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Posted: 13 years ago
#21
luvd plss update d next part waitin 4 it ...
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how cute...reallly specially da one in da lift...n eagerly waiting 4 next part...
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loved it that wsa shooo sweet...update soon...thanks for the PM...loved it!!!
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Love feeling-give new birth..
Part-8th.

Uday apne rum me
Shanti cum-baba,ab apki tbiyet keisi h?
U:main thik hu aunty..
S:tum thode preshan lg rhe ho kya hua?
U:ni aunty,bs aise hi aaj ofice me din thoda muskil bhara tha..
Uday remember all ofice moment nd he(thout):kya ye main hu,maine kbi kisi ki itni fikr ni ki,main kbi kisi ko sry bolne ki jid ni ki,lekin mujhe kyn manyata ko sry bolna h..main kyn uski awaaz mis.kr rha hu..
S:baba,kha kho gye?aacha chalo ni btana to na shi,lekin koi bi dikkat ho to main hmesha apke 7th hu...
U:of oh aunty aap se koi bat chupai h kya.?

Manyata k ghr pe
Sb dinner kr rhey h,
Br:manyata beta job keisa chl rha?
M:ha,papa sb thik h,ofice,salary,ofice mamber sb bhut aache h...
Vijay:or boss keise h?
M:boss vijay bhai sir bi aache h..sho thout 'aacha kya h vampire h,jb dekho tb aankhe dikhata rhta h,bewajh daant deta h,lekin dekha jaye to unki bi koi glti ni h,aaj kuch jyada to ni ho gya,pta chle kal mujhe job se nikal..no,main kl sir se bat krlungi...ha ni to...
J:di,aapne kha tha,ki koi mr.frakin aa rhey h,or usi khushi me party denge aapke boss..wo party kb h?
M:ha j wo arrangment mujhe hi krna h,pr tu kyn puch ri h?
J:di mujhe bi le chalna,aapko to pta h parties kitni pasnd h hmein..
M:smile,nd chl main puch lungi apne boss se..
Unnanti cum uday rum:dada,aap so gye?
U:ni,bolo kya kam h? Un:main apki trh ni hu,ki kam k liye aau.bs aise hi bat krni thi...
U:kya?
Un:dada,aapne manyata ko sry bola..
U:ni..hmne koshish.
Un:kya,oh dada kal wo jyada hurt hui thi..
U:choti,hmene aaj koshish ki lekin usne hmse bat bat to dur h thik se dekha tk ni..
Main kal pkka use sry bol dunga..
Un:dada,ek bat btau,i m hapy 4 u..
U:pr kyn?
Un:aap change ho rhe ho..aapki zindgi me khushi aa ri h dada...
U:choti,ye kya bol ri ho?chlo ab tum jao,mujhe kal jaldi ofice jana h..
Un:ok dada...gud nyt..
Uday thout unanti words..
U:unanti kya shi kh ri h..main manyata ko sry msg krdeta hu..uday manyata ko 'i m sry'ka msg snd krdeta h..

Manyata cel me msg pdhti h 'i m sry'from vampire..
M:bolna to aata ni,msg krdiya..lekin aaj pure din maine bi to unki bat ni suni..main bi velli hu..
Nxt mrng...
Uday wake up nd phle wo apna cel check krta h,he s sad
Becoz manyata ka koi rply ni aaya hota..
U:ye ldki apne aap ko smjhti kya h?itna attitude...
Aaj ofice me dekhta hu,keise bchti h...

In ofice...
Manyata:mr.frakin k welcum k liye kya-2 arrangment krne,sir se puch leti hu..
Jau ki ni..apni jid chod manyata wrna jid k chakker sb bigad jayega...

Manyata uday k cabin me jati h,
M:may i cuming sir..
Uday dekhta h,nd say 'yes'..
M:sir,wo mr.frakin k welcum k liye...
Uday uski bat cut krta h...
'Tum apne aap ko kya smjhti ho..itni ghamandi kyn ho,main kal pure din tumse bat krne ki koshish ki,bt u ignore me,maine msg bi kiya,bt no rply'mtlb ye kya h..
Manyata phr se dar
jati h,sir,main thodi deir bad aati hu..jb apka mood thik hoga..
Manyata jane lgti h
Sudden uday stand hota h or khta h'no hm abi baatein clr krege' tumhein jwab dena pdega..

Lekin manyata ni sunti or jane lgti h,
Uday gusse me manyata ruko,wo jaldi se manyata ki trf jata h,uska hath pkdta h,or gusse se tej se apni trf khichta h..or wo manyata ko wall se touch kr deta h,or khud uske ekdum close hota h,gusse se use dekhta h,
Or apne cabin ka drwaaza bi lock krdeta h...
Manyata nd uday wo bhut close h,
Manyata apne aap ko save krne ki koshish kr ri h,or uday luked her..
U:kyn kr ri ho aisa?mujhe se bat kyn ni kr ri ho,meri bat kyn ni sun ri ho.?
M:aapko kya farq pdhta h mere bolne se ya na bolne se...
U:mujhe aadat..uday thout ye main kya bol rha hu..dekho main tumse sry bolna chahta tha...
Both luk each other..eye cntct me hi uday bolta h 'i m sry manyata galti meri thi.'
Manyata totaly lost in uday eyes..she's silent..nd uday also lost in manyata...
Sudden cabin me lyt chali jati h,
Break d eyecntct..
M:ye sir apke chaker me hmesha fsti hu,ye lyt chali gai,itna andhera mujhe dar lg rha h..
U:don't wory main hu na darne ki jrurt ni h...
M(dhire se):whi to problem h,ek andhera or uper se vampire.
U:kya kha tumne?
M:ku ku kuch ni sir,
Sir plz lyt lao,mujhe to kuch dikhai ni de rha h..
U:ha,main kuch krta hu,tum jake chair pe aaram se beth jao...

Uday calng maneger
U:ye lyt kyn chali gai?kya hua?
M:sir electrician ko bulaya h,1hour lgega sir..
U:ok,jaldi kro..

Manyata:keisa ftiture ofice h,lyt chali gai..
U:dekho tum daro mt,sb thik hojayega thodi deir me..
M(thout):lyt bi aapse darti h..

Kuch deir bad
U:tum thik to ho..?
Manyata no response...
Uday woried,manyata tum kha ho,plz idhr-udhr mt jana chot lgjayegi...
Again 9 response
Uday fuly woried.tnsn me h
Wo manyata-2 bulata h,manyata tum kha gai..oh shit ye ldki na.,

Ekdum se lyt aati h,
Uday dekhta h 'manyata so ri h wo bi uday ki chair pe'
Uday use dekhta h,tb uske chahre se dar,preshani,sb dur ho jata h..
Wo phr ek cute smile k 7th manyata ki trf jata h,or use dekhta h pyar se..
Wo apne hath ko manyata k chick pe le hi jata h ki manyata open d eyes 'lyt aa gai'
Uday ekdum se apna
Hath hta leta h..
M:thank u god..she s realize,main sir ki chair pe beithi hu...wo jaldi se uthti h 'sry sir wo andhere me ho gya'
Uday 9 response,wo srf manyata ko dekhta h..
M:sir main chalti hu,main kal discus krugi party k baare me...
U:ya,ok...
M:sir,aapke cabin ka drwaaza ni khul rha h..
U:ha wo locked h khol lo..
M(thout):locked,lyt bi ni thi,sb akal k aandhe h..bhaag manyata.

U smilng-ye ldki bi pagal h.krna khuch chahti h,ho kuch or jata h..
M:main bi pagl hu,krne kuch jati hu,krke kuch or aati hu.

Continue..

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#25
Nyc update and do pm me if possible
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Its just awesome Pari.cont soon n thanks for th pm sweetheart.
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nice update... that was sweet... thanks for the PM...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#28
dear Pari ,
i read all the parts together .
i lyked it very much . this SS i very nice
. plz pm me if possible
Uma
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wow nice update.pls continue soon n if possible could u pls pm me
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#30
Love feeling-give new birth.
Part-IX

Manyata 2 jay.
M:jay kya bat h aajkal bdi khoi-2 rhti h..koi mil gya h kya?
J:kya,di aisa kuch ni h..
VB:kuch to hai,j bhai.kya h wo secret jo aap btana ni chahti..
J:of,oh aisa kuch ni h,bs ek dost bn gya..jo meri bhut care krta h..bs
V:dost ya kuch or?
J:kuch or ni vijay bhai srf dost..
M:dost tk rhe to jyada aacha h,wrna wo bi khin dhoka na dede..
J:ni di,wo bhut aacha h,aap meri chodiye,mujhse jyada chahra to aapka khila h.
Vb:ye bat bi shi h,manyata bhai shining to apke face pe h.kya bat h?
M:ha,j pr se aake tumlog meri taang khincne lg gye,aisa kuch ni wo job ki wjh se khush hu...

M:aacha tum dono mujhe koi aacha banket hall ka nam btao,mujhe mr.frakin k welcum k liye sb taiyari krni h...
J:banket hall..pta ni di kal pta krke btate h..abi main chlti hu...
Vb:manyata bhai,banket hall h ek MONSYA nam ka,wo bhut bda h,wo aacha bi h...
M:aacha ye kha h.?
Vb:wo to ni pta lekin isme srf bde logo ki party,cermony hoti h..
M:chalo,thanku bhai main kal pta krlungi..or party isi me hogi..thanku bhai
Vb:welcum bhai!wo dono ek dusre ko hug krte h...

Unanti,gr,nd uday
U:mujhe tnsn ho ri h..mr.frakin ane wale h,or abi tk koi arrangemnt ni hui..
Gr:kiske hatho me ye kaman saupi h beta
U:dad,manyata k hath me..
Un:o,wow..tb to aap befikr rho dada...
Gr:unanti is ryt..
U(thout):pta ni keise kya kregi,mujhe kal usse bat krni pdegi...

In nxt mrng..
Manyata ready hoti h,tbi uday ki cal aati h..
M:ye mrng me kiska muh dekh k uthi thi,savre-2 iski cal 'hello,sir gud mrng'
U:gud mrng,jaldi ofice phucho,imp.kam h..
M:abi to tym h sir
U:main tumse puch ni rha hu,oder de rha hu..jaldi aao..
M:okay sir..cal cut..
Pta ni ab kha aag lgi,itni jaldi ofice.bhaag manyata wrna use to daatne ka mauqa chahiye...
All ofice members colect in prestation rum with uday nd all waitng manyata..
Manyata cum:sir,main aa jau?
U:ya cum,bhut jaldi aa gai,jha boss ka wait hona chahiye tha,wha employe ka wait ho rha h..
M:sry sir.
U:sit,to kha tk taiyari krli party ki.
M:party,o sir wo abi to kuch taiyari ni ki..
Uday khda hota h,or manyata ki trf ake aankhe dikha k 'ha to kb taiyari krogi,jb mr.frakin ake chle jayenge'.
M:ni sir wo..main kal isi topic pe...
U:party hall kaun sa buk kiya h..?
Main sb se kh deta hu,agr is party me kuch bi gadbd hui jiski wjh se to wo insan is company se nikal diya jayega..
Uday luked manyata nd say'chahe koi bi ho'manyata make a innocent face..
U:ha to hall kaun sa buk kiya h?jaldi btao..
M:wo yad krti h vijay bhai ne use jo nam btaya tha,wo dar k whi bol deti h sir 'MONSYA'HALL..
U:monsya,grt.nt bad..lekin tumhein andaaza bi h,ki ye kha h?wo hall is ofice se bi dur h..
M:sir,kuch aacha krne k lye,dur-pas ni dekha jata..
Uday silent nd hmm..okay..main bad me tumse milke discus krta hu..cum u my cabin.
M:ryt sir..

Ofice me unanti aati h..
Un:xcuse me ye manyata kha milegi.
Suddn manyata cum
M:unati tum yha?
Un:ya manyata tumse milne ka man kiya.bs isliye aa gai..or btao...
M:ah,meri ek hlp krogi..
Un:yes ofcourse dear bolo..
M:ye monsya hall kha h?
Un:monsya,wow ye Ye to hmare ghr k pas h..ofice se dur h.or bhut aacha bi h.weise tumhe kya kam hai..?
M:wo mr.frakin k welcum party k lye whi hall buk krna h mujhe..
Un:wow,thats grt..lekin itni dur tum keise..
M:whi to sochne wali bat h..sb arangment ghr ya ofice beithe to ni ho skta na..
Un:ek idea to h,jb tk wo party khtm ni ho jati tb tk tum hmare ghr me ruk jana..
M:tumhare ghr ni ni..
Phli bar ek hour k liye aai thi,to roti-2 gai thi,pure 10din k liye to pta ni kya-2 hoga..ha ni to.
Un:of,oh meri frnd bn k rh lena,ya ek guest bn k ya phr ek pein guest bn k..
Kam krne me easily rhega..
M:thik h sochugi,ghr me bi puchna pdega..
Un:ok fyn,jb sb ha krde tb tum mujhe btadena main tumhein pic krlungi.nd don't wory main tumhari hlp krugi..
M:thank u unanti...

Uday calng jagat
U:jagat tum mr.frakin ki party me jrur aana..infct usse phle..kb tk aaoge ye btao..
J:fyn yar,main puri koshish kruga aane ki,weise main apni ek frnd ko la skta hu..
U:yes,ofcourse..bt plz yar tum aa jana...
Cal cut...
M:sir,may i cuming..
Manyata luk vry tired nd worried h.
U:ha to apni list dikhao,kya-2 arangment kiye h..
M:sir,abi wo wo list ni bnai..
U:wht,tum kya chahti ho,wo party aachi ho ya na ho..khne ko 10-11din h,lekin jo hall tumne buk kiya h us hall ka arangment krne me ye din bi km h..tum itni easily,halke me ye sb keise...
Uday dekhta h manyata is cryng..
Uday use hainki deta h,'ye lo aasu poch lo'
Manyata pic d hainki or aasu saaf krti h..
U:kya problem h..dekho ghabrao mt main hu na,sb ho jayega..
M:sir,maine kbi parties arange ni ki,mujhe thik se ni pta kya-2 keise hoga.or internationl parties to...
U:ok,main tumhein sb btadunga,tum apni list bna lena...or uske bad bi koi hlp chahiye to btadena...
M:thank u sir..ha sir boliye'main abi list bna leti hu'
U:okay,likho bt sudden he thout 'manyata mrng se ofice me kam kr ri h,tired bi lg ri h'
Manyata tumne lunch kiya.
M(thout):hy bhagwan,khin kisi behrupiye k saamne to ni bethi..aaj inka nature kuch alg h..'no sir abi ni khaya'
U:tum ek kam kro,ghr jao,hm kal ye kam krege.
M:ni,ni sir..sb thik h..
U:irritate face bnake tumhein ek bar meri bat smjh ni aati kya?
M:dar k khadi ho jati h,sir main jati hu.manyata turn d face nd dhire-2 bolti h 'ye vamp. kb bhdak jaye pta ni hota,ye behrupiya ni,ye whi h!ha ni to.
U:tum chup-2 ni ja skti,wrna main ise jyada bura vamp. bn skta hu.
M:yes sir,haww sunliya..wo smile krke chali jati h.
Nd uday also smilng.
Precap:manyata 10days k liye uday k ghr pe rhegi.

Pari

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