye..

Uday realize(thout) yes dis s my mistake..'mujhse phr glti ho gai,main hmesha, aisa kyn hota h?
Sudden manyata gusse me apna bag leke aati h..sb use rokte h bt wo ni manti then sudden uday bolta h
'manyata
M stop..
U:pta ni lekin meri glti hmesha aisi hoti h,jise kisi na kisi ka heartbreak ho jata h..lekin glti to insan se hi hoti h...mujhe kuch pta ni tha,ofice ka furstation tumpe utar diya..i m realy sry..plz mt jao..jo kam krne aai ho wo pura krke hi jana..agr tum chali gai to apne aap se najr ni mila pauga.
M apne bag ko chodti h,turn ghumti h...or uday ki trf dekhti h..
Or uday bi use dekhta h'ye meri glti thi,i m sory'bolke wo chla jata h.
S:manyata baby ka bag dubara unke rum me rkh do..
Gr:m beta uday bhut guse wala h,use ni pta hota wo kya krta h guse me..lekin tum use bdal skti ho.jo aaj maine dekha aaj se phle ni dekha.
Uday ne aajtk kisi se sry ni bola,lekin usne tumse bola.
M(cnfused,ki ye uncle kya kh rhe h):uncle,ek bar sir ne or sry bola tha mujhi se bola tha..ha ni to..
Ol launghng..
M:uncle jo bat gai use jane do..galti insan se hi hoti h.

Uday uper se wo manyata ki baatein sunke muskura rha tha..
Uday apne rum me apna court utarta h,to dekhta h court k button me manyata ki chunni ka tukda h..
U:ye to manyata ki chuni ka h.
M:us vamp.ki wjh se main hmesha dukh me hoti hu,meri chunni bi fad di..
U:meri wjh se hmesa,uske 7th aisa hota h..main gadha,ni gadha ni vampire hi hu..
M:ye sir pta ni keise bn gye,ye to ekdum gadhe,ni ni vampire h...

Jagat calng jay
J:main jis bdi party me ja rha hu,usme tumbi chalogi..
Jay:ofcourse,mujhe parties bhut pasnd h..
J:chalo,phr main,tum or party..
Dekho jyada sundr mt lgna,wrna main out of ctrl ho jauga..
Jay(thout):whi to main chahti hu,kuch glt kroage ni to tumhare ghrwale mujh garib ko mrs.sharma k rup me accept keise krege..
'ah,kya jagat tumbi na'chalo bye bad me bat krege...
Cal cut...

In nxt mrng
M:unanti tum mere 7th wo hall me chalogi?
Un:ha ofcourse,chalo phr jao ready ho jao..
M:ha thik h,main phle sir se bol du ki ofice ni jaugi...
Shanti 2 manyata
M:aunty uday sir kha h?
S:beta wo to mrng walk pe gye h,abi thodi dair me ajayega..
M:thik h aunty..
'ye pta ni kb tk ayege,main tb tk taiyar ho jati hu'

Uday aata h,aunty,mujhe plz mere rum me ek cup green tea bhijwadijiye...mujhe ofice jana h..
S:g baba..

Shanti coffee leke jati h,tbi manyata aunty sir aa..,ye beswad tea kiskeliye.
S:uday k liye le ja rhu hu.
M:aunty aap kyn,main lejati hu na..apni bat bi bol dungi.
Manyata tea leke aati h,wo door nock krti h.
U:cuming.
M:sir ye tea..
Uday shocked wo khada ho jata h..tum ye tea leke kyn aai ho.
M:sir wo mujhe aapse kuch bat krni thi.
U:kya.
M:main aaj ofice ni aaungi,wo main.
U:hyper me kyn,tumhare bina ofice me mera dil..
Both eyecntct..
M:main unanti k 7th monsaya hall dekhne ja ri hu.
Or sir list aap ko agar tym ho to rat ko to bnwa dena.
U:hm sham ko 3no ni chal skte?
M:ni sir,main-aap jha rhte h,wha panga ho jata h..to main akeli.
U make a irritate face 'ok fyn chali jao,lekin ye chutti srf aaj k liye'
M:thank u..wo chali jati h.
Uday akele keise kya dekhegi wo,mera tym ofice me keise..ye main kya soch rha hu..
Wo ek tea ki sip leta h 'ye kya bkwas tea bni h'iritate hoke wo nhane chala jata h.
M:chalo,aaj pure din is vamp. ki daant se bchugi.ha ni to.
Breakfast table pe.
Gr:sb h uday kha h?
Uday cum 'hy dad gud mrng.
Gr:g.m beta,aaiye nasta kijiye.
Wo M ko dekhta h wo breakfast kr ri h
Uska mood phr se of
'9 dad main ofice me hi kuch kha lunga'
Phr ekdum se M use dekhti h.
U:by,dad.M ko guse me dekhta hua chla jata h.
M:mujhe kyn aise dekh rhe h,or nashta bi ni kiya.
S:baba bi na achi trh jante h bahr ka khana unki health k lye aacha ni h,phr bi.M make a woried face.
Precap:both(U-M)sleeping in1rum on 1bed.

Pari
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Posted: 13 years ago
#46
Nice update 😊
Your SS is quite interesting and different.
Wow precap sounds interesting. Can't wait to read it. Update soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#47
thank u so much fia..
I m glad u lyk my stry...

Or ha jaldi nxt part milega.don't wory.

Pari
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Posted: 13 years ago
#48
Wow!! Really interesting!! For a change M is in UV's house!! Looking forward to next update
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Posted: 13 years ago
#49
oahhh..nyc...soo much of nok jhok...ahhahaha..dis is real manveer...hahahhah...plzzz update da next part as soon as possible...plzzz...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#50
Aww uday says sry to manyata ,dat was so cut ,precap sounds intresting

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