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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: saneha85

Hey Jazzy amaging update... kindly share ur next FF link piz

thank you dear
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Originally posted by: Aniram

Hey amazing chapter waiting for the nextchapter update soon please

thanks dear
will surely do
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update i loved it update soon
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Originally posted by: sameerakoppikar

awesome update i loved it update soon

thanks dear😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
please update soon do you the exact day when u will update like tommorrow or dayafter
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Chapter 27

Uday:oh wow!apna rishta todhne yaha tak aa gayi tum, ya fir koi naye rishte ki bhik maangne

M:u r disgusting!!

Uday:tumhe aaj pata chala, jab pata hi chal gaya hai toh let me tell u the whole scenerio

He moves around manyata in a circle

Uday:lets begin,humne tumse pyaar karne ka natak kiya, u know why becoz u were an easy step for the estate of devgarh and a very easy way to secure the powerful throne in mahasabha. But ab tum humare kisi kaam ki nahi, kyunki ab devgarh itna bhi powerful nahi raha. Aur tumhari jaan bachate bachate hum khud ko khatare mein nahi daal sakte afterall humme bhi toh apna future dekhna hai. Aur ab toh hum mahasabha ki kisi bhi yuvrani se shaadi kar le toh humare paas do riyaste ki takat toh hogi hi aur hum safe bhi honge. Aur tumhare ye drame bhi sehne nahi padenge.

M:bas yuvraj udayveer singh bas. Bohot keh liya tumne aur bohot sunn liya humne ab aur nahi.

Uday:toh tumhe bolna bhi aata hai.

M:haan aur faisle lena bhi, ab ye humara faisla hai ki aaj hum ye rishta todte hain.

Uday(clenching his teeth)darwaaza uss taraf hai.

M:jaa rahe hai hum tumhari zindagi se humesha humesha ke liye.

Uday:atlast, time for celebration has arrived.(making a drink for himself) cheers to me.

M:tum kabhi humare layak hi nahi the.

Uday:tumhare ye drame band ho gaye ho toh darwaza uss taraf hai.

Manyata left his room in anger and heartbroken state.

******-------------******

Maya was in her room giving an evil smirk, and watching udayveer on the LCD screen.

Maya:so sorry uday darling, but humme confirm karna tha ke tum aur manyata sach mein alag hue ho ya nahi, isliye humne ye CCTV camera lagwaya.

But ab hum dono ke bich koi nahi aa sakta koi bhi nahi. I love u uday. Ab tum sirf mere ho sirf mere.

*******-------------*******

uday was on the terrace watching the stars. Manyata was walking by the road alone and crying silently,

(imagine this song playing in background)

Inn galiyon ko inn raaston ko
Hum toh tanha chhod chale
Ishq Mein Ruswaa Ruswa hoke chale
Ishq Mein Ruswaa Ruswa hoke chale
Teri mehfil se ruswa hoye!
Teri mehfil se ruswa hoye!
Ishq Mein Ruswaa Ruswaa hoke chale
Ishq Mein Ruswaa Ruswaa hoke chale

(manyata remembers uday's harsh words he said to her on the previous days)

Woh tera chhod ke chale jaana
Tere bin mushqil jee paana
Yun humein tarsa naa
Aa bhi jaa, chhod de tadpana

Inn galiyon ko inn raaston ko
Hum toh tanha chhod chale
Ishq Mein Ruswa Ruswaa hoke chale

Teri mehfil se ruswa hoye
Teri mehfil se ruswa hoye
Ishq Mein Ruswa Ruswaa hoke chale
Ho.. Ishq Mein Ruswa Ruswaa hoke chale

(she walks and reaches to the gazebo where they both has confessed their love for each other)

Ishq pe daag naa lag jaaye
Fasla aur naa badh jaaye
Saans naa ruk jaaye...
Aa bhi jaa der naa ho jaaye
Inn galiyon ko inn raaston ko
Hum toh tanha chhod chale
Ishq Mein Ruswa Ruswaa hoke chale

Teri mehfil se ruswa hoye
Teri mehfil se ruswa hoye

Ishq Mein Ruswaa Ruswaa hoke chale

(plz litsen this song, here is the link of it

http://youtu.be/0cMMl8xcp8c)

The gazebo was not so delighted as before, yet she remembers all of the curtains and flowers surrounding her.

She brakes down and cries a lot when a hand consoles her but supporting her.

So friends any guesses who's hand is this or who is this mystery person.

Guys I know this was too short but I m trying to give as much updates as possible before I leave and that also without pics.

So forgive me.plz forgive me friends

Plz do hit like and comment.

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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice one girl!!!
Hmm maybe its uday or akash!!
It was a nice update!!
Edited by Gowri05 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Gowri05

Nice one girl!!!

Hmm maybe its uday or akash!!
It was a nice update!!

thanks dear
keep guessing
u would know it soon😃😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow awesome update.Short but but but awesome.hehe n kaha seh aisey songs lati ho Jazzy.seriously nice song.n that person hmmm...maybe
1.Uv(dont know)
2.Majnu(adad seh majboor)
3.Vj bhai(Unnati ko dhoondney ayi hogi)
4.Salman,Hrithik,Sharukh(nahi yeh nahi)jaiseydikhney valey koi larka.
5.ummm 4 main seh koi hehe:p
just kidding dear.dont know yeh person koun hai so issiliye apni stupid dimaag chala rahi hoo...so cont soon:)

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Posted: 13 years ago
thats a nice update Jazz:) and the song selection is superb..its one of my favorites too:) and woh mystery man kahi Akash toh nahi??i hope im wrong...

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